| #1 PeonSanders[49606] |
| cm-24-25-142-118.nycap.rr.com |
| OMFG - please stop!!! |
| #2 bob barker[49607] |
| user-2inig14.dialup.mindspring.com |
| This is the shittiest Story ive ever read. Pure Crap. |
| #3 Belt[49631] |
| p121.netwood.net |
| I apologize for the inconvenience I have caused to your community. I pledge that I shall never post another story again. I shall just be another ordinary reader. |
| #4 Viper$[49641] |
| spider-tf012.proxy.aol.com |
Top 5 YES!!
I liked this story so the rest of you just STFU. Now I'm going to head over and read the second half. And belt ignore these idiots and keep writing(just not so much all these stories are starting to give me a migrane)
Terrans own |
#5 [49654] |
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Personally I feel bad that this new poster is taking such abuse. His storied are pretty good actually. Nice descriptions of character and such. He just had a little problem with the formatting that's all.
Your welcome to post more Belt. Please ignore all the flames from the community. |
| #6 Homy_F8[49703] |
| user-33qth50.dialup.mindspring.com |
| The top 2 fuckers didn't even read the report, just saw it was long and had bad formatting. Nice writing and fuck them, keep it up... |
| #7 The Mad Clown[49840] |
| spider-wn012.proxy.aol.com |
Excellent, extremely well written. One of the best Starcraft Stories I've ever read. :)
Hardly any grammar or spelling errors.
Keep it up,
the mad clown |
| #8 Limp_BIzkit666[49897] |
| 206.117.45.191 |
you REALLY should have spaced your times of posting a little more..
people gets annoyed when they see one person posing 5+ report in a day span or so..
cause
1. their reports are now scrolled down
2. other people reports are now scrolled down
3. all they see is bunch of "belt"s..
4. people need changes..
so, it was actually okay..
i swear, if you just took your time, you would have been fine..
listen to JV and keep it up..
byeya
p.s-i won't rate this. cause my fan fics are better. =] jk |
#9 [50046] |
| as530047.infocom.com |
I am riveted.
Although I'm not sure how well this follows the actual Starcraft storyline, it is still very well written.
I will rate part 3
Cheers,
Dref |
| #10 Requiem[50055] |
| spider-wo061.proxy.aol.com |
intruiging...like Drefsab, i don't know just how well this fits Blizzard's idea of the Starcraft galaxy, but hey, when you're good, you're good. i loved it, and i'm off to read part two.
-Requiem |
| #11 probe[50202] |
| 242849hfc31.tampabay.rr.com |
holy shit that was pretty good, if you don't count the formatting.
nice! |
| #12 Limp_Bizkit666[50301] |
| 206.117.45.150 |
just for physicists point of view...
hmmm, several dozen kilometers in a blink of an eye is fast as hell!
=]
that means, it is traveling around 60 kilometers per second, and that means it is traveling around 216000 km/hr...
216000 km/hr means it could go from one side of the earth to the other in around 5 hours...
hmm, come to think about it, it ain't that fast... OMG, i'm freaking stupid...
bleh..
anyways, nice shit. just do something about the spacing.. |