| #1 CKane[85910] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| 1st! |
| #2 the()vermind[85911] |
| user-2ivebhc.dialup.mindspring.com |
| an interesting first report. However, I do have some complaints, the game wasn't really <i>that</i> good, little problems in the text made the impression that you're a newbie to starcraft, like calling a spire a "mutalisk den" and that you say one of his mistakes was not having a second spawning pool. However, the text was well written, and the pics were stellar for your first report, but remember, a report could be horrible, but if the game is not one sided, and is exciting, the report itself will get a good rating. Range is 3-6, I give 4-5 |
| #3 CKane[85912] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| The good game description and pictures made this worth reading. I give it a 5, maybe 6 |
| #4 CKane[85913] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| but it was kinda dumb. :( |
| #5 For~The~Love~Of[85914] |
| dip-59.maxg3-3.dips.csonline.net |
| SPELLCHECK!!! |
| #6 ummmm[85916] |
| s2cp1.taima.net |
| for the love of god how can you rate a battle report with suh poor spelling with high marks.... |
| #7 ummmm[85917] |
| s2cp1.taima.net |
| for the love of god how can you rate a battle report with suh poor spelling with high marks.... |
| #8 -GoW-Striker[85920] |
| h24-68-219-102.cg.shawcable.net |
| I was tired last night and I know I spelt a lot of things wrong. I was so bored last night in fact I still havent slept since last night. Don't worry next ones going to be better ;). |
| #9 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[85927] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
Never mind the game for a second, I'm sure you know what's wrong with it and that you'll have to br a better one next time.
That said, You show tremendous potential. As a first br, I was very impressed with this baby. Those pictures were great . . . I dunno, something about this just brought back a wave of nostalgia and made me want to play sc again. Kudos on the style, loved it ( writing was good too, not considering the spelling =] ).
Pity about the game tho, I'd give this a 6 now. Your next one should fetch an 8 easily =D |
| #10 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[85928] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
Ummm, it's, uh, *su<b>c</b>h
Improve your spelling buddy ;) |
| #11 GottaLoveSk[85929] |
| mkc-65-26-6-186.kc.rr.com |
| Pretty good report for a first timer, you spelled "Marine" wrong the entire report, and spell check should've been used, but otherwise I would say it's pretty damned good. |
| #12 Shepherd[85933] |
| alb-66-24-167-106.nycap.rr.com |
I recommend that you go through game manual and play game a little more to learn names of units. . .
I give this 4. |
| #13 Pretender[85942] |
| d119024.upc-d.chello.nl |
| Newbies ownage |
| #14 .PapaSmurf.[85943] |
| qn-212-127-143-244.quicknet.nl |
I like it, even though you're inexperienced or whatever, I enjoyed reading the report.
.PapaSmurf. |
| #15 CKane[85945] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Oh yes, zerglings are not made at spawning pools |
| #16 jeva42[85946] |
| 1Cust233.tnt1.rialto.ca.da.uu.net |
| a better name for this report would have been "When Newbies Get Drunk." |
| #17 I_am_Gen.Patton[85948] |
| spider-tq071.proxy.aol.com |
Pretty good for a first report. I just suggest you learn the names of units(Minutelisks?Mariens?) And learn the structures,too. Spell check would have helped alot. Other than that, not too bad. Good pics, one sided game.
On a scale of 4-6, I'd give it a 5.
"Get Your Pansy ass up that beach, or I'll kill you myself!"-General Patton |
| #18 Frost[85952] |
| spider-to048.proxy.aol.com |
| ROFL "I want my college money" |
| #19 isuck@sc`[85957] |
| 240.reno-01-02rs16rt.nv.dial-access.att.net |
| Actually a pretty nice br, but your opponent really wasn't much of a challenge(better game and you'll get a gold rating). Perhaps learning to play with zerg will help you to further understand why he did not have two spawning pools. =] Spelling was pretty bad; I knew what you meant, but it made me laugh before proceeding through the text when I ran into things like "full proof"(<i>fool</i> proof). Good job guy. |
| #20 D@imon[85959] |
| oek.dk |
| Just a question: How "early" did he rush you? was it like 30 minutes or so? :) |
| #21 IG_Parchandri[85961] |
| netcache2-acld.auckland.clix.net.nz |
| I like the pictures, they showed some humour. But the game itself wasn't at all exciting after his zerglings attacked. And what the heck would anyone want 2 spawning pools for? |
| #22 ThieverIV[85981] |
| spider-wd031.proxy.aol.com |
"I don't plan on lettering xmank get anywhere out of this base."
That's right, don't letter him get anywhere.
Also, every single zerg unit besides Infested Terrans are made at the hatchery, spawning pools, hydralisk dens and "minutelisk dens" are so-called TECH buildings (allowing you to build the units)
Next time make sure you've played as all three races so you can make an informed BR about them ;] |
| #23 ThieverIV[85982] |
| spider-wd031.proxy.aol.com |
Sorry. The above should read as:
"Every single zerg unit besides Infested Terrans are made at the hatchery. Spawning pools, hydralisk dens and "minutelisk dens" are so-called TECH buildings (allowing you to build the units)" |
| #24 iggy[85990] |
| 225.los-angeles-18-19rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| Shiny penis. |
| #25 AkumaSpawn[85992] |
| cate1-216.reshall.ou.edu |
Find someone you can trust to go over the text with a fine-toothed comb in an editorial position. It wasn't a bad report, all in all, but it wasn't great, either.
I'd give it a 6-. |
| #26 BUU[86009] |
| AC986D36.ipt.aol.com |
| pics= good. text == bad. I see one thing from this, switch too all pic reports (hi jamellan!) |
| #27 CrackHeadJeb[86380] |
| mu-178245.dhcp.missouri.edu |
I just have two minor comments about the graphics, since it appears that everyone else has mentioned the other issues.
While the blown-up pic of your 8th SCV building a supply depot was good, I don't think it was necessary since it is part of the normal terran build order. Maybe I would use that effect on a building that plays a bigger influence on the outcome of the game.
Also, in the "I want my college money!!" pic, there was no separation line between the bottom shot and the two shots above it. It didn't blend in too badly with the above shots; however, it is still something that you want to avoid doing.
-CrackHeadJeb |
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