| #1 [WP]BlacKnight[41761] |
| 134.240.54.43 |
Eeek!!
Having dusted this off and reread it I realize how far I have come as a battlereporter. The numerous errors and other problems really just jump out at me. The later version I did with pictures cleaned up most of the problems with this report. Due to stupidity on my part though, it will take me a bit to actually submit my other reports to BR.com.
I appreciate any constructive (or destructive) comments as I found the ones regarding my last BR....enlightening.
Have a good one.
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| #2 -MrCow-[41763] |
| tsmia5-304.gate.net |
| First non-author...i think..now to read the report..hehe. |
| #3 -MrCow-[41765] |
| tsmia5-304.gate.net |
Ok, a few pointers...
1)Although u did say u tried to take pics and somehow ur comp started acting gay and didn't, i forgive u THIS time, but next time, use pics. They boost ur rating up really high (unless ur like a godly player/writer like Mark4 who doesn't even need pics to get a default 8...hehe).
2)Color code names. Kinda hard to follow the battles and such. I thought this was BGH for a sec when u said top-left, top-right, but then I saw the map Bone-Canyon, so I breathed a sigh of relief.
Ok, anyway, pretty decent report. Keep writing.
-MrCow- |
| #4 [WP]BlacKnight[41767] |
| 134.240.54.43 |
| Well in the near future (hopefully) I will get the second version of this report submitted. In that version I have color coding, pics, and quite a bit of editing that this report needed. I appreciate your comments though and as soon as I learn how to unretard myself I will submit the better version of this report along with several other reports. |
| #5 <u><font color=blue>Protophobic</font></u>[41772] |
| porgyon-10.dynamic.rpi.edu |
Well, the writing was bland and unmemorable, there was no humor, no pictures, and hardly any use of html.
I know its your first but i think its time for someone to put their foot down on br's with little time and effort put into them.
I give it a 2.
No offense, hope you keep writing br's and take this as a learning experience. |
| #6 probe[41773] |
| 242849hfc133.tampabay.rr.com |
| i beat mark4, i must be even more godly. |
#7  [41791] |
| we-24-24-166-145.we.mediaone.net |
I shouldnt be a rater I guess. I read like the first 10 lines then got bored. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and give it a 5.
Tip : Get the readers attention early, then keep it. |
#8  [41921] |
| 11.crrg2.xdsl.nauticom.net |
| It wasn't bad though. Keep trying, read the guides, compare to the 10.0s and you'll be writing 9+ reports in a few weeks. |
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