| #1 kakaru[29548] |
| c1015460-a.htfdw1.ct.home.com |
woo 1st comment =)
huk |
| #2 Decimator[29554] |
| static-60.itcanada.com |
WOW!!!!!
AMAZING!
It's long, but the writing skill is awesome.
10 |
| #3 Decimator[29556] |
| static-60.itcanada.com |
PS it goes Terran - Zerg - Protoss right?
Like the originality |
| #4 Dr.Qwerty[29566] |
| cr352974-a.crdva1.bc.wave.home.com |
| brilliant |
| #5 goze007[29575] |
| ABDBCE4B.ipt.aol.com |
| You should put out a book... mucho dinero... :) |
| #6 sKoZaK~pRoZaK[29592] |
| 24.65.14.170.bc.wave.home.com |
hey, its more great starcraft fiction... wheres EMS????
=]
PeacE |
| #7 KGB_Infiltrator[29603] |
| 213.197.1.24 |
| Hey. that was pretty cool! cant wait to see part 2! |
#8  [29611] |
| fjwilson.reshall.ucsd.edu |
| EXCELLENT! My only gripe would be that you fail to follow the Blizzard storyline exactly (dark templar aren't with Tassadar yet, no BW units, Kerrigan is still unknown), but it still kept me very interested! |
| #9 dislekcia[29614] |
| netcache1.is.co.za |
ooooh, great stuff!
I suppose Ducky really pissed ya off ;)
I agree with Prae in that I feel it would be a lot better (10 material) if you continued to use your own names as opposed to Blizzard standards. Names like Noro are unique, and make your story truly yours. It's also easier to relate to the characters if the names are unfamiliar: Tassadar is dead in my mind...
Anyway, keep writing man, I saw you had a good style that previous BR... Now we need ducky to rip this off and you'll write us an 11 ;)
-dislekcia |
| #10 Dagomar[29625] |
| static-47.itcanada.com |
Good that you liked it!
I tried to make it follow Blizzard storyline:
This is just before Tassadar goes off to kill the overmind, and he and Zeratul go to make this strike against Mar Sara. Kerrigan has JUST been born, and the first devourers have just been created. Next time it will have all original names, however =)
And yes, dislekcia, I did do this because of Rubber Ducky; let's hope he'll slander this and I'll get some inspiration for number two =) |
| #11 the_dark_templar[29629] |
| 207.28.97.101 |
| Awesome story!! Great charactors, realistic emotions, and great desctiptive detail |
| #12 [29638] |
| fjwilson.reshall.ucsd.edu |
| Ah, but in that case, Mar Sara has already been destroyed, and both templar armies (Tassadar and Zeratul) are fighting Kerrigan on Char. |
| #13 [nh]SSD4[29646] |
| user___4.nf.sympatico.ca |
Well Uh... You need to use LESS adjectives.
That's my 2cents, later
nice work |
| #14 BigRatTesticles[29667] |
| dialupQ250.ptld.uswest.net |
| I thought it was sweet....actually it kicked ass. I agree with just a few less adjectives...but still without a doubt a big 10!! I cant wait to see the next one with all original names!! |
| #15 Wedge88[54258] |
| m4bhSs6n10.midsouth.rr.com |
Yes, Mar Sara was destroyed before Star Craft the game. The toss destroyed the planet to kill the zerg there, unfortantly they killed the terran outpost there as well. This led to hatered toward the toss by the terrans.
ahh well, still nicely written.
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| #16 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[68491] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
whoa, looking back on this, this was very, very well done. Woohoo!
Mar Sara could have been recolinated . . . as i hypothesized here . . . ;)
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| #17 “brc” 020[100463] |
| async16-2.remote.ualberta.ca |
| still trying this rater tag thingie |
#18  [100464] |
| async16-2.remote.ualberta.ca |
| test number 2 |
| #19 brc20[100785] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112429.sympatico.ca |
| still going strong |
| #20 brc 020[100786] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112429.sympatico.ca |
| :( |
| #21 "brc"020[100787] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112429.sympatico.ca |
| gah |
| #22 brc020[100788] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112429.sympatico.ca |
| I really don't know why this doesn't work anymore |
| #23 brc021[100789] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112429.sympatico.ca |
| hux |
| #24 brc019[100790] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112429.sympatico.ca |
| hux |
| #25 [112831] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112523.sympatico.ca |
| . |
| #26 titans-thesoby[117953] |
| station4.govwentworth.k12.nh.us |
| dag dont be a dick head to me anymore |
| #27 LuckyNewbie:P[118354] |
| dialup-64.156.35.246.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| by the time you read this, he'll be gone |
| #28 ZerG~LinG[120238] |
| p418-120.ppp.get2net.dk |
| omg hi |
| #29 [121369] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112560.sympatico.ca |
| hackers |
| #30 LuckyNewbie:P[145914] |
| 12-252-246-40.client.attbi.com |
| Dag's a fag... tubgirl... must... not... think... |
| #31 Decay[148219] |
| 66.44.173.134 |
| haha other people read old stuff GG |
| #32 wakiki[150134] |
| cable-68-184-58-201.mtv.al.charter.com |
| Awesome. |
| #33 Nrj[DM][153987] |
| asshbm1.gymf.molndal.se |
WTF? Is this a br, or is it a novell? If a novell, great! If a br, I dont understand a fucking word... But, I hope to wiew part 2 very soon.
:D |
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