| #1 Inadequate[35262] |
| clt-pxy01.firstunion.com |
| 1st!!! |
| #2 Inadequate[35263] |
| clt-pxy01.firstunion.com |
Read it...
You should have someone proofread your text. Decent work, but I think you can do better. |
| #3 <font color="blue">[S]Ghost</font>[35265] |
| dialin132.eagle.ca |
Thx for replies. Its only my first one
:) |
| #4 -=DarkHawke=-[35268] |
| 209.128.34.1 |
Proper english when writing a report please.
It isn't " An [s]ghost report ". It's A Ghost report.
An goes with a vowel coming up.
" An egg was dropped ".
" A bat was thrown. ". It would be IN-correct to say An bat because B isnt a vowel.
So use spell check, and remember :
A - Constant
An- Vowel
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| #5 SCVTHEDESTROYER[35272] |
| spider-ti013.proxy.aol.com |
Beautiful!! Nice Report!!
I love the Part where I win!
A little too short. but otherwise that and grammar errors it i fine. By the way "Drunkin_ling" it my friends name and Ghost u forgot to mention the part where )-10(_?": said I was a hacker because i could see where his ols where and when he expanded. It's called "scouting".
Cheers,
SCVTHEDESTROYER |
| #6 Sp|nE[35277] |
| dialup0228-pri.voicenet.com |
| darkhawke commenting on a br and NOT bragging about how he just owned someone? wow, my lamer poll must have really struck a nerve |
| #7 probe[35305] |
| 242849hfc183.tampabay.rr.com |
| nah spine, its one of your gay friends smurfing again ^^ |
| #8 Lord Venom[35316] |
| sj-isp-nat-pool-2.cisco.com |
Nice report!
7.0 |
#9  [35317] |
| sj-isp-nat-pool-2.cisco.com |
Pretty good, except for the grammatical parts.
8
Dref |
| #10 drunkin_ling[35356] |
| spider-tq043.proxy.aol.com |
HACKER!!!!! HACKER!!!!! hmmmmmm
Yeahawwww |
| #11 [S]Ghost[35357] |
| dialin117.eagle.ca |
anyone know how to make words go sideways off the creen with html?
plz write it here |
| #12 <font color=blue>Admiral</font><font color=lime>Plinko</font>[35363] |
| clarc-dhcp-126.cc.rochester.edu |
Your pictures are broken and the report didn't seem that great without them. And you deleted the one where I got first comment. That's an automatic 1. Actually Johnny deleted it, but I don't want to get banned so I'm yelling at you instead.
And DarkHawke, it looks really bad if you correct someone's grammer and screw it up yourself. "A" goes before a consonant, not a constant. |
| #13 Inadequate[35414] |
| fw42019-pc.uncc.edu |
Also, Darkhawke, the letter "s" should indeed have an "an" before it.
Why? Because it starts with a vowel sound (the "eh"), just like you would say "an hour" even though hour starts with a consonant. |
| #14 Meph[35415] |
| 192.138.110.222 |
Hum...
I didn´t see any pics...did someone?
Anyway I think it was rather nice...
Zerg v Zerg on Dire is a quite a fun thing to watch unless Mutalisk - Mutalisk fight...
That´s my opinion anyway
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| #15 PsIoNiC~ZeRgLiN[35436] |
| sdn-ar-002nypougP094.dialsprint.net |
PROTOSS OWN ALL OF YOU-sorry, just had to say that.
ZERG VS ZERG SUX!! |
| #16 [35450] |
| ABE112EB.ipt.aol.com |
Yay, my first impersonator (<i>Notice comment #9</i>). God help me if I ever use the phrase "except for the grammatical parts". Sheesh...
Anyways, since is your first report I will give you some tips. Take them how you want as these are simply my opinions.
1) Zerg vs. Zerg usually makes a boring report.
2) Details are so important. More details.
3) Crop your pics a little and work on your HTML. Wrapping text around your pics will make your report look more professional.
4) Try to report close games, not total beatdowns. The winner doubled the losers score in this one.
That's all I've got. Keep it up, with some improvements, I'll give you gold next time... :-)
6
Dref |
| #17 SMacK[35514] |
| ppp-110.BIL.cableone.net |
| <marquee behavior="slide" bgcolor="#000000" width="533" height="55" loop="1" scrollamount="7" scrolldelay="10" style="font-family: American Uncial; font-size: 36pt; border-style: dotted">Ok myfriend this should be what your looking for...........Nice Report, but what happened to pics.....................errrrrr k Laterz..........i'm out.</marquee> |
| #18 [35515] |
| ppp-110.BIL.cableone.net |
(((<marquee behavior="slide" bgcolor="#000000" width="533" height="55" loop="1" scrollamount="7" scrolldelay="10" style="font-family: American Uncial; font-size: 36pt; border-style: dotted">Good
k Match</marquee>)))) ok this is how you do it but it didn't werk |
| #19 SMaCk[35516] |
| ppp-110.BIL.cableone.net |
marquee behavior="slide" bgcolor="#000000" width="533" height="55" loop="1" scrollamount="7" scrolldelay="10" style="font-family: American Uncial; font-size: 36pt; border-style: dotted">D
ã R k A r ç h Ó n/marquee ok this better show up this time or i will be pissed |
| #20 [35517] |
| ppp-110.BIL.cableone.net |
| hey < > go around the marquee's but when you add them and post it doesn't scroll.......don't have a clue y that is.............damn it...............sorry bout all these posts |
| #21 D$^Gob_X[35558] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hope you all die cuz i'm a banana fuckea |
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