| #1 Monty Pylon[78101] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| This series almosted didn't get released do to the poor response of the first chapter. i shall continue on and i still await the CKane fan fic he said he would release. Dref for another newbie bash try to build a rax inside the newbies base and attack from within. |
| #2 CKane[78104] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
asdf
Sorry, I'm taking my time. :(
I want it to be perfect by the time it's out. I have only two-and-a-half chapters done rough draft, and the first draft of chapter 1. I've already completely redisgined a main charachter because I thought he sucked. IE, I don't want it to be a piece of crap.
Also, I have finals this week :( so it'll be out next week at the soonest.
Sorry for being so slow :(
1st non-author! |
| #3 CKane[78105] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
Pylon, this owns quite.
bleh ;p
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mark gimme rating power gogogo |
| #4 WhiteLancer[78113] |
| 18-064.018.popsite.net |
| 4th... I don't like fan fics much... and I hate Drefsab |
| #5 -=Forsaken=-[78124] |
| c114217.upc-c.chello.nl |
Nice Monty just keep on writing plz a lot of people do, they just don't all respond. But the wrtiting is nice again btw. Nice strory nice plots and very easy reading nice job once again your holding on to your reputation as a damn good writer if u ask me. So keep it comin plz. :)
Put Kris Hulsen in gogogo :P Kek~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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| #6 -=Forsaken=-[78125] |
| c114217.upc-c.chello.nl |
Nice Monty just keep on writing plz a lot of people do, they just don't all respond. But the wrtiting is nice again btw. Nice strory nice plots and very easy reading nice job once again your holding on to your reputation as a damn good writer if u ask me. So keep it comin plz. :)
Put Kris Hulsen in gogogo :P Kek~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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| #7 -=FOrsakeN=-[78128] |
| c114217.upc-c.chello.nl |
Ahc Stevens.. U're evil :)
I want the barrel, I want the barrel^^ |
| #8 DarkMage[78261] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
I don't read fanfic that much, but this was really good. put me in it! :)
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- DarkMage |
#9  [78365] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Hmmm, not bad. Plot is quite predictable but not totally unbelievable (considering the fact that its starcraft fan fic). You really need to proofread these better. Maybe have someone else read it before you release it to help you with grammatical and spelling errors.
The only part in the plot that bothered me was the larva spying on Mengsk. "<i>"It would take time to hatch and Mengsk would have his guards kill it before it had a chance to do any damage.</i>" I don't see how the larva got there? Why the larve couldn't hatch at night. And where are these larva hiding that the guards can't see them now? If I were a terran guard, I would kill Zerg larva just as quickly as a Zerg egg.
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Cheers,
Dref |
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