| #1 loserboye (24.66.200.212.ab.wave.home.com)[21831] |
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1st comment YA
very nice BR
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| #2 [z]RubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[21832] |
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| Dispite the fact that this looks good, this is far from what you'd expect if you just skim the report, looking for a pretty picture. A good picture is no substitute for a great writing style, I'd suggest working onit a lot, becuase I was bored after reading the first few lines =[ |
| #3 Snowreaver (206.152.157.250)[21839] |
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| My god.. a report where a protoss beats a terran. |
| #4 Archie (landrum-06.cst.GaSoU.edu)[21841] |
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Good BR, just use spell check next time for Gods sake.
8.5 |
| #5 Omnipresent (170.182.91.159)[21842] |
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| I thought the br was well done. Sure it's not YRM caliber, but it deserves compliments, ESPECIALLY for a first br. Nice job. |
| #6 Dark~Ferret (fw5500.twtradepublishing.com)[21843] |
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<FONT FACE="Tahoma" SIZE=4><P>Good Report! It shows you put much effort and time into crafting your images; you placed your images well, so that I got a nice idea of the attack sequences. However, it also shows you put little time in on your writing. Forget style for now, just write short, complete sentences – I got confused by all the typos and incomplete sentences. Luckily, you image work showed the story nicely.</P>
</FONT><FONT FACE="Algerian" SIZE=6 COLOR="#800080"><P>And wrap some html around that text to make it look nicer.</P>
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| #7 Dark~Ferret (fw3000.twtradepublishing.com)[21844] |
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| See what rushing does? I even put a typo in my commmmment b/c I rushed - LOL |
| #8 [z]RubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[21847] |
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| ferret, please stop using HTML in every single comment/forum post, it gets really annoying looking at the big white letters trying to read it. |
| #9 Evire!! (ip31.king-of-prussia.pa.pub-ip.psi.net)[21848] |
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| Good reports are of good games. |
| #10 Dialtone_ (athe530-g115.otenet.gr)[21849] |
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| Yeah,i know,my writing sux.I spent way too much time on pictures when i should be trying to improve the text.Also a "bad speller" warning was on the first picture :).I think i'll try and write a couple of non-pictures reports to see how well i'll do. |
| #11 Drefsab (rc40.Rmax1.globalsite.net)[21855] |
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Dialtone, it was a good first report. I can tell that you spent a lot of time on the pictures. Echoing the other comments though, you need to work on the writing. Keep writing though, its good to see that you put so much time into your first report, you can only improve from here :-)
Dref |
| #12 Psionic_jedi_ (1Cust127.tnt7.poughkeepsie.ny.da.uu.net)[21865] |
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| Nice br about that game. Anyways, praetor later used his zerg and wiped me out without trying, so I improved my strats vs. zerg and toss. I've been getting screwed a lot lately. *SIGH*. Oh well, my zerg strats improved about 10x, and is now extremely difficult to stop. I just have to work on my toss strats now, because I just lost about 3 tossvtoss in a row, and I'm pissed. |
| #13 Psionic_jedi_ (1Cust127.tnt7.poughkeepsie.ny.da.uu.net)[21866] |
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| Oh, and I didn't random. I switched to toss, like I always do. |
| #14 w00t! (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[21867] |
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| One word: Spellcheck! |
| #15 Morphy's ghost (98A946DD.ipt.aol.com)[21897] |
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| One thing no one else mentioned is that this report just screams for some introductory writing. With a report as graphics heavy as this one, you REALLY need to give the reader something to read while the pictures download. Sure the pictures are nice, but I want something to do in that 2 minutes it takes to display them.... Never START a report with an image!!!! |
| #16 SnowSquall (a1-1a052.neo.rr.com)[21925] |
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| I agree, better writing, and your future reports will move into the "wowzers" category. Everyone likes to bring up YRM, but the reason why his reports did rock so hard was because he writes extremely well and it's very much like reading a story. |
| #17 psionic_jedi_ (1Cust140.tnt6.poughkeepsie.ny.da.uu.net)[21954] |
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| oh, shutup, retards. Give him a break, this is his first br. You wish you made brs this good |
| #18 IceKiller (207.124.94.70)[21970] |
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I agree with Psionic_Jedi...
Stop the crap, it was a good br, considering that its the first one.
So, get lost!!
Att.
IceKiller
Terran "Kick Butts" Commander |
| #19 ZerG~LinG[132983] |
| p416-028.ppp.get2net.dk |
| omg im so sexy here in dialtone comments sextion. |
| #20 wakiki[154706] |
| cable-68-186-201-180.mtv.al.charter.com |
Keke, good pictures. Bleh writing :|
LAST LOL OMG! |
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