| #1 skimoose[97357] |
| h0050da0aa372.ne.mediaone.net |
| first |
| #2 ...[97358] |
| backproxy.inter.net.il |
| heh |
| #3 joe.smurf[97359] |
| pm2-75.sj.redshift.com |
| Bgh = 2 1/2 Gj btw ur grammar sucked. and ur pictures werent pretty even if u say they are =[ |
| #4 Mattkid[97360] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| 5. |
| #5 'Final`Flare'[97361] |
| spider-wi044.proxy.aol.com |
5th!!!
Anyway, i didn't bother reading because it seemed to be over 600x800 and I decided that the text was too big/colorful and bold.
i give it a 4 for not reading ;o |
#6  [97364] |
| barry-asy-49.rutgers.edu |
i never saw such a big picture of bgh.
now i know why its not in ladder maps file |
| #7 PsychoChimpy[97365] |
| spider-ta052.proxy.aol.com |
| Yay top ten! Reading time |
| #8 skimoose[97366] |
| slip-32-101-212-55.ma.us.prserv.net |
| Ok Mr. smurfy guy. Um can you give me examples of grammar errors pls? I didn't think there were any. Flamming me wouldn't have anything to do with your lack of writing ability would it??? |
| #9 someone[97367] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
it's actually not a bad br, even if it is on bgh. i dont' care what map you play on, unlike some of these other "people."
gw. |
| #10 someone[97368] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| but you might wanna go see an english teacher to help you make those paragraphs flow better. |
| #11 skimoose[97369] |
| slip-32-101-212-55.ma.us.prserv.net |
| Can you give me examples of where it doesn't flow......because I had 4 different ppl proof it for me and they all agreed the flow was good. I would like to improve if I'm at fault. |
| #12 Kepow'Ob[97370] |
| ch5blm.bellglobal.com |
I skimmed through it because the yellow was a little hard on the eyes imo. Seemed alright, but you need to realize, any BR on BGH will automatically loose a few points when some one rates it.
One thing I noticed though,
Iambadatsc does an assimilator rush versus Terran[]Ryu's top most geyser. He quickly cancels it...
nothing wrong with the wording, just, you are protoss first of all, so a assimilator rush is pretty pointless unless you let it finnish, and it's on BGH, so there are multipul gas places anyway. I don't see the point. |
| #13 Khas[97371] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
Three things.
1) No BGH BattleReports.
2) No huge gayass collages like that first one.
3) No BGH BattleReports.
4) I think I crapped my pants. |
| #14 WarLeaderJustin[97372] |
| adsl-64-171-78-140.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| HOLY SHIT, MY FUCKING EYES |
| #15 willwinforfood[97373] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
| i have read it yet, but i did glance through those pics. i think the idea of picture only and text only was a good attempt, but a pointless one. just go with the pics(i could be wrong as i havent read the text yet). as for the pictures themselves, they were big and showed action but a little confusing with out numbering the order they go in. |
| #16 willwinforfood[97374] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
i *havent* read it yet rather.
first corrected typo with style oslt.
-wwff |
| #17 luae42[97378] |
| 64-60-21-42-cust.telepacific.net |
What? You say you didn't make any grammar errors? What is a "colonys" then? (Or, I guess that's more of a spelling error than a grammar error, but I just glanced at the BR for about seven seconds, and that's the first thing I noticed.)
=P |
| #18 BADKITTY![97381] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
Considering the following: Khas = satan, Joe.smurf=satan, noone else who commented negatively actually read the report, I can say that your report is clearly a hit! Good job, and great text only (my favorite kind).
The pictures were very easy to follow if you actually read the report, it should have been clear by the fact that it got posted by a text only and a +pics report, that the text was more important than the pics.
Anyway, I dont care what map you report on, so long as it's a sexy game, and a sexy report that flows well, and this BR is all that. 10! |
| #19 someone.[97389] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
"halby started off building scvs until 10 supply, then making a barracks. Immediatly following the barracks a depot was started. " you should combine the sentences, or maybe make a build order listing. tath way it's easier.
hm...oopsi seem to be at fault here...um...just make build order list. :)
and...yellow on black ain't so good on eyes. try something more pleasing, like light green on black, or some not so dark color. black on white is bad.btw i am talking complete nonsense, but if you want you can take some of my advice.
another thing...if you want a 10, i suggest playing on a map other than BGH, hunters, or even temple, cuz bgh is no good, huinters.. is also no good, and temple is over played. |
| #20 Psyonic_Reaver[97390] |
| 1Cust45.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Eyes. My Eyes. The yellow was too much. Well even if this was BGH (yuck) It was a pretty good attempt at a BR. I'd say this is way better than any of my BR'ers so GJ. But now try a 1v1 or a 2v2 on Dire or LT (Overplayed but 'eh) and you'll probably get 7 or higher. I thought that you had a pretty good flow but try to take more time in putting it together. Pretend that this is going to be graded at school and if you dont do a good job, you'll get grounded. Well thats my two cents. |
| #21 [SM]Strega~F[97393] |
| proxy4.senet.com.au |
Ah ignorance, where would we be without it?
Strega |
| #22 GoZuLu[97399] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
It was not SO bad. Beeing a Dane, I of cause have no problems with your gramma (i don't see the errors ;=).
It is not a Gold Report, but far better than 2½ ....
Then again, what do I know.
Have a nice day.
GoZuLu |
| #23 Ling-erie[97401] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
HOLY MOLY OMG!!!!
how big pics?
one of the gifs had a corrupted frame or something.. gogogo fix thanx.
Yellow text hurt my eyes, try to give it a pale yelly next time, not such a bright one.
I didn't read it all, i'll do so when i get home, looks pretty special, a lot of work i guess =]
hf |
| #24 willwinforfood[97404] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
| didnt mark4 or someone write a br on bgh? it got like 9s and 10s too. i'm not saying this is a gold report, i'm just saying bgh doesnt always mean the report is bad. |
| #25 ZeonPeon[97408] |
| cr862712-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
Y didnt u just submit the picture br instead of the all-text?
|
| #26 skimoose[97415] |
| h0050da0aa372.ne.mediaone.net |
Ling: Um, all the gifs worked fine when my friends proofed it for me.....I dont know what to tell ya.
Zeon: Did you read the disclaimer section? |
| #27 BADKITTY![97430] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
| hehe, Lots of people didn't like the yellow, but it seemed ok to me... I thought it made the text stand out, but all of the ppl who proof read the report had big monitors, and used a high resolution, so the text wasn't as HUGE as it must have appeared to all you small-monitor people. |
#28  [97552] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
Despite your opinion, map choice really didn't play a large role in my rating here. Not everyone is immediately biased.
Cheers. |
| #29 slappyputty[97589] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
I think your all just pussies. What the hell is up with the complaint againts yellow? If you don't like yellow tough luck, I doubt your eyes really hurt you at all. As to the report itself, I think you guys are being really unfair on giving it low ratings just because of color sceme and the fact that it was bgh. Bgh is played, and it is played quite often. Just because it is bgh dosen't mean that it takes no skill. It takes a different kind of skill, that is all. Grrrrr...
P.S. Khas = Satan |
| #30 slappyputty[97590] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
| as to the rating.... I give it an 8 |
| #31 BADKITTY![97600] |
| ss09.ny.us.ibm.com |
HA! Another KHAS=satan follower!... Anyway,
CattleBruiser,
What skimoose has been asking is: "usually when people get a bad rating on reports, the rater, or someone else, tells them what was wrong with it, so they can improve their skills, but on this report noone made any suggestions that had meaning (dont use yellow, wtf is that, dont play on bgh, wtf is that) So could you please post an explanation of why the report got a 6, and what he could do to improve it?"
And, I'm sure most ppl would agree, it's a perfectly valid thing to be asking. |
#32  [97631] |
| imsbbcf03a.netvigator.com |
| I didn't read it mainly because of the text color and huge font size. |
| #33 [97634] |
| imsbbcf03a.netvigator.com |
| I just saw the pictures. I don't like them either because they're confusing. Too many small pictures combined in a big one with no indication of which pic goes to which pic in a timely manner. I have no idea which "sub-pic" is the first, or second, etc.... |
| #34 Zalbag[97641] |
| chi-tgn-gjq-vty135.as.wcom.net |
you spelled chosen wrong numbnuts, its not "choosen".
wow, way to get lamers to proofread. |
| #35 iggy[97647] |
| adsl-64-167-13-137.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
I actually liked this BR.
I found the leprachuan paragraph to be amusing.
I also found the spelling mistakes amusing, which is better then annoying.
Nest time, instead of mispelling "Flaming" by putting two "m"s, put an e in there also.
ME FLEM U
I hope u know what flem is, cuz this whole joke is riding on that.
i give 7.9 |
| #36 Drefsab[97656] |
| ct91955-a.richmnd1.in.home.com |
I read most of this. The fact that I didn't get it finished is indicative of why I give it a 5. God love you for trying to do an alt-text, but man, you've got to be a damn good writer to be able to convey such a collosal battle using all words, and my friend, this you are not.
Cheerio,
Dref |
| #37 Iron Lung[97687] |
| 47.gs1.gj.net |
| ow, my retinas. |
#38  [97716] |
| frasier.ford.com |
| I enjoyed the few funny comments. However, the text went on too long with too many x troops attacked y troops, x troops survived, lather rinse, repeat, etc. |
| #39 BADKITTY![98015] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
| Death To all who oppose the proleteriate! VAGINA VAGINA VAGINA! um.. sorry, was bored. |
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