| #1 Jeehz[49661] |
| 212.252.6.231 |
1. Comment!!!
i rule :P |
| #2 Jeehz[49662] |
| 212.252.6.231 |
| This report sucks hard time btw |
| #3 <font color="deeppink"><u>Duke-Nukem</u></font>[49667] |
| 209.88.197.162 |
<font size=5>O</font>h well, 3rd.
Now to read. |
| #4 SqueakyMonkey[49668] |
| osh1-65b.twcny.rr.com |
DO I really want the fourth comment?
Nah. |
| #5 CynicalMagician[49673] |
| px3cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Ok, if you're going to do commentary, first, spell it properly, then go read Drefsab's monday night starcraft. He did an excellent job and will give you an idea of what to do. More writing about the match is necessary in a smaller font, dont use yellow text on white, and make sure your pics WORK by using the preview button.
-CynicalMagician |
| #6 miserableman[49675] |
| inh1ts14-qfe0.ims.bt.net |
This report is death-defyingly bad. It has no redeeming features. No joke, I could have done a better job of this aged six. I seriously hope the author was less than ten.
mis |
| #7 Shepherd[49676] |
| cm-24-161-50-172.nycap.rr.com |
| After reading first paragraph, I stopped reading because of numerous spelling errors making it extremely hard to read. |
| #8 TerranTurtle[49685] |
| 207.198.174.13 |
| This was the worst thing I've ever read. It wasn't even funny in a bad sort of way, like the way you laugh when you read something written by someone who is mentally retarded and English is obviously their third language. |
| #9 Phoenix-S-[49691] |
| r-174.6.alltel.net |
| That was a waste of a good 1 second that it took me to glance at that report! Grrr! |
| #10 .oviedroppings.[49692] |
| spider-wd084.proxy.aol.com |
one word...
TERRIBLE
But dont get discouraged :)
LOL |
| #11 -DjLethal-[49694] |
| 207-172-89-200.s200.tnt1.abr.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| lol u fucking suck |
| #12 ~PL~CloudStrife[49698] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| As soon as I saw the big font and such, I stoped reading. Bye. |
| #13 Viper$[49712] |
| spider-wc032.proxy.aol.com |
You need to put more effort into the reports. The spelling was attrocious(I probably spelled that wrong) and there were HUGE gaps in the game(we go from vultures and marines to Sci vessels w/o any transition time). Also we never saw any of the bases. This report could have been a lot better. Please put more work into the report next time.
Terrans own |
| #14 [49729] |
| 1Cust232.tnt8.lax1.da.uu.net |
<body bgcolor="red">you need to have more detail. also when people start speaking use different paragraghs and/or colors for different people so we know who is talking.
and use smaller font.</body> |
| #15 [49731] |
| 1Cust232.tnt8.lax1.da.uu.net |
| <font bgcolor="red">use <h3>SMALLER FONT</h3><i>!!</i></font> |
| #16 [49732] |
| 1Cust232.tnt8.lax1.da.uu.net |
<table>
<tr><td width=100% bgcolor="red"><i>maybe u will do better next time!! =)</i></td></tr></table> |
| #17 <font color="red">WiZard~pk[49734] |
| dialin157.eagle.ca |
u think my spelling sux....
Well u got a point.....
It does.....
But im only 11........
And i screwd up with font and pics.....
i think i should get a 6 |
| #18 EnThuseD[49736] |
| SALBB103-07.splitrock.net |
This battle report doesnt deserve a comment so here it is:
I hope you enjoyed :) |
| #19 Aquamarine[49743] |
| nas-66-227.boston.navipath.net |
| yep, it sucks. being 11 doesnt redeem it. when i was 11 i was reading books of college level and shit, so i think you shouldve done a lot better....any 11 year old can make a paragraph right unless they're from hickland... |
| #20 Blade|IcE|[49745] |
| c790560-a.smateo1.sfba.home.com |
| total crap total crap TOTAL crap |
| #21 Spuzz[49756] |
| jfsn-02-14.dialup.netins.net |
Hmm,
Well, contrary to popular belief, this is not the worst BattleReport ever. (Trust me people, it can get <i>much</i> worse.) There is a lot of room for improvement, though. A couple of things that stuck out:
1) The font was too big
2) It was hard to follow who was speaking. Use quotation marks and new paragraphs to help. Speaking of which...
3) Paragraphs are a must.
4) You need <b>MUCH</b> more details, the battles skipped around a lot and were hard to visualize. All of a sudden some guy won the game, and I had no idea why.
5) Try to get the pictures to work! If you're not sure, use the "Preview Report" button before you submit. I get the feeling that if the images had worked, the report would have been much easier to follow.
-However, don't <i>rely</i> on your pictures to tell the story for you.
6) Type the report in Microsoft Word or something so that there is some form of spellchecker helping you. Mabye get a parent or older sibling to read over the Report before you submit it. A few misspellings here and there are not a big deal, but when the spelling errors cause a problem in the reader's understanding, you need to be more careful.
I hope that you will write another BattleReport, just be more careful next time. Read over your work. Make sure it is more thorough and easier to follow, and you will do fine!
Spuzz |
| #22 BackStabingLiar[49787] |
| 63.239.42.130 |
hmm...
on the OTHER hand, i think this 11 year old COMMINTATER fucking rocks for doing this battle report.
forget who coulda done better when they were that age, this kids 11. HELL YEAH
keep playin starcraft, and keep learning html, kid.
peace
BackStabingLiar |
| #23 <font color="red">WiZard~pk[49799] |
| dialin222.eagle.ca |
Well thanx BackStabingLiar
Finaly somone says something nice |
| #24 Dr.Zchivago[49802] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
This was pretty terrible.
Wizard~pk, have you read any other battlereports?
Have you read any of the comment sections?
Have you read the Reporting Guides?
I agree with BackStabbingLiar, keep playin and learn HTML, but more importantly, repeat after me...
<center><br><b>"The preview button is my friend."</b><br>again<br><b>"The preview button is my friend."</b><br>again...<br>
-Dr.Z |
| #25 angrysalad[49810] |
| 216-215-61-6.flash.net |
| it was pretty good kid, but just try to follow the comments written above =D |
| #26 Limp_Bizkit666[49820] |
| 206.117.45.191 |
<script>alert("The preview button is my friend.")</script>
hehehe
yeah
preview.. you messed up on ONE code, and it blasted the rest of the BR..
i could have been good, but i didn't even take my time reading it.. presentation is EVERYTHING..
if it sucks the first seconds of the BR, then rarely you will get a person to finish it in a happy mood..
oh well
nice try tho... for a 11 year old.
byeya
p.s-PREVIEWWW!!!!! PAY-PER-VIEWWWW!!!!!! lsdjfslj |
| #27 Viper$[49938] |
| spider-wi041.proxy.aol.com |
<P ALIGN=center>You should do some more research on BR'ing
Read some BR's
Read some guides
Then post your BR's
Then they should be better and no one will flame you
at least not as much
<P ALIGN=left><font size=20><font color="red">T</font><font color="blue">e</font><font color="white">r</font><font color="yellow">r</font><font color="green">a</font><font color="purple">n</font><font color="aqua">s</font> <font color="orange">o</font><font color="lime">w</font><font color="silver">n</font> |
| #28 Gob_DaBong[50041] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
Heh Any Java script works in the comments section exc. pics?
Heh heh........jus let me brush up on my Java skillz again..... An I'll have the button that never can be pressed HA HA AH AH........
Lemon Leafs |
#29  [50072] |
| as530047.infocom.com |
2
'nuff said
Dref |
| #30 Davy[50126] |
| ip746.bart1.ok.pub-ip.ionet.net |
| The report was kinda cool. Pictures that work would make it cool and some spacing between commentators speaking. Good idea and keep up the good work. |
| #31 Llewcrew[51786] |
| dialupF139.ptld.uswest.net |
| What is funny is that I supposedly played in this game (unless someone would want to use my name...and I see no reason for that) and even I don't understand what happened. I built tanks...vults mines and sv...thats all I got out of it. :( What cheap build you were talking about I don't know...perhaps a bunker? turrets? Only you know... |
| #32 nate dog warren g[51962] |
| dyn051-nas01.nelsonville.frognet.net |
i think i have some constructive critisism
1.learn to fucking spell
2.don't use yellow on white
3.don't use big fonts
4.this br reallyyyyyyy sucks big ones
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