| #1 LockEmDown[96690] |
| ool-182d8521.dyn.optonline.net |
| First again...yey |
| #2 y0urg0d[96691] |
| px2nr.wp.shawcable.net |
I see.
2nd |
| #3 LockEmDown[96692] |
| ool-182d8521.dyn.optonline.net |
| Nice report. Only spelling mistakes I noticed, were "respondes" and "univeral". They were probably just typos, but whatever. Personally I don't mind there being no pictures, but unfortunately most of the other people will... |
#4  [96693] |
| user128.net128.va.sprint-hsd.net |
great job, writing was descriptive and kept me interested. Unfortunately, the game seemed pretty crappy =[
very little back and forth action. only a few attacks made by either side, each with very little detail.
ok so, my tips for you: more details about battles, the rest had plenty to keep me interested ;), and a better gamE :p, and pics always help some:) you clearly know html!
if you think your game was better than i did, then thats something you didnt portray well. just something to think about :)
5 |
| #5 Khas[96697] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
I was going to say 7 for your report.
Things that worked well-
-You seemed to enjoy the game, and played it well
-Your writing was sufficiently descriptive for the type of game this was ;)
-You did have SOME humor, and that's at least a start.
Things that need to be improved-
-Choose a better game next time, this game was somewhat one sided.
-Go into a little more depth in battles, instead of just saying "I started with x units and ended with y units".
Strategies/Suggestions on how to improve-
-Look for game in channel clan ~NoHunters, you're bound to find better opposition there.
-Take pictures! Some of those battles sounded spectacular, especially that last one that the other player made against you. Pictures could have turned this into at LEAST a 6.
Overall, it's a nice start. I hope to see more of your reports! |
| #6 Mike-The-Peon[96703] |
| 0-1pool225-130.nas2.san-francisco1.ca.us.da.qwest.net |
| Thanks for the advice guys, I'll use it in my next report. The reason I don't have pictures is my image editor is really bad, and I don't want to just link to a huge screen shot. Also, the reason I reported on this game is that I plan to report on my ladder games, unless they are REALLY bad. To tell the truth, this guy was a sub-par Zerg player at best. |
| #7 |]agomar[96708] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
What Dr A said.
And one thing about reavers:
They're great or hit and runs.
Excellent on island maps.
Great in combating mass enemy units, of course, and can be ar more user friendly than high temps. The ultimate base bashers.
So, don't dish em. |
#8  [96709] |
| 1Cust89.tnt2.petersburg.va.da.uu.net |
| Good report Mike. Reminds me of my old AQD3 ones. I do have one word of advice. Instead of cannoning his cliff just put range upgraded goons there. They can still hit his drones from the cliff, and you don't have to spend any extra money on them, plus you can move them when you're done. The most important part though=no build time. It's drop and pop. |
| #9 [96735] |
| user128.net128.va.sprint-hsd.net |
just a tip: if you arent a pic pro, leave em out. crappy pictures reduce ratings i give:)
i get a great feel from text onlies (they have to have formatting tho:| ) this was a fun read, even tho it could have used a lil' improvement |
| #10 GoZuLu[96751] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Nice Report. Easy to read, good flow.
"Drop and pop" - strat. LOL Mark4.
GoZuLu - TheOldDane |
#11  [96752] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
Nice writing... I look forward to reading your next reports. A little proofreading might have helped.
Pictures wouldn't have added a thing to this report. I know what LT looks like. I know what a reaver looks like. Done & done.
Cheers. |
| #12 Ling-erie[96754] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
very easy to read, good to say what u feel at the time, i thelps get the reader more interested. Make more plz, i liked it.
hf |
| #13 [SM]Strega~F[96758] |
| proxy1.senet.com.au |
Well, I would've said a 7 or 8 even, until near the very end.
Where did these expansions come from?
How did you suddenly jump from 3 gateways to 8?
What happened to your cliffing? Was it removed?
Go into more details, especially if you do a text-only. Pictures can occasionally make up for not having enough detail, but very rarely.
Strega |
| #14 Mike-The-Peon[96762] |
| 63.232.217.77 |
| Thanks for all the feedback guys, I'll definetly do some more of these now that I know some people will actually read it :). I've continued up the ladder to 1100 8-4-0, but none of the games were worth reporting. I either layed the smack down or got spanked. Hopefully the next games will be better. |
| #15 PhukinRetard[96853] |
| AKCF1.xtra.co.nz |
i was thinking, that last attack he made- without storm you woulda been whomped. im not gonna say how many games ive seen where toss are about to get raped by either zerg or terran, when they release a couple of storms and turn it around.
Is it just me, or is that just a -little- unbalanced? I think that making storm more expensive and less effective would be a good idea, of course that means toss would probably get raped evey game. Oh well.
good BR btw, im tired of having to load about half an hour of pics. A bit more info at the end would have been nice.
5 |
| #16 BigD[96975] |
| 24.71.193.47 |
Storm can be countered by some decent dancing, and not clumping your units too much. And, storm does not hurt buildings :p
Good report, I like reading ones about average playeres for a change. |
| #17 TerrenMahem[97092] |
| 1Cust248.tnt32.dfw9.da.uu.net |
Bummer that fool pulled the plug on u. nice report.
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