| #1 Sovereignty[135462] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
| well...it was a nice try |
| #2 Sovereignty[135463] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
whoops. gg enter button. anywho continued:
have someone proofread it next time. countless sentences started with lowercase letters, and the grammar literally put me in pain. the graphics look like mspaint. i suggest you download something like a trial of PSP or *cough* find a copy of photoshop. it was hard to tell how good the game was, because you kept trying way too hard to be funny, and failed.
All in all: Better graphics, more detail, better game, and please get someone to proofread.
But hey, at least it's not a fanfic :)
5 |
| #3 SiG[135464] |
| adsl-155-190-90.bct.bellsouth.net |
Somewhat disorderly..
My first thought "WHAT THE FUCK" when i saw bright yellow on white bg.
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| #4 DarkRider[135465] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
lol.
Good effort..keep reading the HTML guides and trying new things. If you have Word throw it in there and do a grammar check.
Lastly, at the end make it so that "Sabotage Report" is together, cause it looks kinda funny with the "report" being outside the picture. |
| #5 Sabotage[135466] |
| pool-68-161-58-119.ny325.east.verizon.net |
err, ok i know my grammaer wasn't good.
thanks fo tips |
| #6 LameJoker[135467] |
| ip-209-23-3-135.modem.logical.net |
Definitely your best report ever. You had good detail on the battles, especially the opening rush. I thought the pictures were fine myself. The biggest problem was definitely the grammer, though. Sentences begin with a capital letter. Along with that, there were a few spots where you had sentences that would've gone fine with commas just dismembered into gory little pieces by rapacious periods.
(heh I kinda like that sentece)
O yes, the only real complaint on the topic (besides, of course, a better game ;]) is the part where you described the turrets for defence against the mutalisks. It was probably just me reading to fast, but it seemed that someone could've missed the part where the mutas actually raided.
PS don't listen to Sovereignty, hes a little harsh ;) |
| #7 -101st-Garand[135469] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
Hmm...an actual BR. That being said, it's not Drefsab or CB, but it was ok. Yellow on white = no thx. Decent attempt at a good br(Did that sentence make ANY sense?), though you need some HTML skills.
...I should be one to talk. I can bearly make white text on black back ground O.o
Oh ya...It's well known that goliaths suck vs zerg. M&M/Sci vessel/tank all the way |
| #8 NarcoticTerran[135472] |
| 137.229.232.216 |
| Prersonaly I love using mech vs a zerg.. tank/goliath has worked well for me in the past. But I just love marines ^^ |
| #9 SiX5532ONE[135475] |
| pcp03087153pcs.selrsv01.pa.comcast.net |
#8 umm...yeah. goliath/tank works for me. Missle upgrade for Guards.
gj Sabotage, but white is no good for bg. |
| #10 [135476] |
| mnet-baca244-13-199.monarch.net |
hmmm, not bad, but there some places where the pics screwed up the text. overall though, not bad althoughh a game with better players might have been nice(try downloading some replays of good players, and try to spend more time on each report(maybe do a 2 game or something seeing how quickly you make them
and dont tell us you are the fag k, that destroys the POINT of creating a new name.
6, 7 due to the lack of new reports |
| #11 Swiffel[135477] |
| ip68-14-142-34.ri.ri.cox.net |
| I just skimmed through it really quick, but from what I could tell it was a nice report. I didnt read the comments so I dont know if this has been suggested but a color background with a different color text would be better. Also, M+M vs zerg air, not goliaths, unless its guardians. :P |
| #12 ZeaL[135478] |
| proxys.ia4.marketscore.com |
nice to see you change your name, and gj with the report
:)
i say 7 |
| #13 lurkerburger7[135479] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| nice job dogfood. I KILLED STILLFLY's MUTAS! |
| #14 Sabotage[135480] |
| pool-68-161-58-119.ny325.east.verizon.net |
YES! BRING ON THE COMMMENTZ!
#6 -thanx
#9 - white is a good background, but the yellow, i admit, sucked. some of Mark4's best reports were white back, but i personally like black bg the most. wanted something different
#10- ur right.
once again, thanks for the feedback. |
| #15 Sabotage[135481] |
| pool-68-161-58-119.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| JEREMY! WASSUP! (he is lurkerburger from game) |
| #16 BiGRoOStER[135482] |
| pcp02705884pcs.dalect01.va.comcast.net |
| i _cant_ stand gols vs zerg unless i see guards...they are LD i swear, they cant move at all, they are like inbred hicks cant even walk, so i perfer my marines and medics, nice report, and yea background was ehh, yea, u just read other ones |
| #17 Sabotage[135483] |
| pool-68-161-58-119.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| this is the first time i got almost no hate mail :) |
| #18 SiX5532ONE[135526] |
| client-151-198-243-110.qdx-it.com |
#17 That's because this is the most homophobic group on the internet. Personally, I thought your old handle was funnier.
Go on with your bad, queer self. Your reports are definitely improving. I'd give this a 6. |
| #19 Sabotage[135533] |
| pool-68-161-58-119.ny325.east.verizon.net |
nooo who gave me a six! DAMN.
#18- most people don't like my old self, |
| #20 lurkerburger7[135537] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| Nice 6.5 brian! |
| #21 jermit[135538] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
brin how do u rate br's?
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| #22 jermit[135539] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
password?
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| #23 Sabotage[135547] |
| pool-68-161-58-119.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| yup |
| #24 trenuterasasasasabasasabasaNASASASA[135555] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
hey brinnard.....wtf is with the 6.5// this looks like a 2.5 .. j.k. its good anyway. answer me onbnet plz.. unless ur rpeorting that game i left... i got pissed cuz that guy was hacking and swarmed zlings when i haddmy 1st bc. anwyasys u rememge trhat right? ok.. u think agbout it.
-trenuterasasasasabasasabasaNASASASA |
| #25 Sabotage[135624] |
| pool-68-161-58-119.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| TRenut i hate you. |
| #26 trenuterasasasasabasasabasaNASASASA[135651] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
dont hate me.
anyways the picturs are good.
i like the one where chin is gettitng beat my jreyms hydras
i cant bileve jeremy acually did sumthing to chin!
A M A Z E!
-trenuterasasasasabasasabasaNASASASA |
| #27 jimmy[135673] |
| 144.138.240.243 |
This is good good.
Nice name, better report.
Kepp it up Sabotage!
-NOTJimmy |
| #28 SAbotage[135683] |
| pool-68-161-58-119.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Feb. 3rd: tanks fo coments jim. you should see the br coming. its a lot cooler, and i personally think its funnier. |
| #29 jermit[135684] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| hey shut up tree im not that bad |
| #30 SpAwN[135778] |
| 217.129.66.62 |
nice koment sabotage keep the good work :)
Spawnzz@mail.pt |
| #31 trenuterasasasasabasasabasaNASASASA[135800] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
lol
yes u r
lol |
| #32 __________[135801] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
wtf is wrong with u 2day.
ur acting gay
omg |
| #33 jimmy[135854] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-206-126.prem.tmns.net.au |
yeah just wait until the better brs go away :)
-NOTJ |
| #34 the-nut[136741] |
| ool-182e2ecc.dyn.optonline.net |
| i hate this but it was a good and bad whatever jeremy rules when he attacked chin |
| #35 Stillfly_chi[136759] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| dogfood9(sabotage_) i ruled in that game against lurkerburger. I am like the bomb. |
| #36 Sabotage[136894] |
| pool-68-161-58-14.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| last |
| #37 jimmy[137736] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-207-13.prem.tmns.net.au |
last! gogo Sabo
-NJ |
| #38 Beans of Wrath[138457] |
| 199.164.68.181 |
| Like Sovereignty stated, you need to do a better job with the english. I didn't actually read the report, I couldn't get past the first few sentences. I did have a look at the pictures on the way down. They aren't very presentable. Just keep working on it. I don't know how long it took you to make this report, but next time set aside a little more time to work things out. |
| #39 Sabotage[138595] |
| pool-68-161-57-57.ny325.east.verizon.net |
April 2, 2003
Yeah this game I remember well. :) bring back memories. |
| #40 LurkerBurger7[138923] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| 40 |
| #41 Sabotage[139530] |
| pool-68-161-64-46.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| laster |
| #42 LurkerBurger7[140775] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
lastest
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| #43 Sabotage[141956] |
| user-2ivec1e.dialup.mindspring.com |
| lastism eternally |
| #44 <img "www.battlereports.com/users/Sabotage/Sabotagelogofinal.gif[144347] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| dr |
| #45 /Sabota<img "www.battlge/Sabotagelogofinal.gif">[144348] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| s |
| #46 <img "www.battlereports.com/users/Sabotage/Sabotagelogofinal.gif">[144349] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| s |
| #47 Shuriken[144952] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
;-:0
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| #48 saboage[151232] |
| ool-44c25deb.dyn.optonline.net |
pen0r
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