| #1 Some_God[125304] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| 1st W00t |
| #2 mulla-the-bum[125305] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| 2nd i gotta go out and buy this game |
| #3 Some_God[125306] |
| proxy.or4.marketscore.com |
| Do you like it? |
| #4 Strupisch[125307] |
| proxys.sj3.marketscore.com |
While I felt it still had some problems, it was much improved. The writing had quite a few grammar mistakes e.g. So I said to myself "Why right it" - get someone to proofread it for you. I had to go to 640 x 480 resolution to see anything in the pictures, which kind of annoyed me. Also, go into a bit more detail. When he's going for 7 different kinds of guys, explain a bit more about what TYPES of guys he's using and for what they're supposed to be used. This isn't like Starcraft, where the (majority of the) people here know what it's all about.
GJ and keep at it, maybe this'll inspire me to get the ol' Empire Earth CD out of its case. |
| #5 Some_God[125308] |
| proxys.sj3.marketscore.com |
| ok i guess your right ,but as at the bottem of the page it states " the next report will be better " |
| #6 doobiesnacks[125309] |
| c-66-56-2-206.atl.client2.attbi.com |
| it was alright. ugh, if a pic screws up, screw with it until its not screwed up anymore. theres no point in posting a br if its not finished =[ |
| #7 Nafarias[125310] |
| 216.169.198.9 |
| Not a bad first effort. A little more detail about how this game is played would be nice (such as explaning why the horse-only strat doesn't work). Otherwise the HTML seems clean, so that's good. The language was a bit rough, but I've seen worse here. |
| #8 Some_God[125315] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| TIME im looking at that post right now and i c that you are the last post in that comment box no one F***ING agreed with you ... plus you cant stop me from posting ... and i dont do fanfics all the time |
| #9 Bla(r)g[125316] |
| h00045af32ef5.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| It's amazing how much sexier your reports look with scaled pics and a background, non? :) |
| #10 Some_God[125317] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| Ya ... |
| #11 Amoeba_Boy[125323] |
| cache-mtc-aa02.proxy.aol.com |
| definantly better, but i was still confused. I didnt know what the units were or anything else about this game really. there are no size limits, take as much room as you want to explain the pics and units |
| #12 Some_God[125333] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
| OK OK i will explain everything in the next battle report on EE |
| #13 corpus[125343] |
| c1986.resnet.uni.edu |
| writing style doesnt agree with me short and choppy, but not a bad report. |
| #14 Strupisch[125344] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| Also, do a report on the last age, the cyborg guy owns. raar |
| #15 CrackHeadJeb - Tyrant Rater[125347] |
| alteon-pcc2.iats.missouri.edu |
A moderate improvement over your first report, but I still have complaints.
The detail still seems to be lacking. I'd single instances like this out if this was a Starcraft report (which isn't good, since I have a good knowledge of Starcraft):
-How was Brave outresourcing Kick despite being the one harassed?
"But his forces were no match for the powerful army Brave had which feature 7 types of units and like 20 of them."
-Okay. What were the seven types of units? Explain how they were a strategically superior force compared to Kick's horse army. (which you never made clear how many there were) |
| #16 CrackHeadJeb - Tyrant Rater (continued)[125348] |
| alteon-pcc2.iats.missouri.edu |
-The game ending is unsatisfactory. Find a better, complete game to report on. One of the competitors having to quit before the clear resolution of the game greatly decreases the quality of the game. (unless it's a gimmick, like Mark4's rook corner report of T_mac)
There's more, but I think you're headed in the right direction. Good luck on your next one.
5.
-CHJ |
| #17 Some_God[125350] |
| proxys.sj3.marketscore.com |
| At least it better that n a 4 and that gives me a good feeling |
| #18 Who'sGotLag.IDO[125362] |
| clic-ibm28.uhcc.hawaii.edu |
I myself haven't thought much about low rating reports and what would get what, but I would consider this report to be a 4 rather than a 5. You had many mistakes and disorganization in your report.
Your poor grammer, spelling, misuse of homonyms (sounds the same, different meaning), and bad punctuation make me think you are either very young or English is not your first language (which is why I am including these parenthesis). These need to be improved for a high score. Not to mention the html too.
Your report should also be laid out much more clearly. The typical format is to do everything chronologically (as it happens). This report had battles taken out of context which could just have easily be written into the report.
Plus what CHJ said. |
| #19 LuckyNewbie:P[125366] |
| dialup-65.58.60.203.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| if i didnt know empire earth was 3d i wouldnt believe it from those pictures |
| #20 Timid[125367] |
| adsl-64-166-211-140.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
I have never played this game before but it sounded one sided. Also you tried to compensate for that by making it sound like Braveheart was losing.
More detail on units is needed. I don't remember you ever stating that Brave expanded but maybe that is what a farm implies? Grammer is needed of course.
Personally, I'd rather see you try to make a WAR3 or Starcraft report, but you sound pretty gun-hoe about this game..just explain it more for those of us that do not know how to play.
Hit points/Armor/Attack damage/speed/special abilities etc are examples. |
| #21 Timid[125368] |
| adsl-64-166-211-140.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| btw Id give this a 4 |
| #22 Some_God[125370] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
| Man Give me a break this is only my 2nd report |
| #23 Some_God[125371] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
| LuckyNewbie:P you gotta give me advice |
#24  [125372] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
You've gotten plenty of good advice so I'll simply say that your background was too dark for black text
Cheerio |
| #25 DarkInferno_IV[125383] |
| host217-36-16-101.in-addr.btopenworld.com |
| Time, STFU. Don't bitch about others' reports if your own are crap. |
| #26 DarkInfero_IV[125386] |
| pc-62-30-67-132-az.blueyonder.co.uk |
TRADING MY OCCY RING FOR SOJ
OR WF WITH 197% ALSO LOOKING FOR
THUNDERGODS SKIN OF THE MAGI I HAVE
ATMAS, IK, AND VENOM GRIP MESSAGE ME WITH OFFERS |
| #27 Ender[125388] |
| 24-90-17-169.si.rr.com |
| wtf? |
| #28 Redemption6[125389] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
As CHJ (whoa hes back) said, there were a lot of things lacking in this report.
- The grammar was a huge problem. You spelled mine "myn" and like write "right" at a few times, and you screwed up the wording a lot.
-When you are BRing a game that no one knows a clue about, it is best to go into as much detail as possible and be able to explain each and every unit and why it is good. You simply brushed by the unit descriptions, basically mentioning just one type of unit, the horse. I didn't even know the horse mounted people until i saw ur pics. And how did brave outmine him anyways? I never saw any expansions all game.....
- and lastly, a game where you can start out at an advantage is a shitty game...
4 is a bit unfair, since it had pics, but 5-6 maybe. |
| #29 ZerG~LinG[125394] |
| p460-90.ppp.get2net.dk |
The pics were just suck :P
Look at LN's report on the same game, and please just use paint if you can mess up a pic in photoshop :o |
| #30 Jaood[125397] |
| hc6524652.dhcp.vt.edu |
| Hmmm, when I compare pics from Luckies EE report and this it's like they are two different games all together. ZOOM IN, man. :) |
| #31 Some_God[125398] |
| proxy.ord.marketscore.com |
| Ill desribe everything as much as i can in the next BR i make and TIME you smell... :D |
| #32 demon_blade3[125408] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-2-96.rasserver.net |
| you know wat would've made this game more interesting? atomic bombers, man they are almost as cool as demons |
| #33 Some_God[125410] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
| ... actually atomic bombers suck ... they too easy to kill .. dam its so hard to find a game worth reporting on : ( |
| #34 Strupisch[125436] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| Some_God, promise you'll zoom in!! |
| #35 Some_God[125437] |
| proxy.or3.marketscore.com |
| I promise but its so hard to find a good game to report : ( |
| #36 CHJ[125446] |
| alteon-pcc1.iats.missouri.edu |
Yeah. But the effort in finding a good game is well worth it!
-CHJ |
| #37 demon_blade3[125530] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-1-89.rasserver.net |
| agh atomic bombers do not suck. get a squad of life four with two on each side of the map, and use them to take out defenses. clears the way for cybers quite nicely. and good job not saying demons suck or else i would be so mad!!! |
| #38 Some_God[125560] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
| Demons??? i dont think they are in the game ... oh and im almost finished on my next BR |
| #39 demonz own everything[125646] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-1-224.rasserver.net |
i dont need to say anything but "demon". it's a cool word isnt it?
demon
demon
i'm demon high now |
| #40 ghetto-boy2[130228] |
| modemcable202.222-202-24.mtl.mc.videotron.ca |
| ghetto-boy2 is my account name on diablo2 closed useast so contact me if u have occy ring for 1 soj! |
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