| #1 the-nut[139629] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| Hoped u liked my first wc3 report |
| #2 2Cautious[139631] |
| adsl-68-72-109-161.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| Mmmm... needs more detail; needs more battle. |
| #3 the-nut[139632] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| dont forget to check out the (DP) website |
| #4 LurkerBurger7[139633] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
hmmmm...a definite improvement. Your text is slightly messy and your writing style isn't the greatest. The report was also short.
6 |
| #5 Psyonic_Reaver[139637] |
| 0-1pool15-187.nas6.portland1.or.us.da.qwest.net |
Details. Yes. You need to start writing like you would if you wanted a good grade on a paper.
Try reading Giga's BR's. Good example how to write and maybe stick to Br'ing 1v1's for awhile until your writing improves.
6 |
| #6 Sabotage[139638] |
| pool-68-161-64-46.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| -_- |
| #7 Heaven02[139639] |
| 057.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
2 things.
1) Your writing style needs alot if work.
2) However, compared with your last report this is a huge improvement.
look forward to ur next WAR3 report, gj |
| #8 EldritchEvil[139645] |
| nr11-216-196-191-110.fuse.net |
TOP TEN ON A THE-NUT BR!!!!!!111one
No, seriously, what the other guys said. |
| #9 the-nut[139646] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| ty heaven02 |
| #10 Timid[139651] |
| adsl-64-166-208-132.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
Wow...........
Ummmmmm
Better then your last report...but you need a little more detail...example it seemed like you went from point B to point D skipping points A and C.
I didnt really like the X's all over the map either..but that might just be your style. |
| #11 eLude[139656] |
| ool-182faa3c.dyn.optonline.net |
| 10! ;( |
| #12 Mark4[139657] |
|
| One sided and you just massed one unit. Not much of a game. Only the pics saved it. |
| #13 Slotham[139658] |
| euryale.its.adfa.edu.au |
Ok, a few points from your previous BattleReports that are still relevant here:
1) Try and report a game that you didn't play in.
2) Don't try and get a report out for the sake of it. Wait until a good game, spend time writing a report that will give justice to the players and they're skill.
3) Your writing style still has the feeling that your talking to a friend. Try and write from a 3rd persons perspective.
Better than your last, but not by much. The pics were alright but the X's on the mini-map, that wasn't done well.
5 |
| #14 NotJim[139698] |
| 144.139.221.1 |
ARGH!
ALL BITMAP!
SAVE US PLEASE!
SABOTAGE!
PLEASE TEACH HIM!
*sobs*
Ok, joking. Not bad thou! Get a new name later. I didn't need to (even though I had a PATHETIC 1.5 start) coz i rocked later. |
| #15 LurkerBurger7[139725] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| Eldritch sure wouldn't like #10's comment. Trust me. I know. |
| #16 LurkerBurger7[139742] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| ooops i mean #11 |
| #17 SAbotage[139836] |
| pool-68-161-64-46.ny325.east.verizon.net |
WHY! wHY A SIX! HWWTYWET
tjw
gw
WHY!!!!!! |
| #18 Ackmajin[139855] |
| cache-ra03.proxy.aol.com |
decent Report, i give it a 5
Also Check our 1falsemove.50megs.com for a new BattleReport archive |
| #19 NotJim[139895] |
| pad-cache1-1.cache.telstra.net |
T_T
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| #20 ZeaL[139909] |
| proxys.ord.marketscore.com |
| OMG you guys are crazy...ALright, i'll give him some credit because he's only 11 but why doesn't he listen to what #13 said? Do these people actually think these games are interesting? Ooh, I massed, he massed, i won, woohooo, gj, 4. |
| #21 LurkerBurger7[139946] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| wait wait. Man zeal is right. |
| #22 Chris[140006] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
Doesn't matter how old he is.
BMP = bad.
Effort is visible, however, and we must all appreciate that.
Newbie game = bad.
6.0 |
| #23 the-nut[140183] |
| ool-182e2756.dyn.optonline.net |
| stupid bmp i didnt kno bmp loaded so slow my next report will be JPG |
| #24 Smeagol[140372] |
| dorset-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
dont do gay drawings and text with microsoft paint it looks fucking shit
trust me just use normal text |
| #25 el_sux0r[140478] |
| epsl-302.umd.edu |
"Soon enough they met and the faught"
I think as long as you cut down on that sort of thing, you should have an 8 on your next report. =) |
| #26 [142161] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| a |
#27  [142162] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| fj |
| #28 Sabotage[144343] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
heh
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| #29 Desert Demon[155689] |
| dsl-KK-140.192.95.61.touchtelindia.net |
| 6?? |
| #30 Beastback[163796] |
| host64-31.pool870.interbusiness.it |
| HILLO HO HO! HE HE HO HO! ERIC STE HECK! |
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