| #1 Afro~[potato][43012] |
| adsl-63-200-51-102.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Comments would be appreciated. I would just like to know where you viewers want me to improve on. |
| #2 Afro~[potato][43013] |
| adsl-63-200-51-102.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Damn, there are two messed up images. Sorry, I probably missed the " part in the <img src> part. |
| #3 Random_Doom[43014] |
| 189-161.sg.cgocable.ca |
Humm... i didn't see any pics :(
OK BR... if pics would have worked, i'd say 5-6
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| #4 [43021] |
| pool0058.cvx6-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
| 4th. weee! |
| #5 SiegeTank[43048] |
| 145.44.66.157 |
I saw only the weird pictures at the end with Tassadar and stuff. Not the first ones. But its nice for a first try :)
Has nice readable text etc. |
| #6 Goldenscale[43082] |
| citgo-bh.citgo.com |
Fix your picture problems. And in the future, you need to have MORE descriptions of battles. Telling us only that some goons and zealots fought each other, in a toss vs toss game, does us little good. Numbers fighting each other, upgrades, microing ability displayed, etc., these are the things that you should include to round out your report.
Goldie
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| #7 Fox^1[43085] |
| 01-023.039.popsite.net |
Well I would probably repost with all the pictures showing. Including that, you weren't very descriptive. Not bad, but then not good. But I am sure if you keep at it, you'll have this down easy. The pics not loading gives you the low score of.
5
Fox^1 |
| #8 Afro~[potato][43088] |
| adsl-63-200-48-235.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| fixed |
#9  [43098] |
| as530086.infocom.com |
Okay mr. potato, you're right, it was a beat down. In fact, after reading the build orders of the two players, I immediately knew who was going to win.
However, you didn't do half bad, you had some nice screenshots that helped me picture the battles and you really didn't do too bad describing the action.
My obvious suggestion is of course to pick a better game next time. One other small hint for you is to try wrapping your text around your images. You do that with the <b>align</b> property in your <img src> tag (i.e. <img src="pic01.jpg" align=right>) This will wrap your text around your pics and make your report look more "professional".
Anyhow, good job, definitely worthy of a second attempt... ;-)
6
Dref |
| #10 Gob_DaBong[43104] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
Yeah nice try, but it's like reporting me playin...
An no one needs to see that ;)
(Nice build that guy had, but I didn't get that assimlator followed by cyb core part, that's jus totally rogue, i woulda built at least 3-4 more pylons at nat first)
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| #11 ghoststalker[43115] |
| cc576077-a.vron1.nj.home.com |
| only 19 kills? Ha. I had a templar that got 28 kills in two storms |
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