| #1 tepses[126852] |
| spider-ntc-tb033.proxy.aol.com |
| fuck fanfics. and this one is too short to acurrately gauge suckiness anyways. at least it looks semi well written. |
| #2 Mindthief[126853] |
| dsl-65-185-176-141.telocity.com |
| 2 |
| #3 KiLo_G[126854] |
| 12-236-98-39.client.attbi.com |
| i wouldnt mind seein anotha part to it, fanficz b aight ta me cuz |
| #4 Lieutenant[126860] |
| adsl-67-39-3-251.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
| i want to stab the "reporter" and everyone who replied before me in the face. they're keeping me from my hard-won "1st wootwoot lolz" place. |
| #5 DarkLord[126864] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
| dont like it...fine i make br with inforcer |
| #6 DarkLord[126866] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
wrong comment section
shit!! |
| #7 DarkLord[126867] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
isnt NightWisp Zerg-ling name for W3
-comment whore- |
| #8 DarkRider[126883] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
WTF@size.
If you are going to make a fanfic, do not make it this short |
| #9 Ownage_Mobile[126884] |
| ool-43539e8a.dyn.optonline.net |
| yea, this was a little short, more like a trailer for a fan-fic than an actual fan-fic. Maybe br.com should make a minimum word requirement, then maybe it would turn of some of the people who just spam kakakakakakakakaka over like 3 lines and post it. |
| #10 EldritchEvil[126887] |
| nr11-216-196-186-184.fuse.net |
| DarkLord: no. Nightwisp is not Zerg-Ling. Zerg-Ling is Zerg-Ling. |
| #11 likethis_Ownage_moble[126889] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| kakakakaakakakkakaakakakkakakaakakakakaakakakaakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakaakakakakakakakakakakakakakaakakakakakaakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakaakakakakakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakaakkakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakaakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakaakakakaakakakakakakkkaakakakkakakakakaakakakakakakakakkaaakkakakakakakakakakakakakaakkakaakakkakakakakakaakakakakakakkaakakakakakakaak akakkakakaakka kakakak akakakakakakkkkkkakakakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakaakkakakakaakkaakakakakakkaakakakakakakakakakka kkaakakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakkaakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakaakakakakakakakakkaakkakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakaakakakakakakakkakaakkakakakakakaakakkakakakakakaakkaakkaakkakakqakaakakakakakakakak |
| #12 IcE-Inforcer[126891] |
| proxys.sj3.marketscore.com |
Wtf dont fuck up the fuckin comment section.. fuck.
This was pretty good IMO, for its size. But a few things didn't
make sense. Like, the "few swift elves" managed to make it
in the city, but they were too dazed to tell the rest of the people about the attack. ????
Overall... a generous 5-6. On 2020123. J/k. Gj
-IcE- |
| #13 im)aloyalguy[126899] |
| crtntx1-ar4-4-47-083-008.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
| I got 3things to say.First im changing my name to SCC-HBK.Next this was too fucking short and,dont even think about doing part2 for this.Just start over plz!!!.And last,Ice I think thats too many "fucks" for you.I think you can only use 1 fuck per comment.Im not sure but I gtg cause I got a problem down there.And by down there I mean....Well I guess you dont wanna know......^_^ |
| #14 SCC-HBK[126900] |
| crtntx1-ar4-4-47-083-008.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
| OMG.This damn thing is being gay!!!Man...fuck this fuckfuckfuck.opppps!! |
#15  [126921] |
| 203.98.135.2 |
| wTF is this shit? |
| #16 Chris[126928] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
| Yeh, I told you. Fanfics are stupid. |
| #17 ZeeBeeLee[126934] |
| CPE0050ba445bab.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| *caugh*caugh* |
| #18 SCC-HBK[126936] |
| crtntx1-ar4-4-47-083-008.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
| THIS IS NOT A FANFIC.If it is,its a poorly done fanfic.Anyway,to make a good fanfic,you gotta make it long.This is like an intro(too short,duh) |
| #19 HasuN00b[126951] |
| pool-138-89-70-64.mad.east.verizon.net |
| Please learn how to use paragraphs. |
| #20 Nightwisp[126966] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| well, judging by the response this fic is dead. Cya |
| #21 Pay Your Taxes[127191] |
| nat2.eaglesi.net |
| You have potential, so don't settle for just a small tidbit. We honestly don't want that. ;) If we are expecting fanfics, we are expecting top-of-the-line stuff. I'm not saying you arent capable of that. Just try again. |
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