| #1 Scarab[86086] |
| AC88589E.ipt.aol.com |
Masturbation
The gift of God |
| #2 CKane[86087] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| what about sex? |
| #3 CKane[86088] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Will Raynor get it on? |
| #4 ^Geist^[86090] |
| 209.115.253.70 |
| Nice fanfic. Thats about it |
| #5 Death's Servant-TPF-(ASP)-[86097] |
| cr926028-a.rct1.bc.wave.home.com |
| Ok, good I have one less target non my "to stalk list". I see you are doing a great job with your series. Also, if all the dominion weapons were useless agints the hybrids, how would Raynor's fleet help the protoss? |
| #6 awe 6[86098] |
| c286394-a.pinol1.sfba.home.com |
| nice job monty, i can tell you spent quite a bit more time on this. it falters in places but is well done overall. 7.5 |
| #7 iggy[86101] |
| 32.los-angeles-25-30rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| i zip because i luuuv |
| #8 Monty Pylon[86104] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Raynor was sent to strike a deal with the Toss on behave of the Dominion because the protoss think Mengsk is a newbie. |
| #9 Arc@nE13[86112] |
| 213.166.21.132 |
| well if mengsk whas a newb?,then single player sc should have been much easyer!!! |
| #10 HKRules[86114] |
| c319196.extern.lawrenceville.org |
| part of them wanted to help pull the triggrt LOL |
| #11 MatriX(SR)[86118] |
| chpxy02-chrtr02.ne.mediaone.net |
| I hope that part wasn't their arm? heh. nice report, loved it. keep it up monty |
| #12 UDontKnOwME[86121] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
Nice job Monty. I like the way you've brought Kerrigan around. It would be cool if she then injected herself with Zerg stuff and became a Zerg again though... Uhhhh, yeah...
Anyways... I think you need to draw out the battle more. The battle against Duran on the ice world or whatever, was too short. Plus, I'm not sure why Duran wasn't caught. The Protoss should have had an Observer or the Terran's a SV, don't you think? It would have made more sense for Duran to be caught.
I also want to know something else. Why did Megnsk send his fleet to that PARTICULAR planet? Why didn't he just call Raynor and ask him to tell the Portoss to help him with the aquisitions of that "firepower"? That's just a point I wanted to make.
I also want to know why Kerrigan would attack Raynor, and then ask for his help? I thought that she was so independent, that she would rather die...
This was a very nice report to read. I hope you keep writing this series. I am giving this report an 8.5. KEEP UP THE STORY! Good luck!
Have a nice day :),
UDKM |
| #13 Daedeloth[86130] |
| bele175.wuh.wustl.edu |
this is very well done, post more ^^
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| #14 Monty Pylon[86151] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| UDKM: Be patient young grasshopper, all will be explained. The fact you have so many unanswered questions garantees that you will want to read the next chapter. I will consider my job done. I will say that its not fun to have a crazy SOB like Duran captured. He needs to be free so he can start some shit. |
| #15 Laean[86184] |
| dtkim.resnet.ucsd.edu |
| Glad your continuing this again. I have one question though. How did the zealots and dark templars and ghosts and dragoons and such beat the hybrids when even tactical nukes could not destroy them? |
| #16 Monty Pylon[86190] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| The protoss can defeat a hybrid because they channel the same energy as them. The terrans spray paint so that the toss can see the hybrids. |
| #17 ThieverIV[86310] |
| spider-wi074.proxy.aol.com |
| This is good. A nice return to the series. I agree with some of the previous comments, your battle scenes could be longer, more detailed or broken up into several paragraphs. The first episode of the Starcraft Chronicals (and the last, for that matter) both had EXCELLENT battle scenes, very well detailed, written, etcetera. The rest of the story was great, keep writing and FINISH IT so I can do some of my own work without having to be compared to you! |
| #18 -=Forsaken=-[86340] |
| c114217.upc-c.chello.nl |
| Damn had to wait long for this one :D but Nice as allways keepem comin. |
| #19 Monty Pylon[86393] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| ThieverIV- I can assure that the next episodes will have the action of the old chronicles. In this series, I also want to push the Raynor/Kerrigan story. I am not sure exactly what I will have happen, but I must sadly dissapoint CKane and his X rated version ideas. |
| #20 mr.fart[86680] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
um...monty.
i have a question. Raynor shot her in the side. she should be dead. and what part of the body are you talking about?
that was a nice continuation, but not up to the last 5 episodes's standards. |
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