| #1 BigD[103879] |
| h24-67-77-181.cg.shawcable.net |
| first |
| #2 BigD[103881] |
| h24-67-77-181.cg.shawcable.net |
| And read, too. I'm kind of surprised at the fact that these primitive people are helping out. This is turning out very well. GW |
| #3 Furoius[103882] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| 2nd PERSON!! |
| #4 Furoius[103883] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| Its pretty good but u gotta make it longer.................if u combined about a weeks worth you would probably be getting gold ratings!! |
| #5 Furious[103884] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| lol, i spelt my name wrong in all the previos posts ;) |
| #6 ~ViLaToR~[103902] |
| 65.33.107.252.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
This whole story has been great, and i'm really into it.
Keep it going, and what do you say about maybe combining the next 6 chapters into one report?
Maybe you get a gold report... |
| #7 Sig.[103906] |
| host-216-77-208-154.fll.bellsouth.net |
Anyways I wrote that gay ass comment cuz I was in class and the bell had just rang, I was in a rush. Now that i have free time.. Yah man your story is great so far, and yes I really think combining like 5 chapters into one report will own ^^.
Keep it coming man, your making fanfics look good again.. :D |
| #8 stonecoldnewbie[103907] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
| fanfics never looked good |
| #9 |||l||||ll|||||[103914] |
| cdm-66-7-35-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| well i said it was crap but its getting better and youre pumping out material consistently, i rethink my opinion... of course im not going to read it but.. hey |
| #10 vasoric[103918] |
| dialup-204.42.28.177.bwsys.net |
| its really cool but for gods sake MAKE IT LONGER |
| #11 CaughtNaked[103920] |
| 206.214.2.179 |
| Maked one report of all the past ones then add like 3 more chapters to it and ull get a gold rating. |
| #12 Koh[103923] |
| h24-76-216-150.va.shawcable.net |
| When I'm done, I'm considering making em all into one report. I'm almost done now. Just two more chapters to go. Except Chapter 9 is the stories climax an will be about the size of chapters 4, 5 and 7 combined. Chapter 10 will be average in length and will just tie up loose ends. Don't expect the chapter 9, 10 release to be out for a while, cause it's a lot to write. Also, I'm already planning a sequal. This book your reading is actually more or less a prologue to the much larger sequal: Telekineasis. In that book I'll make super long chapters in order to get high ratings. But I have a feeling that chapters 9 and 10 are going to be really great. |
| #13 Thunder.[103928] |
| host-209-214-80-54.fll.bellsouth.net |
| Well stonecold, thats tru, fanfics never were good before.. that is, untill now.. I think this fanfic is great. BTW koh whats your name on bnet? :P |
| #14 stonecoldnewbie[103933] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
fan fics dont get rated unless theyre written by someone famous :[
reveal your smurf now or prepared never to be rated :P |
| #15 stonecoldnewbie[103934] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
oh meant to add "someone famous, or not at all"
just clarifying^_~ |
| #16 Koh[103935] |
| h24-76-216-150.va.shawcable.net |
| Koh_Leifoh is my b.net name, Thunder. |
| #17 Killah![103947] |
| gateway.providentnj.com |
| reading a fanfic 4 paragraph at a time sucks. Its as bad as dragon ball Z. Don't get me wrong however I like the fanfic alot being as it doesn't suck. But its literally taking weeks to read a pretty short story. |
| #18 Koh[103965] |
| h24-76-216-150.va.shawcable.net |
Well then thank God there are exactly 74 paragraphs in just chaoters 7 and 8. Obviously you don't know what a paragraph is.
See look, this is a new paragraph!
Anyways, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story:)
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| #19 Killah![103980] |
| gateway.providentnj.com |
| Hrm, I was both flamed and thanked in that comment. |
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