| #1 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[139178] |
| 209-234-160-70.gen.twtelecom.net |
| FIRST I PWN AHAHAHAH |
| #2 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[139181] |
| 130.94.106.249 |
This is probably one of the best reports since all the regulars left.
9-10 |
| #3 hmm[139183] |
| 12-237-214-46.client.attbi.com |
| i noticed how blue clicked on the DH at about 20 minutes into game when red was creeping the bottom of the middle area.. |
| #4 Sorbent[139187] |
| AKCF3-GGI.xtra.co.nz |
Wow... two better than average reports in a row :) Amazing for a first br, keep it up
8-9
Bit more humour would be good, it got knida boring, all description, or maybe it's 2 am and I'm too tired to see it all, wateva
-Sorb |
| #5 BlueRibbon[139188] |
| host4.mvsd.com |
GJ. Even though i dislike Warcraft3 i enjoyed the report. Mountain Kings and Archmages are awesome ;D.
8-9 |
| #6 ZerG~LinG[139211] |
| p413-025.ppp.get2net.dk |
Roar!
First of all, this is damn nice.
I like the little unit icon updates, nice graphic way to tell the reader how many troops on each side. Pics were nice and simple, though you have a tendency to use a lot of different pics and squeeze them all together around a small piece of text, using left and right align. This also fucked up a few times. Also try to spread your pics out a bit more, sometimes there was like 4-5 paragraphs with no pics, and text wasn't the most reader friednly I've ever seen. A bit padding on the sides, maybe some line height would do you well.
All in all, really, really nice report.
Solid 9 |
| #7 Lost[139213] |
| PC022896.reshall.uidaho.edu |
| hella nice man |
| #8 LameJoker[139215] |
| pool-129-44-16-87.alb.east.verizon.net |
Awesome. MSPaint? Didnt' know it was possible.
However:
I enjoy Warcraft 3. However, this is a textbook example of gaycraft. Seriously... 2 ankhs? That won the game for the human. Not saying the NE had no chance after that, or that the ankhs took care of all the work, its just that NE would clearly have won if not for that.
nyway...WHOOWHOOWHOOO!!!!MASS DotT!!!! you gotta luv em. |
| #9 Augury[139218] |
| rh141-48.resnet.ucsd.edu |
Thanks for the comments.
Sorbent: I'm working on humor. It's not exactly my specialty.
Zerg~Ling: Yeah, I switched the point of view around quite a few times, so perhaps I should just stick to one. I'll keep in mind the pic spacing next time too. For line height: do you mean space above and below each line? |
| #10 2Cautious[139233] |
| adsl-68-72-87-180.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
All I can say is good.
8-9 |
| #11 [139323] |
| mnet-baca244-13-199.monarch.net |
wow, excellent. a solid gmae, nice lessons learned and it was very enjoyable, esp. for a 1st timer.
keep writing
easy 9
|
| #12 NovaStaR[139364] |
| dorset-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
Sweet first report. - 8-9
u gotta love those MK's huh |
| #13 Smeagol[139394] |
| dorset-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
Gj man
its all true thou scotTt is right u have only got 13 comments and a spammer like fuzzy bunny has 37.
people dont like to comment on someones report unless they can flame.
and you all know its true...
btw audrey great Job write again
9+ |
| #14 Augury[139403] |
| rh141-48.resnet.ucsd.edu |
Yeah, I'm a bit disappointed by the number of comments myself, but I know people read it (and probably enjoyed it) since some more have downloaded the replay than commented.
The reason behind the reporting is to put out an enjoyable piece of work anyways, right? Suits me. |
| #15 Narcotik[139418] |
| dialups-293.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| Wow, only 15 comments for this fine report!? wtf!? no praise? well I thought it was excellent. It was long, gory, and it was a kickass game. Couse i dont play war3 myself (stuck in the past) but this is the type of report that makes me double think that... |
| #16 Phoenix[139429] |
| 195.162.89.162 |
Excellent report, one of the best I've read here. Definititly worth a 9 if not a 10.
Humor is always appreciated, but not necessary. All in all, fantastic for a first timer. |
| #17 ZerG~LinG[139449] |
| p443-118.ppp.get2net.dk |
Such a shame there isn't anymore comments, but I think people definetly read and enjoyed.
And yes, line height is the space between lines like u said.
Again, nice work, hope you write again! |
| #18 iLohcin[139545] |
| ip68-108-140-106.lv.lv.cox.net |
| Damn, I might have to reinstall war3(I play the beta and didn't do duel install) just to watch that report. Only part that bugged me was that I was thinking during the whole last fight "WTF!? Use bear form!" but that is not your fault. Promising report and I wait for you next on anxiously. |
| #19 SFE-Ackmajin[139649] |
| cache-ra02.proxy.aol.com |
Solid Report.. cant see why this shouldnt get a solid 9...
Work on keeping it shorter though. |
| #20 NotJim[139710] |
| 144.139.221.1 |
You're not the only one who's disappointed, Augury.
Kickass for a first. How much time did you spend on this? |
| #21 Augury[139901] |
| dyn128-54-141-48.ucsd.edu |
| Eh, on and off for about three weeks. I'd say somewhere within the ballpark of 40-50 hours. |
| #22 Kinly[139938] |
| iprism.newan.org |
AWSOME Report 9.5-10
needed pics spreadaround more like ~Ling already stated, but overall a excellent report. |
| #23 IcE-Inforcer[140104] |
| nrba2-81.onlink.net |
Holy fucking... fuck.
Dood it took me 30 seconds just to dl the text. Give my modem a break feck!
Jk gj keep it up make more.
Except for the inverted color intro pic. That was no thanx ;).
-IcE- |
| #24 Dialtone[140172] |
| vdp149.ath06.cas.hol.gr |
| I almost missed this one. Great report even if a little on the image-heavy side. Many of the shots ddin't really add up to the br. One more thing, calling heroes by their normal names was incredibly weird. o,o . A great report. |
| #25 ZerG~LinG[140208] |
| p454-21.ppp.get2net.dk |
Augury, make another report please :o
Brilliant, this. |
| #26 Augury[140220] |
| dyn128-54-141-48.ucsd.edu |
| Eh, I dunno about that. I'm playing on beta until summer / TFT releases and I don't plan on reporting unless I observe a game or the replay function comes out. The problem is, I don't know any channels where I can go observe games and the public channel that I frequent (only Human Castle, actually) doesn't have the same .... environment as the Human Castle on Lordaeron - people don't trash talk each other and demand 1v1s too often. |
| #27 striz[142092] |
| CPE00a0cc2d2b10-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
great job. unit updates were golden, and really made me feel like I was playing the game (with the icons and whatnot).
gj, 9.5.
striz |
| #28 CMOT_dibbler[146745] |
| 194.151.4.99 |
| Just wanna say thanks for a helluva good read. Make more! |
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