| #1 JSH (nscs40p15.remote.umass.edu)[9781] |
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| Next time could you please break up your sentences and paragraphs because it makes the whole battle report hard to read and hard to understand what's going on if there's no section breaks to indicate when one event ends and another begins and you should especially do this if you move onto a new game like game 2 there it would be easy to overlook and well sometimes this hurts people's eyes and i can't say that you're going to get a very high rating for this because there are no pictures and the writing style is kind of bland and again like I said above it's hard to read and you don't have to keep telling us you were a newbie back then several times and also it's hard to write a report if you're in the game yourself and not watching it because you don't know what the other person is doing all the time and that can sometimes take away from the continuity of the report but then again too much continuity like one continuous stream of words like this isn't very good either because some people will get tired of it and not read it all the way through and that is bad because you'd like people to read your entire battle report so that they can give you good comments instead of silly ones like this one. |
| #2 Blank (168.hartford-01-02rs.ct.dial-access.att.net)[9785] |
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heheh, for example, I couldn't even read all of JSH's comment it was so annoying=]
Side note: Don't report on games you've played 30 years ago, as your bound to leave out alot of details that might of been important to the game (IE, the name of the MAP).
Blank |
| #3 ~DOA~ (ideabox1.bestbuy.com)[9788] |
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| NICE PARAGRAPH! I GUESS THE SUBJECT OR EVENTS NEVER CHANGED, HOW ODD =( |
| #4 JSH (nscs11p8.remote.umass.edu)[9789] |
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Blank is more annoying than JSH.
He sucks me into an MTG game I don't know how to play, and then kills me!
What a bastard. :) |
| #5 T_Mac (ts7-45t-40.idirect.com)[9792] |
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| Argh, USE PARAGRAPHS! |
| #6 TheRubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[9795] |
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| Bah, blank just wanted to get back at you for doing something to him that he's done to me no less than 10 times =] |
| #7 =Silencer= (sea-pm3-5-p139.wolfenet.com)[9815] |
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Thanks for the comments, although i must say that i don't know why the heck it posted it with no paragraphs. sorry about that. was it pretty good even though it's paragraphs were screwed?
Someone has gotta tell me what i did wrong. everything just closed in on itself. |
| #8 Billy-Bob-WhackaPecker (ip112.tucson3.az.pub-ip.psi.net)[9828] |
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| (this comment deleted) |
| #9 T.T.Boy (ncache1.ford.com)[9832] |
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| I stopped reading a third of the way through, I coundn't take it. |
| #10 Slicer (ip61.portland12.or.pub-ip.psi.net)[9844] |
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