| #1 LuckyNewbie:P[66201] |
| user-33qtpkn.dialup.mindspring.com |
| omfg thats screwed... why is everything messed up? and why did the mistakes i corrected in preview come back and laugh at me saying "<i>I am invinsable! muhahaha!</i>" |
| #2 Wangsonn[66202] |
| fcs00gsp.gsp.bellsouth.net |
| 2nd=ownage |
| #3 Darque~Plague[66203] |
| proxy2-external.htfdc1.ct.home.com |
| 3rd yet again! |
| #4 CynicalMagician[66206] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
some grammar trouble, and nothing that hasn't really been done before, but it wasn't bad. Proof though.
-CM |
| #5 -trainee-[66207] |
| 207-172-81-86.s86.tnt1.ptr.va.dialup.rcn.com |
| Even though I dont mind reading starcraft fiction. I really believe it should have it's own section here on br.com. I really like reading actual intense well fought games. Fiction SC Should have it's own area. |
| #6 JediTalion[66214] |
| m4bhSs2n170.midsouth.rr.com |
LUCKY, OMG, is this that fic you sent me like 2 months ago?
I didn't read it. :D |
| #7 Phobos_ColZ[66215] |
| spider-th072.proxy.aol.com |
| Our football team won our first game ever, we kicked ass, I feel like a took 30 adrenalin pills, sorry for the spam but I am pumped, nice report, test it out using Internet Explorer first,t hen on netscape for optimum proofing. |
| #8 hey...[66230] |
| a-db.aspn.net |
| phobos where are you from.. cuz where I live, one of the towns close to mine won their first game in 6 years the other day..they beat my school :(. |
| #9 Cracky_The_Peon[66235] |
| 216.230.139.30 |
Sexy and suspenseful - I love fanfics!
gw, btw.
cracky |
| #10 Ain Soph[66239] |
| 1Cust135.tnt1.dfw5.da.uu.net |
It took so long to remember just what happened.
I was so young and vestal then,
you know it hurt me,
but I'm breathing so I guess I'm still alive
even if signs seem to tell me otherwise.
I've got my hands bound,
my head down , my eyes closed,
and my throat wide open.
Do unto others what has been done to you
I'm treading water,
I need to sleep a while.
My lamb and martyre, you look so precious.
Won't you come a bit closer,
close enough so I can smell you.
I need you to feel this,
I can't stand to burn too long.
Released in this sodomy.
For one sweet moment I am whole.
Do unto you now what has been done to me.
You're breathing so I guess you're still alive
even if signs seem to tell me otherwise.
Won't you come just a bit closer,
close enough so I can smell you.
I need you to feel this.
I need this to make me whole.
There's release in this sodomy.
For I am your witness that
blood and flesh can be trusted.
And only this one holy medium brings me piece of mind.
Got your hands bound, your head down,
your eyes closed.
You look so precious now.
I have found some kind of temporary sanity in this
shit blood and cum on my hands.
I've come round full circle.
My lamb and martyr, this will be over soon.
You look so precious.
|
| #11 Snork~Dimmy[66243] |
| 61.12.118.81 |
| use preview button more, thx gj |
| #12 <font color=red>EVIL</font> Seiruu[66249] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
imitate the thnx gj/gw more pls
Great fanfic LuckyNewbie =)
I loved it =)
Can't wait for the rest =) |
| #13 TH-LittleBro[66254] |
| 164.106.181.227 |
| OMG OMG OMG!! 13!!! :-p is any particular reason people rejoice in being first? Back to elementary school if you ask me... :-o |
| #14 <font color="red">this probably won't work</font>[66255] |
| 1Cust135.tnt14.chi5.da.uu.net |
| Great story |
| #15 <font color="green">hey it worked!</font>[66256] |
| 1Cust135.tnt14.chi5.da.uu.net |
| Great story |
| #16 <font color="yellow">ok, I'll stop now =)</font>[66257] |
| 1Cust135.tnt14.chi5.da.uu.net |
| <nt> |
| #17 <font color="blue">muhaha</font>[66258] |
| 1Cust135.tnt14.chi5.da.uu.net |
| <nt> |
| #18 LuckyNewbie:P[66260] |
| user-33qtpcl.dialup.mindspring.com |
| stfu snork... i tested it like ten times. For some reason that "add/read comments" and all the jazz is on the left, it looked just fine in preview =(. |
| #19 TeCh[66266] |
| 24.65.124.22.sk.wave.home.com |
| OMFG its the new silent~death! hahahahaha you suck man learn how to... wait just quit battlereports k? |
| #20 WarLeaderJustin[66269] |
| spider-tq012.proxy.aol.com |
ROFL, TeCh is probably like, "Exactly," an SN made by a popular guy here that is afraid to flame under his own name! I was so mad at that when someone said that <i>they</i> were Exactly... haha!
Uh, I read it, goodies.
Make more.
-WLJ |
| #21 Phobos_ColZ[66270] |
| spider-tk084.proxy.aol.com |
| hey..., I'm from Mobile, Alabama. |
| #22 Snork~Dimmy[66277] |
| async239-per2-isp-3.nas.one.net.au |
| well luckynewbie ur HTML obviously sucks more than peggy the eyed whore. |
| #23 JediTalion[66291] |
| m4bhSs2n170.midsouth.rr.com |
Lucky, you didn't answer my question! :(
I'm going to go cry now. |
| #24 argh... spell check it[66337] |
| ce-2.pp.htv.fi |
it's "route" not "rhoute"
it's "gauss", not "guass" <i>und so weiter...</i>
nevertheless, it was fun to read it... |
| #25 LuckyNewbie:P[66345] |
| user-33qtpns.dialup.mindspring.com |
Ill tell ya, it looked fine in notepad =P Til i learned you can't indent paragraphs, cuz that was gonna be my little "breaker" from one scene to the others. And yes, my spelling was attrocious... i think thats how you spell it, so ill just go with bad. =]
I tried posting this on SCNation.com 2 months ago, but they were gay and didn't respond. And yes wedge it is the same one, just with different beginging and ending lines... didn't answer cuz i thought it was rhetorical =) dont cry! dont cry! |
| #26 BUU[66347] |
| spider-ta045.proxy.aol.com |
| needs... pictures.. now! i dont care if this is tottaly fiction.. it would still look kewl to like see the wraiths surrounding the drops ships.. and stuff like that.. and the bunkers, and the rines running way from the swarmy! |
| #27 garett[66360] |
| spider-tk061.proxy.aol.com |
| lol phobos, my football team wins city every year ;[ |
| #28 garett[66361] |
| spider-tk061.proxy.aol.com |
| i mean district |
| #29 JediTalion[66364] |
| m4bhSs2n170.midsouth.rr.com |
| Heh, you called me wedge! :P |
| #30 LuckyNewbie:P[66391] |
| user-33qto8v.dialup.mindspring.com |
| Sorry BUU, i think that the sc gameplay just isn't up for what i need, and i dont do 3d graphix =/ |
| #31 LuckyNewbie:P[66393] |
| user-33qto8v.dialup.mindspring.com |
| You'll always be wedge to me JediTalion =D |
| #32 Dog101[66399] |
| 1Cust238.tnt83.chi5.da.uu.net |
It was pretty good but u need to learn spellcheck. Good for a text-only.
Dog |
| #33 JediTalion[66403] |
| m4bhSs2n170.midsouth.rr.com |
"You'll always be wedge to me JediTalion =D"
Eww....
;) |
| #34 Luckynewbie:P[66406] |
| user-33qto8v.dialup.mindspring.com |
| heh... i just found out i do have a spell checked version of chapter one, that i turned into sc nation... hehe. Should have put it in wordperfect =/ |
| #35 Gemini[66412] |
| sarc8a88.snip.net |
Dammit, why didn't my fic get as good a rating as this one?
Oh, yeah, wait, my HTML is worse then Lucky's... |
| #36 LuckyNewbie:P[66417] |
| user-33qto8v.dialup.mindspring.com |
STFU!!! I have no clue why the comments section is on the left like that... and you can't tell if its gonna be like that until you post it, cuz it doens't show up in preview! If your html skills are so bad, fill me in on this will ya! sheesh!
|
| #37 [66419] |
| m4bhSs2n170.midsouth.rr.com |
| I don't mind the thing on the side, as long as I don't have to scroll back and forth to read it. Its okay lucky, settle down. |
| #38 JediTalion[66420] |
| m4bhSs2n170.midsouth.rr.com |
| Ohh, crap. that aboce post was mine. |
| #39 LuckyNewbie:P[66422] |
| user-33qto8v.dialup.mindspring.com |
| oh wait... thought u said yours was better... scratch that last comment... hehe |
| #40 JediTalion[66436] |
| m4bhSs2n170.midsouth.rr.com |
| ROTFLMAO |
| #41 Stellar[68975] |
| netcache3.is.co.za |
| Lucky .... good enough read altogether , but do me a favour and go post at Infoceptor.com . You would most likely find a more appreciative crowd their . And spelling.... well who the hell cares .(aka period) |
Home
Forum
Starcraft Tournaments
