| #1 :BUCKEYE:[56482] |
| dhcp9561206.columbus.rr.com |
| 1st |
| #2 Phoenix-S-[56483] |
| r-174.113.alltel.net |
Pretty good, hurry up and get the next part out, dammit! I dotn care if you just finished this one! 8) You leave the readers begging for more :o
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| #3 Phoenix-S-[56484] |
| r-174.113.alltel.net |
| Bah forgot to chagne the font size. |
| #4 dislekcia[56485] |
| netcache3.is.co.za |
YAYAYAYAYAYAY!
Whee, more kickass stuff to read. |
| #5 dislekcia[56486] |
| netcache3.is.co.za |
| This report rocks. OMG. |
| #6 anal-banana[56487] |
| bcfw1d.ext.bridge.com |
| wow this is great!!! Write more dammit.. I'm addicted!!! =) |
| #7 garett[56489] |
| tyrcache.tyler.net |
| sex |
| #8 <font color="purple">Snork~Dimmy</font>[56494] |
| async25-per2-isp-4.nas.one.net.au |
i didn't read it, i did, however, glance through and there seemed to be far too much text and not enough pics.
but what the hell do i know about good reports...
<font color="red">Snork~Dimmy</font> |
| #9 SqueakyMonkey[56496] |
| osh1-7a4.twcny.rr.com |
| I have to go to work now, I'll read this when I get home. |
| #10 [LoR]-Napoleic[56497] |
| 24.66.179.206.bc.wave.home.com |
| Great work. No flaws. Keep it up! |
| #11 Deranged~SCV[56499] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| Wheee good work. I'm writeing a fan fic too, this one is much better tho. =) |
| #12 Smackemupagus[56500] |
| alproxy2.proxy.lucent.com |
put out the third one, dammit! :)
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| #13 JawaAvenger[56508] |
| d6-22.hntnny.optonline.net |
| MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!! |
| #14 BW-sux[56510] |
| spider-wl032.proxy.aol.com |
Gotta love profane rednecks!
9
BW-sux |
| #15 Gamma Ray Burst[56518] |
| q.ssl.berkeley.edu |
This was even better than the first one. Nice.
-GRB |
| #16 Sonneillon[56521] |
| tsdlsk01d01010116.sk.sympatico.ca |
These little action-fan fics are entertaining. I like your descriptive writing with the weapons and unit designations. I don't see that too often in fan fics. Good work, but these need to be longer. =]
7.5 - 8
-Sonny Bouy |
| #17 Phobos_ColZ[56522] |
| spider-th033.proxy.aol.com |
| Needs Drefsab-like lesbian scenes. Other than that, great work, though I don't know what retarded commander would siege the tank before the tower was finished. And where are the medics? In any case, sounds like a story straight from the trenches, very believable and addicting. Easy 8 |
| #18 RhinoAssUgly[56526] |
| bc-pgr-a53-01-66.look.ca |
Thx for the comments.
I'll be sure to note and correct certain things, such as the disturbing lack of lesbians, plus the fact that there's too much text upon first glance ... =)
As for the length (or lack thereof) I had originally intended this little tale to be a single, relatively short fan fic; not a trilogy. I just wanted to test the waters. The splitting into three parts just sorta kinda happened when the story got long (in my opinion, guess I was wrong heh).
It's a good thing, though. I actually ended up rewriting a good chunk of Part 2 last night after sitting down and deciding it sucked root, so I'm glad I didn't release it all at once.
And I never expected to get rated, but unofficial 8's are fine by me! |
| #19 SqueakyMonkey[56529] |
| osh1-7a4.twcny.rr.com |
Aside from the misspelling of Glaive Wurm (that is how it's spelled, right?) this was great. Better than the first.
9 |
| #20 Scrode[56538] |
| users2.xorchicago.com |
Scrode like. Scrode want more.
8 |
| #21 MourningWood[56549] |
| fw8.intuit.com |
This was as good as the first part. I like the fact that you are releasing it in three parts. If all of this was released at once, I think it would be way too long. Not as many people would read it.
Now go post the final part! |
| #22 The Asylum[56569] |
| ce-stjh-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| No squeaky it's Glave Worm. |
| #23 Squeaky (again)[56582] |
| osh1-7a4.twcny.rr.com |
| Really? I guess I'm just out of touch, I havn't played SC in damn near 5 months. I was positive it was Glaive Wurm, but I'll take your word for it. |
| #24 Yatrix[56584] |
| proxy1-external.grffth1.in.home.com |
again, i stress that although some people like these lil' stories, i still think this site should be about BR's. i like the one's that make the BR sound story-like, but really, IMHO, this is sorta gay. but, i got that right to think that, right?
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| #25 DancingMidget[56608] |
| AC85422A.ipt.aol.com |
| Yeah Yatrix, and WE'VE also got the right to call you a flaming idiot, but we don't do we? If you don't like it, don't read it. |
| #26 The..Scarab[56633] |
| ACA9F081.ipt.aol.com |
2 Things.
If you dont like fan fics, dont read them, this is awesome.
What the fuck is IMHO. |
| #27 The Asylum[56635] |
| ce-stjh-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| <b>I</b>n <b>M</b>y <b>H</b>umble <b>O</b>pinion |
| #28 Uber-BoZ[56650] |
| pm016.osg.net |
| It's Glave Wurm, you Donkey Punches. You're right Squeaky. Suck it Asylum. |
| #29 The..Scarab[56652] |
| AC8DAF0A.ipt.aol.com |
in my humble opinion huh?.....GAY
and uhm what the fuck Donkey Punches. IMHO, i think that makes no sense and also IMHO it sounds wierd. So IMHO suck it. IMHO fuck u all. |
| #30 exactly[56661] |
| spider-wo064.proxy.aol.com |
| IMHO you're all gay, so stfu. |
| #31 General Diapers-On-Lemonade (with a D in the P)[56664] |
| ppp4.c5300-1.day-oh.siscom.net |
| exactly, stop picking your booogersss |
| #32 SqueakyMonkey[56670] |
| osh1-76e.twcny.rr.com |
I thought I was al least half right (still got glave wrong though).
I AM SO SMART!
I AM SO SMART!
S-M-R-T,
I MEAN, S-M-A-R-T! |
| #33 SlingsNArrows[56693] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| A fan fic I actually enjoyed??! |
| #34 RhinoAssUgly[56701] |
| bc-pgr-a53-01-92.look.ca |
If I can figure some lowkey way to squeeze both "Donkey Punches" and "IMHO" into Part 3, I'm gonna fuckin' well do it.
Sorry you don't dig the fan fics, Yatrix, but I love writing them and so do many others. There are even a few lost souls who enjoy reading them. Maybe you could make a constructive suggestion in order to voice you opinion, however, like "make a seperate section for these fan fics so I don't have to read this crap".
Just a thought.
Uber-BoZ, don't make me smack you upside the nut with a Black&Decker. |
| #35 Jabba_TDA[56706] |
| b26.dkm.cz |
| Dont mind Yatrix and release that 3rd part! I cant wait! |
| #36 anal-banana[56789] |
| bcfw1d.ext.bridge.com |
Don't listen to Yatrix! He's a retard.
These fan fics are GREAT, and I love them. I can't wait for part 3! Keep up the good work! |
| #37 ownMEplease![56814] |
| lobby11.its.hawaii.edu |
Donkey Punches?! wtf?!
great writing RAU....may i call you that? Please? thx...gw.
Do me a favor and work the line, "slap my nuts on your forehead" into part 3!!
haha...i'm a moron, outties.... |
| #38 The Cap'n[56869] |
| pm208.osg.net |
| Arr me mateys, ARR! |
| #39 The..Scarab[56875] |
| AC8EE5C0.ipt.aol.com |
My Balls.
Your Chin. |
| #40 Frozen~SCV[56879] |
| slip-32-100-234-71.ca.us.prserv.net |
| Donkey punches...hah. IMHO General Diapers on Lemondade...with a ( something and shit ) is the best name I have ever heard. Keep up the good work. This is best comment sections ever. Good fiction too..me like |
| #41 {DD}Fatboy[56889] |
| 1Cust244.tnt1.sfo2.da.uu.net |
| Excellent. Kinda like pheonix legions without the economical details, but added profanity to make things more realistic. Honestly, if a zergling is tearing into you, is the first thing your going to say "Oh Fiddlesticks?" (no offence to .Praetor in any way =) |
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