| #1 xld.aldogrez[94606] |
| AC96BF9F.ipt.aol.com |
| pics didnt work for me, looks good anyways tho |
| #2 )(V)(aster[94608] |
| spider-tn082.proxy.aol.com |
| i dont think the server allows external linking. Im gonna upload it onto a private server and try again. but til then no pics for anyone even me =[ |
| #3 Eradicate~Me[94610] |
| pa-millscreek2a-240.buf.adelphia.net |
| nice x's =[ |
| #4 OnSlaught[94611] |
| proxy4-external.pr1.on.home.com |
| Preview button anyone? |
| #5 Droned[94618] |
| pD9575F20.dip.t-dialin.net |
| Problem was he got the urls to the pics wrong.. Like this, the report seemed to be quite confusing to me. It was too much just a description of what each player did, too.. hmm... how to say it... not enough life in it, for my taste. Ah well... I want to see the pics!!! |
| #6 joe[94620] |
| pm2-95.sj.redshift.com |
u are platinum Br ^^ Bling Bling ~ y0
-joe |
| #7 )(V)(aster[94622] |
| spider-mtc-tj052.proxy.aol.com |
| It was my first BR. plus it relied heavily on the images. Ima move it to as different server and submit it again in like a week. |
| #8 )(V)(aster[94623] |
| spider-mtc-tj052.proxy.aol.com |
BTW the report is posted here...
http://litztest.tripod.com
If you would like to see all the computer busting pics just go there. |
| #9 [94626] |
| spider-mtc-tj052.proxy.aol.com |
no i didnt upload it to br.com. i did FILEREAD and i neglected to give the fule url's for the images rather than just thier single name... for example
A HREF="http:\www.litztest.tripod.com/OpenningPic.jpg"
i just have to fix the main page ill prolly do it tonite. |
| #10 )(V)(aster[94631] |
| spider-mtc-tj052.proxy.aol.com |
| FIXED!!! |
| #11 [SM]Strega~F[94645] |
| proxy4.senet.com.au |
Well, this relied too heavily on pictures. Also, instead of 3 square pictures next to each other, make 1 'bigger' square picture. This will reduce the amount of times that people will have 1 out of 3 pictures loaded up, but not the other 2. Not enough writing. Keep trying though...
Strega |
| #12 )(V)(aster[94646] |
| spider-wd023.proxy.aol.com |
| my work will get better as i start to do it. another thing i need to do is fix the frame set so the layout appears the same here as it does at the other page |
| #13 Smokes[94742] |
| wwwgate5.motorola.com |
Report was good. Pictures loaded just fine for me.
BTW, I've never seen someone whine so much as yufrontme or whatever his name was. |
| #14 Somebody...[94764] |
| cc37120-a.ewndsr1.nj.home.com |
OWNED
sby... |
| #15 ground-LOBP-[94770] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
I liked it, kept me reading (seriously, it did), solid overall br.
7.5 |
| #16 ground-LOBP-[94771] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| btw somewhat of an interesting layout |
| #17 yufrontme[94782] |
| ACAB9F06.ipt.aol.com |
Hey Smokes your the master, teach me the way of "the quote" plz thx ^^
btw nice br :) |
| #18 )(V)(aster[94783] |
| spider-mtc-te044.proxy.aol.com |
well now that ive discovered what i think i did wrong. My next BR will be out in bout 2-3 weeks...
I just got to find a game to obs first. |
| #19 Mattkid[94792] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| wtf? i can see all the pictures fine = |
| #20 deviak[94794] |
| ip-111-118-81.stockton.navipath.net |
good Br )(V)(aster, first one i ever read but its very good
(especially cause im in it) I hope to see more of your promising Br's. |
| #21 )(V)(aster[94797] |
| spider-tq021.proxy.aol.com |
Matt do you see the comment i posted where i said... "FIXED"???
I put that there kuz i fixed the problem with the images =P |
| #22 Ling-erie[94799] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
i saw all the pics fine, it worked fine
On the BR: it was REALLY hard to follow where stuff was going on, as there were no FULL minimap shots up until the minimap gif at then end. I assumed i could look at that to see what happened, but sadly no, as you didn't put a long enough spacing between each image on the gif, and thus it just shot by too quickly, offering little clue as to what happened.
I think that apart from the mini-map thing, it was a really good BR, and quite enjoyable, it looked like a good game (even if the players used very un-successful strategies quite often, making themselves look newb) but i liked the overall report, it was amusing and well constructed. |
| #23 BADKITTY![94800] |
| ss04.ny.us.ibm.com |
I liked it as well... I never play against ppl I know, cuz if I win, they just like "I already know u was better", but if I lose they all go "I BEAT BEN!!! HEY MARK, NICK, GOD, MOM, DAD!!! COME LOOK! I BEAT BEN!!!"... So it's a tie-lose situation ;)
--BADKITTY! |
| #24 )(V)(aster[94808] |
| spider-mtc-tb072.proxy.aol.com |
This was my first BR so if ppl wanna give me ideas on how i kan make my reports better plz add them. ive allrdy found about a dozen things to do different, and any other ideas are greatly welcome.
-)(V)(aster |
| #25 ground-LOBP-[94824] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| hint: next time you do an ending gif animation, include a "start here" frame, and also allow more time for each frame (as ling said). |
| #26 )(V)(aster[94835] |
| spider-tn063.proxy.aol.com |
Well here are a few of the things i want to do next time...
1. Like you said with the Minimap.gif, a start here frame and more time between each frame.
2. Put images together like i did with the final Bengy pic.
3. More humour.
4. alt text for the pics.
5. I wanna do a BR on an relatively unknown map.
6. Finite frame spacing so the layout upload on br.com the same way it does when I upload it to the Tripod site.
7. And to read some of the better BR's on this site to get ideas on what i can do to make it better, And some of the worse ones on what not to do.
--Litz |
#27  [94852] |
| 65.160.148.200 |
hey finally got around to this report! took me long enough :P
anyways, this report was good! the pics were pretty good for a first report and the game was really good. the biggest problem was your writing style. the report did not flow *at all*. it was like separaated into little chunks that were seemingly unrelated. you didnt mention things that happened btw battles and if you did, only vaguely. my tips? write it as one long flowing entity next time instead of so many separate sections. also: details!!
i give this 7 |
| #28 Dr.Demento:)[94855] |
| spider-ntc-ta081.proxy.aol.com |
No one knows who I am.. hahahaha except Litz. Hey you finally did a Battlereport. Nice job, but you forgot all my in game whity remarks and insults...oh wait, I wasn't obs that game. My mistake. Need to lay off the vodka. Good job.
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| #29 )(V)(aster[94860] |
| spider-mtc-tj054.proxy.aol.com |
LMAO DrD man dont lay off the vodka... just do what i do and drink more of it. thats what i did when i was obsing this game. (thank god i took over 300 SS's or i never woulda had a chance of remembering what happed)
--Litz |
| #30 Supercod[94869] |
| 63-224-58-30.customers.uswest.net |
Nice work...
I'm surprised that people have not yet complained about the white background. Black on white is generally accepted as easier to read, more aesthetically pleasing, and non-hurtful to the eyes.
Good job overall though, just listen to the other comments too...
~5000 left before comment 100,000
Supercod
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| #31 ground-LOBP-[94871] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| The problem is, some really good unknown maps such as Ricochet do not have obs versions, precisely because only known maps are "worthy" of obbage *cough*. |
| #32 )(V)(aster[94873] |
| spider-tf042.proxy.aol.com |
Theres always the Terran CC lift obs. =P
--Litz |
| #33 )(V)(aster[94880] |
| spider-tf042.proxy.aol.com |
Comon people i got a 7 on my first BR ever and all i get is 34 comments. I WANT MORE I TELL YOU, MOOORRRRREEEEEEEEEE.
--Litz |
| #34 Nova[94881] |
| 63.149.153.5 |
| The game sucked very badly.. these people need to learn how to play :( |
| #35 )(V)(aster[94884] |
| spider-mtc-tb054.proxy.aol.com |
Actually the game was incredibly close and until the very end i actually thought yufrontme would win. Just because the players dont use very good strats doesnt make the game less close.
--Litz |
| #36 yufrontme[94975] |
| tcache-wd01.proxy.aol.com |
| sorry, my bum was on the cannon ^^ |
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