| #1 IEATCLOWNS[68246] |
| edtntnt11-port-247.dial.telus.net |
| Enjoy. |
| #2 :+:SlipKnoT::+:[68249] |
| bc-kam-a53-01-71.look.ca |
| Ya first |
| #3 Digityl[68250] |
| 138.86.151.7 |
OH OH OH 2nd. Why the hell did he make all those guards when he knew the other guy had carriers??? Good job on the report. I think its better than ur first one IMO.
Digi |
| #4 Death Hawk[68251] |
| HSE-MTL-ppp4745.qc.sympatico.ca |
Ok, a few things.
<u>Good things:</u>
1. This was much better then your other report.
2. Graphics are improving.
<u>Bad things:</u>
1. You don't need a pic of guardians morphing, just the actual guardians picture is needed.
2. Try and incorporate more minimaps into the pictures so we know where the battles are taking place on the actual map.
3. Because Nemicro was white, when you talked about the things he did you should have made his name stand out more then the text. Right now, there is barely a difference.
Overall good job.
7.
Death Hawk |
| #5 WilliamWC3[68256] |
| 128.252.112.83 |
Really impressive improvemnet over your first report.
A couple more pieces of advice since you seem to be so good a at applying them.
When you have image collages, make sure each seperate image has its own border.
When doing gifs its best to make all the frames line up perfectly but atleast make sure they are all the same size.
When making text wrap around pics, it looks better if you just set the align property inside the img tag to right or left. That way the text will really wrap around it instead of have the text on one side and the image on the other.
Anyway, great improvement. Keep up the good work. |
| #6 IEATCLOWNS[68257] |
| edtntnt11-port-2.dial.telus.net |
Thanks, I spent all afternoon on this one. I didn't know what to do, I wanted a nice Gray Font and since Nomicro was white, I had a problem when I was reading over the BR in the preview, but I thought about it for a second...why spend a hour fixing it when it will do the job?
Now, I am going to look for REALLY good games to BR and spend a lot of time on them. I was planning on making a Flash Intro for this but I never really used Flash before and I suck at it :)
I took over 200 screen shots in this game, and realized 95% of them sucked :)
What do you think of having more than 1 .gif battle? I was also thinking of getting a little GFX TV thing and putting the battle in that. And what about having TV lines in the pics?
Also what about Interviews with the players pre and post game? And what about funny quotes in the BR? So many questions, so little time... |
| #7 H-H[68267] |
| flx1-ppp08.lvdi.net |
THANKYOU!!!!!! IEATCLOWNS
4 your time, watching and reporting. Your report was very accurate and I feel U picked up on All of the important parts of the battle.
I like the live action 5 frame psi pics at my natural, and your words were awesome when U said "Then I saw one of the greatest use of Protoss Spell Casting EVER!" This makes me feel the value of the all micro, non macro strat that I've been working so hard to get to a level of winning with.
Thx again and if there anything I can do. msg me H-H--H-H on bnet.
"optimum mircoing"
H-H
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| #8 Carnelien[68270] |
| proxy.sjc.netsetter.com |
| Nice report. I found the graphics to be great and the writing good. Overall I give it a 7-8 |
| #9 Shepherd[68273] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
| Nice report, but the game. . .lots of flaws within players, but nice report nonetheless. Lots of details, but try to find a better game. You have a real potential going there. |
| #10 Roaddog{WP}[68278] |
| proxy2-external.pr1.on.home.com |
nice to see a cannon guy win a game... !!!
Ieatclowns you are vastly improved, i can see you are going to be a good prospect later on, and you had the guts to post before AND after breeze. Report was good, but as someone else said always throw in a minimap in each of your pix, it helps lots. work on your writing a bit, throw in some humour, your writing is basic, but does the job. and interviews are always good if they are interesting, more animated battles are always wanted, but i donno about the tv thingymager.
GJ Clownie.
8 |
| #11 JarickCWAL[68291] |
| cate1-216.reshall.ou.edu |
Not bad. The main problem with the gif that I saw was that the images weren't all the same size, and I got that nasty resizing delay that made a messy spill.
*thumbs up* |
#12  [68302] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Good job, definite improvement. Good job with your screenshots (except for the morhping guardians... :P ). Text was pretty good too. The players were definitely not tactical geniuses though... forge first / dt rush Vs. Zerg? :( This isn't the 10293845 balances changes H-H is it?
7
Cheers,
Dref |
| #13 rommelkiller[68309] |
| spider-wc022.proxy.aol.com |
| gj but hdryas is speeled hydras :) |
| #14 willwinforfood[68318] |
| d120-54.hcvlny.optonline.net |
| good job on the report, decent graphics but too many spelling errors. but dont listen to me my life time rating is like a 5. |
| #15 British[FTL][68339] |
| cx526109-a.phnx1.az.home.com |
OMFG...
This is going to sound pretty strange coming from ME, but...
NEWBIES!!!!
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| #16 TDM[68429] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
Rommelkiller:
"Speeled" is spelled "Spelled. |
| #17 Spuzz[68437] |
| jfsn-01-235.dialup.netins.net |
Nice job. You're on your way to becoming a great reporter!
Spuzz |
| #18 IEATCLOWNS[68440] |
| edtntnt2-port-304.dial.telus.net |
Thanks, I don't think I will ever be a "great" reporter. Good maybe but never "great". Great would be Breeze, YRM, King_Lewis, maybe even Mark4 :) Those people have BRing in their blood, I don't.
My next BR shall get a 8 though, instead of 5 hours like on this one, i shall spend a week :) |
| #19 [LoR]-Punisher[68499] |
| ktce1.156ce.singa.pore.net |
| H-H--H-H reminds me of my chemistry class....Hydrogen Bonds... |
| #20 shockwave[68546] |
| exchange1.sensable.com |
The report was well done. I'd just have the screenshots of the scores at the end instead of making the table yourself. If you're already taking screenshots, this should be a lot faster for you.
One thing, though -- I really would try to watch a better game if you're going to be spending the time to BR it. There are often many excellent games just going in clan ~nohunters. Granted some of the games there aren't so decent; but e.g. there are usually tons of A-X folks there every night and many of those excellent games never get BR'd. If you BR a game like that, not only is it likely to be more exciting and educational for you to watch and viewers to read, but you're also much more likely to get a better score.
This game was... well kinda on the novice level. The Toss player went forge-first and was incredibly cannon happy (read -- turtle). The Zerg player then just threw forces at the defenses and then eventually, obviously, got run over. You don't send a handful of hydra/lings to attack 5 cannons w/ templar support, nor do you tech rush to mutas against a person who probably has cannons in his main (b/c he went forge first) and templar (since he had already shown DT).
Also, it looked like those devourers in the screenshots were attacking the interceptors and not the carriers. Hmm, "NoMicro"... :-).
Finally, the dweb + dark swarm picture looks interesting, but I don't understand why he had to dweb in front of the cannons since you mentioned that the only units coming in were cracklings. |
| #21 shockwave[68563] |
| exchange1.sensable.com |
| Woohoo, I look forward to it! Good job so far. |
| #22 Dausuul[68691] |
| lucre.tcom.purdue.edu |
One word:
Ultralisks.
'Nuff said.
--Dausuul |
| #23 DivvyO[68876] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
Two words:
Hit the islands.
Oh wait, that's 3.
Shit.
DivvyO |
| #24 bboy[68879] |
| gw1.finspong.se |
why are you only giving this guy a 7?
its defenetly an 8, maybe a 9 |
| #25 IEATCLOWNS[69496] |
| edtntnt11-port-69.dial.telus.net |
| Heh thanks Bboy, but I don't think this is a 9..maybe a 8 |
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