| #1 BW-sux[43233] |
| spider-ti084.proxy.aol.com |
| I think FLS has had a past experience with Skivihue, or whatever the hell his name is. |
| #2 Bane-The-Feared[43242] |
| 209.149.96.84 |
I think you have potential as a BRer. I obviously can't hold your English against you because you're doing a heck of a lot better than I would with French.
Try putting the pictures in the battle report instead of at the end; align them to the right or left as well and have the text fill in. But King-Lewis is French and he does a good job with reports ^^
So anyway, good job getting some good players and a good game. Keep doing reports! |
| #3 CraZy[43243] |
| px1he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| nice game |
| #4 }''ire.Patatouf[43251] |
| ASt-Lambert-101-1-1-115.abo.wanadoo.fr |
Good job ~waTCHer~ and good game ;^)
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| #5 [43265] |
| dialin190.eagle.ca |
| nice |
#6  [43273] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Nice job there... interesting usage of the English language... ;-) You're not trying to steal King-Lewis' Frenchy crown are you? :P
Nice job, I enjoyed reading it, even if the English was a little strange. Zergie really blew that game. Why the hell did he make all those lurkers when he could simply overwhelm with mass ling/hydra. Once you beat your opponent down, don't let him get back up.
Anyway, good job again.
7
Dref |
| #7 Wisest~Yoda[43284] |
| pm3-1-141.boscobel.mwt.net |
nice report.. as for putting the pictures in:
first you will need a host to upload them to. I suggest geocities (www.geocities.com) and there are a few other good ones. Once you uploaded the pictures, you put them in the report with a neato thing called HTML:) The tag for displaying pictures is: <IMG "http:\www.geocities.commypagepic1.gif">, where the mypage/pic1.gif is the path of the picture you want.
Hope this helps, keep em coming.
Wisest~Yoda |
| #8 ugh i hate this forum... it dosplayes my damn text as a picture ugh...[43285] |
| pm3-1-141.boscobel.mwt.net |
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| #9 Wisest~Yoda[43286] |
| pm3-1-141.boscobel.mwt.net |
Ok lemme try this again.
img "www.geocities.commypagepic1.gif
add the < and the > to either side of course...
Wisest~Yoda |
| #10 Wisest~Yoda[43287] |
| pm3-1-141.boscobel.mwt.net |
grr that should read
img "www.geocities.commypagepic1.gif
ok i think im done now
good report yo |
| #11 Wisest~Yoda[43288] |
| pm3-1-141.boscobel.mwt.net |
wtf its taking out the ..... hrmph ok
from now on if you wanna know how to do something just goto a page with it and view source |
| #12 Dr.Zchivago[43312] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Yes yes, Nice report.
I kinda like the broken english! Makes me read it with a French accent, heh. But paragraphs. Use paragraphs. It seemed as though you started fine, but the part 2 text is just huge.
Once you figure out your pics, you will be fine. Nice stuff. I look forward to reading your next one.
-Dr.Z |
#13  [43355] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
bleh
dref you read my comments for some earlier BR? I was showing how gosu writing the < and > tag was. hehe.
Anyways, to BW-sux, I did have some problem with skev before. However, he apoligized later on so it's okay now. |
| #14 [43357] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
on the BR. The writing is understandable. heh. The description of various events was clear. You had attempt to describe each battle, but that can be improved by describing their position, formation, what units engage what units individually, etc... No one can be perfect, of course, but these are just suggestions.
As for the pictures, I think you really need to organize it better. It's really confusing since most 'subpics' are not of a regular shape (square, circle, regular polygon, etc..). Since the border wasn't standing out, it's very difficult to tell what is the contents of the picture exactly. |
| #15 Melvinator[43479] |
| c651883-a.frmt1.sfba.home.com |
| Ok this comments thing is acting retarded. |
| #16 ~waTCHer~[43506] |
| mendeleiev.cybercable.fr |
Ok then I'll try to answer to all of you with this one post!
After reading my report again, I realized it wasn't as good as i thought when I sent it, and I really think I can improve it in two ways : first of all, my english, I'll ask to some guys I know to help me, but for me, the most important thing is all the advises you gave me for the report itself, and I'll try to stick to those advises.(did you really say that?!)
For the pictures point, they are a little strange and unclear because I could only send 5 and I had a limited size of 400*400, so I had to make a kind a remix of all the screens I had... |
| #17 ^^Hu~RuLe""[43685] |
| 193.216.20.23 |
| Go Skev Go Skev. You rule , you rule!!! |
| #18 pedomannen[43837] |
| 193.216.20.15 |
skevi has like the BIGGEST dick EVER!!!
I love watching him play couse like when he's storming then you can hear him havning an orgasm =[
That dude is a f***** player
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