| #1 Limp_Bizkit666[45844] |
| PPPa73-ResaleLosAngelesMetro13-3R7114.saturn.bbn.com |
Yall better like this..
hehehee
byeya
p.s-1010101001010101010101001011 =]!
oh yeah, FIRST COMMENT! |
| #2 DivvyO[45845] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
| OMGay Limp stopped spamming the forum long enough to write a report ^^ |
| #3 DivvyO[45846] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
| Now that I read the dang thing, you crazy kids need to stop reporting runovers. It's better than the "I spanked this d00d on '$$$$$$BGH$$$$$$ BY CLAN G@Y v2.3' in 3 hours" but hey, I guess that's just me. Maybe I should make a clan G@Y ... hmm ... thoughts are brewing ... |
| #4 Limp_Bizkit666[45847] |
| PPPa73-ResaleLosAngelesMetro13-3R7114.saturn.bbn.com |
Dude, i have not seen you, but if you have paid attention, or read my previous BRs on this series, youwill find out that this is TOUNAMENT!
therefore, i even claimed, that it is a runover first few rounds..
it is only the third round in 6 round competition..
k? i tried to cover bad gamestory by planting a good (hopefully) storyline...
if it was too gay a game, i'm sorry, DivvyO. i was the battlereporter for tao-tourny that day, and i'm obligated to BR...
byeya
p.s-hmmm... a "real" game is coming soon. =] |
| #5 Blue~Devil[45849] |
| dialups-200.palmer.mtaonline.net |
The Report was very nice(and u said i have no constructive critsim[sp?]). heh
Blue~Devil |
| #6 Baxter-O'Bixby[45850] |
| adsl-63-195-119-107.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| GAY! But I look forward to the next one (and these reports are getting better, little by little).... |
| #7 DivvyO[45852] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
| Ack. Meesa forget. Tournament. Apologies sent. Meesa have no knowing of these-a tournaments. DivvyO one of the non-popular lurking dumbasses of br.com. Who says I don't pay attention ? I pay attention all the time. I swear. And I am not void man. |
| #8 <b><font color=yellow>Protophobic</font><b>[45854] |
| cm-24-161-0-73.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>Limp, you've really been cranking out the br's lately. good job. they all are more or less high quality too. |
| #9 Limp_Bizkit666[45855] |
| PPPa73-ResaleLosAngelesMetro13-3R7114.saturn.bbn.com |
hehe, thanks dudes..
"more or less" heheeheehee
oh well, i'll try harder next time, so that it will me "more"...
DivvyO, thanks for the apologies...hehehee.. yer dope!
ohwell, baxter is saying stuff more than "gay", and that's a good sign..
byeya
p.s-next one is coming shortly as well... =] |
| #10 DFA[45858] |
| CMB3A030-0581.splitrock.net |
Like whoa. i didn't know these were actual battle reports..
lol
I thought it was just soome gay grandpa telling stories.. ahwell, guess i'll go back and read the other ones..heh
but reading this one it was a good report, little one sided but it's a tourny so it's all good! keep it up
DFA |
| #11 Divvyo[45859] |
| proxy2-external.ym1.on.home.com |
The grandpa shit is soooo gay!
Gay Fag! u deserve a -1 :) |
| #12 DivvyO[45862] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
| I never thought I'd get popular enough to get a poser. How sweet .... awwwwwwwwe. To paraphrase Sammy Sosa, "It's so gaaaaaaaay" |
| #13 Mogalin[45863] |
| co853273-a.foti1.on.wave.home.com |
| DIE BOLD REPORT AHHH IT BUUUUURNS |
| #14 S^O[45869] |
| spider-wj042.proxy.aol.com |
| Damn, if only this series had come out a month ago, i wuda voted for it for best series......oh well, the book idea is preetyy good, and this deserves a 9.5 cause limp is cool |
| #15 [68]unknown[45896] |
| 209.128.34.1 |
Limp is cool for a newbie! ya. Nice battle reports, but battle report exciting games!
Make text more interesting, more pictures.
<font color="blue"> <center><h1><b>7.5</b><i>!!!!</i><center> |
| #16 BW-sux[45908] |
| spider-tm031.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice report. What font did you use? |
| #17 Limp_Bizkit666[45928] |
| whv-ca3a-220.rasserver.net |
the initial fonts were Times Roman, but the supposed BOOK text was comin sans MS....
oh well....
thanks dudes....
oh well..... [68] = wierdo =]
hehe, i'lll try to do better next time...i thought my text was pretty good. =[ i guess not good enough for ya.
round 4 is coming up soon...so gets yer hopes up!
byeya
p.s-FYI, a little sneak peak to round 5, features [9]NTT =] |
| #18 [45929] |
| as530090.infocom.com |
Okay, I know I'm not an english teach Limp, but you really need to work on your writing. Take your time, read through what you write slowly and ask yourself, "Does each sentence make sense?" Here's some examples of sentences that threw me off:
"<i>A smell of an old paper flings to their nostrils</i>"
"<i>Ares' overload ran in fear of soon-to-come mutalisks from catching it.</i>"
"<i>As hydralisks came out to being from the DS' lairs, they sent them behind their mineral lines, deterring any drops/flyers for their own good.</i>"
You had some good screenshots and I liked the font you used but the game itself was pretty disappointing. It was quite obvious that DS totally owned outright.
I'll have to go with a 7 on this one.
Cheers,
Dref |
#19  [45930] |
| as530090.infocom.com |
Hmm, where'd my name tag go :(
Dref |
| #20 AgentN[45932] |
| spider-tn073.proxy.aol.com |
I have to agree with Dref on this one...it was good, but you screwed up on a few places with imcomplete fragment sentences^^
7
Ciao
The Agent |
| #21 Limp_Bizkit666[45933] |
| whv-ca3a-220.rasserver.net |
uh, sorry about my style of writing...the thing is, when i write, i write straight from my head... therefore, when i write, i sometimes i miss out on what i THINK i wrote, but in actuality, i did not write..
just to help you out on what i was TRYING to say in those messed up sentences, here are the revised ones... sorry again.
1. "The repugnant smell of dried up paper flung towards their (kids) nostrils"
2. "The overlord took on a head-start in fear, because it knew the soon-to-come mutalisks were able to catch it in no time"
3. "As hydralisks came into existence from each DS' lairs, the commanders sent their hydralisks to their mineral lines, stopping any drop attemps and/or flyers from messing with their precious income"..
I know i have some bad habits of writing, and i usually do not reread my stuff....
next BR, i'll try much harder, and even re-read them =]
well, a "7"... i thought it was better than the last BR that i wrote, but you are the boss, Dref....
byeya
p.s-hehe, i have three gold reports in the last 10! =] |
| #22 {Grim}Strike[45936] |
| shingleppp76.netsync.net |
Yay! alt-text! :D
hehe. i understand that this is a tournament, but i wish you could take the extra time with your BRs to make em good enough for a 9 or so :(. as it stands you end up rushing them and (although still good) i think the quality ends up suffering. keep it up tho! Hope they can save Ryan's Privates...
-{Grim}Strike |
| #23 [45937] |
| as530090.infocom.com |
I didn't rate your last report... :P
How bout this?
"As the boys opened the book, the repugnant smeel of dried up paper drifted out."
"The overlord started back to base in a hurry, knowing that the mutalisks would easily be able to overtake him if he hung around for too long."
"As the hydralisks morphed into existence, their commanders ordered them to their respective mineral lines to watch for drop attempts or fliers."
Those are just suggestions, but I think they flow better.
Definitely reread your report before you release them. I usually reread mine three or four times and each time through I usually find more sentences to edit.
Hope this helps,
Dref |
| #24 Limp_Bizkit666[45940] |
| whv-ca3a-220.rasserver.net |
thanks a lot, Dref...
i'm about to start on my round4 games, so i will keep that in mind...
thanks...
byeya
p.s-hmm..who rated my last BR??? fls? |
| #25 Marie47[46044] |
| std183.dorms6.macalester.edu |
| I like Grandpa and the boys. As you said, it's something to break up the onesidedness of the battles so far. Keep it up:D |
| #26 Krebster[46130] |
| spider-we012.proxy.aol.com |
| this report is dope ;/ |
| #27 [46701] |
| AC8E684E.ipt.aol.com |
| I SuCk. So dO oThErS lIkE nEwBiEs!¿!?!¿!?!¿!? |
| #28 Homy_F8[46765] |
| user-33qtgoc.dialup.mindspring.com |
| DADDYSAYSMOMMYISAHORSEORSOMETHINGCAUSESHEFUCKEDBOB. I didn't even look at the BR, just like these LITTLECOMMENTSATTHEBEGINNINGOFMYSUGGESTIONS. |
| #29 Limp_Bizkit666[46844] |
| cerebus.smc.edu |
wtf?
the guy on top of me is wierd.. (no, not literally, i do not have guys on top of me... only below.) =]
byeya
p.s-i need more comments. |
| #30 Limp_BIzkit666[49875] |
| 204.140.185.225 |
COMMENT 30!!!
WHEEE
byeya
p.s-omg, i must be bored. bleh |
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