| #1 [SM]Strega~F[103225] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
| 1st!! |
| #2 Triped[103227] |
| 63.85.132.5 |
| =[ |
| #3 [SM]Strega~F[103228] |
| proxy2.senet.com.au |
Not bad, actually. I personally don't like fanfics unless they're hilarious, so I won't even hazard a guess at a rating. There were very few grammatical errors in there, which is always a good sign, but I just couldn't get into it.
Oh yeah, BUY STRIFESHADOW!!! (Or download the demo, such as I have done.)
Strega |
| #4 RubiksCube[103236] |
| work.shlink.de |
nice for a fanfic. I'd say 4-5 +1 for writing style.
I got the demo, too. Strega, come out of you dark little appartement, stop the lesbian videos and play with me ;) |
| #5 [SM]Strega~F[103237] |
| proxy6.senet.com.au |
Well, I'm still at home until late-February, so no apartment for me. I do have lesbian videos though...
Strega |
| #6 RubiksCube[103238] |
| work.shlink.de |
Hotel 'Mum' rules, eh?
I'll get home in like 6 hours (damn work) got get you ass online then so we can play some strifeshadow. The demo sucks for the fact that you cant play against a computer opponent, so I gotta test this on multiplayer. Additionally it could make up for a nice battlereport and you know how I love non-SC reports ;)
Nothing wrong with lesbians btw. lesbian or non-lesbian, if a girl doesnt suck cocks, she's out. |
| #7 [SM]Strega~F[103239] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
I'm online right now, dammit.
Go on instead of doing work. Be a man! =)
Strega |
| #8 [SM]Strega~F[103240] |
| proxy4.senet.com.au |
Oh BTW, in 6 hours, it'll be 3 in the morning. I have an exam at 9, so I definitely won't be on then. During the weekend I'll probably be practicing though.
Strega |
| #9 BOBBY357[103243] |
| spider-tl053.proxy.aol.com |
| sadness :*( |
| #10 RubiksCube[103244] |
| work.shlink.de |
it'll be 5:30 when my work finishes, hopefully I can go online for some hours then. Anyways we shouldnt use the comment section of this poor guy for chatter ;) Catch me on b.net as RubiksCube instead or send an e-mail to b.theege@web.de
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| #11 CaughtNaked[103246] |
| 205-222-90-182.mcps.k12.md.us |
| please no more text only, eyes burn... |
| #12 WrAth[103271] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
Well I won't take the general contempt showed on my piece of writing personally, since I'ts probably a little misplaced, this being battlereports.com. If I ever sumbit anything again, I'll make sure it's chock full of pretty colors, and snazzy images....THEN I'll slap down the dark narrative.
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| #13 Shadow D'Arc[103281] |
| spider-wk043.proxy.aol.com |
Actually, I enjoyed it. Search for "Shadow", I wrote a semi-poem(I didn't want to think/write in story form) that has kinda the same nature, if it wasn't deleted. And it's disinterest, not contempt, that they are showing, because it's dark natured. This should have also been in the SC section, because it deals with SC. Ah well. 6-7, I think.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #14 stonecoldnewbie[103287] |
| 24.245.65.200 |
| do not search for shadowdarcs writing |
| #15 Me[103297] |
| sdcax47-201.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
Lol
half the comment section is a convesation.
Not a bad story too. |
| #16 WrAth[103302] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
lol, First of all, don't correct me like that. Don't you DARE ever correct me or I'll verbally bitchslap you.(ooooo)=) Anyway, I say its a combo of both, all for 4.99
I took a peek at your...writing and I thought it was pretty good, pretty bloody and graphic too. I wouldn't call it poetry though because alot of things were repeated in a story life form IMO. Also, I don't really want to see concrete philosophical truths about life when you don't really seem qualified to give them(not that Iam either) "Love can't exist without hate, but hate can exist alone" What?! ummmm..no lol.
Although bright and imaginative, some of it didn't really seem to make alot of sense to me, but again that's just me.
Overall I enjoyed it though
but why the hell am I posting this is my comments section?
wheee I'm all fucked up |
| #17 stonecoldnewbie[103317] |
| nic-245-c65-200.mn.mediaone.net |
i told you not to look up his god damn writing
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| #18 WrAth[103319] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
| You're right, I'm sorry Stone Cold, I should have listened to your wise counsel |
| #19 Puppy[103324] |
| spider-ntc-tc062.proxy.aol.com |
| Was this a man or a sheep? And I think it would have been better if he was something small and annoying..like hamsters or bunnies...Or atleast a cow, cause then you could have them say "MOOOOO" before you throw them into the slaughter-house and you hear them mooing and cursing(in cow-language of course) at you as they are slowly turned into cheeseburgers. |
| #20 [SM]Strega~F[103337] |
| proxy4.senet.com.au |
Puppy, 'sheep' is a colloquial term for a person who follows along with everyone else. For instance, people who watch MTV and listen to pop music are sheep.
I hope they all die a horrible horrible death, whilst listening to {gasp} a band that writes their own music/lyrics and doesn't lip sync.
Strega |
| #21 Shadow D'Arc[103341] |
| spider-wg051.proxy.aol.com |
Wrath- Stay awake for a good 40 hours or so, dealing with stupid people. Then it will make a LOT more sense, heh. Far as the 'concrete philosophical truths', eh, thats just what I think. Sleep deprivation > Me.
Strega-I'll be getting M16 soon, need some help?
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #22 Puppy[103380] |
| spider-mtc-td084.proxy.aol.com |
| Strega I know that, I'm not that stupid...o wait yes i am. |
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