| #1 Keanu_Reaver[112175] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-198.sea.eschelon.com |
| enjoy, this one is a bit short and as always, all criticism is welcome |
| #2 Amoeba_Boy[112176] |
| spider-tk014.proxy.aol.com |
1st non author
GO TERPS!!!! |
| #3 Forever_Knight[112180] |
| 170.158.213.88 |
Wow. Now I have to wait to post Two Eyes: Part III. BR.com'ers get angry if there are three fan fics in a row in the reports section. Nice work, Reaver. I liked it.
-Forever_Knight |
| #4 SiG.[112181] |
| mia-this01.firn.edu |
That was awesome :)
I cant wait to find out what all that battle and shit meant.. Personally when you said that the ground was perfectly flat i thought that mabyh the mountain was there, just invisible.
anyways, cant wait till the next chapter.. GOGOGOG |
| #5 [112185] |
| 206.110.15.140 |
| #4 didn't feel like reading it... |
| #6 IcE-Inforcer[112186] |
| proxy.ord.marketscore.com |
| Im gonna read this, but b4 i forget, how do u get the background black??? Mark said he removed those feature??? Help would be welcome. |
| #7 IcE-Inforcer[112187] |
| proxy.ord.marketscore.com |
| Hurry! Write some more! Dont sleep dont eat! Write! Plz! Im gonna die! |
| #8 Keanu_Reaver[112188] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-229.sea.eschelon.com |
| to get black bg just put in the tags <table> and <td bgcolor="#000000"> |
| #9 IcE-Inforcer[112190] |
| proxy.sj3.marketscore.com |
Thank u so much :).
I checked source but it was kinda confusing. |
| #10 reaqu[112204] |
| cache-1.lnh.md.webcache.rcn.net |
#10
I normally dont like fanfics but this one is the only one i actually even read;)
Keep up the good work and keep em coming=D
7 |
| #11 Disgruntled Retard[112205] |
| spider-mtc-ta031.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice stoy. I need more caffine |
| #12 UltimateFire[112208] |
| spider-ntc-ta062.proxy.aol.com |
Hah! you win! this one was better than many similar stories I've read. I liked all the prophesisizing type stuff. On a side note, that battle with the big guy reminded me of the first couple minutes of the LotR movie.. where sauron is slapping all the humans around. LotR movie >>> everything.
I should get some sleep... |
| #13 Keanu_Reaver[112209] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-251.sea.eschelon.com |
| rofl i guess i should give lotr some credit, cause that is what i envisioned when i wrote that battle scene was sauron and his various ass kicking in the beginning of lotr |
| #14 Amoeba_Boy[112212] |
| spider-te081.proxy.aol.com |
| It seems that as you write more and more, the chapters get wierder and wierder |
| #15 hi[112219] |
| c-24-245-64-22.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| hey wahts up |
| #16 Anonymous[112221] |
| 216-224-146-176.thegrid.net |
| Neato story-o, Keano Reavo (speaking mexican) |
| #17 triped[112247] |
| 63.85.132.17 |
| Interesting how I seem to be the only person on this site who's not a dumbass anymore |
| #18 stardust8297[112251] |
| sdn-ar-018casfrMP166.dialsprint.net |
oooooh... dark and mysterious =P very intriguing =) well this part was awesome as usual--lots of descriptions, made it easy to envision what was happening. lol and just as suspenseful as the rest, dunno if i can wait for the next one =/ great job keanu, love the story =)
on a side note, i think i'm gonna have to see the lotr movie sometime soon... |
| #19 |]agomar[112294] |
| StCatherines-ppp109090.sympatico.ca |
| kinky action. |
| #20 God_Of_All_Raters[112298] |
| pt11-41.rapidnet.com |
| damn that was pretty sweet!! dude you gotta write some more so i actually have a good reason to come back!! keep up the good work! |
| #21 Ling-erie[112299] |
| host213-1-70-157.in-addr.btopenworld.com |
"all criticism is welcome"...
u asked for it man, next time yer online =] |
| #22 Keanu_Reaver[112306] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-185.sea.eschelon.com |
| ass ;) |
| #23 stardust8297[112336] |
| sdn-ar-018casfrMP012.dialsprint.net |
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
(don't ask me why i did that, cause i really have no idea...)
yes, i even scare myself sometimes =P |
| #24 Keanu_Reaver[112341] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-185.sea.eschelon.com |
| wierdo :P |
| #25 Ling-erie[112484] |
| proxy2.leeds.ac.uk |
yoyoyoyoyooyyoyooyyo
are u canadian? |
| #26 yoyo lover[118316] |
| sdn-ar-019casfrMP201.dialsprint.net |
did someone say yoyo???
where?!
i want one!!!!
gimme gimme!!! |
| #27 jimmy[134408] |
| cvpp-p-144-138-156-42.prem.tmns.net.au |
freak
-NJ |
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