| #1 (RK)Digweed[50866] |
| igw31e.fmr.com |
| Sight of Protophobic will be shot ...... |
| #2 BackStabingLiar[50867] |
| 63.239.42.130 |
Not bad, kinda fun to read. Just wait till Harold hits puberty.
peace |
| #3 <font color=orage>Phoenix-S-[50868] |
| lrar5pp09.alltel.net |
| </font>Hm.... Interesting. |
#4  [50869] |
| 242849hfc81.tampabay.rr.com |
| shocky shock shock shockwave? |
| #5 Sonneillon[50873] |
| tsdlsk01d01010125.sk.sympatico.ca |
Lol. I knew it was going to be funny just from the title and the author. And, I enjoyed it. I don't have much more to say other than I can't rate it till you add a lot more to it.
(The non-insane goatee today)
Sonneillon |
| #6 Dark-Berzerker[50876] |
| d42-kt01-ktnr-pdi.attcanada.net |
| LMAO that was hilarious |
| #7 Upraw[50877] |
| 203.87.48.4 |
It was unstructured, it wasn't that great and it wasn't very funny. I was a childrens story about a Hydralisks bad dream. Not very exciting.
I liked the first paragraph but after that it lost it's way and turned into a crappy story.
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| #8 blah[50879] |
| 63.210.199.30 |
thanks ppl.
probe - uh? confused i am.
upraw - the story was meant to come out that way. And I don't know what you mean by it was "unstructured"? The whole idea of this story was that the tone of all the fan fics recently have been serious and this one wasn't meant to be. It wasn't supposed to be "funny" either. Just something easy to read and a different take on the zerg. Though if I did continue the story, I'd probably make the ending majorly f**ked up. (something I like doing).
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| #9 Ashdate[50886] |
| nat214.74.mpoweredpc.net |
It's not too bad, but the idea of Hydralisks being mindless and for all intensive purposes, stupid (In an animal intelligence sort of way) kinda gives this conflicting image of what you present here. I'm not saying this is at all wrong or that you can't write about Zerg in a different so tof manner, but it's the previous illusion that makes the Hydralisk you mention seem more human than Zerg, due to all the personification.
I think what I'm trying to say is that it's weird to picture a Hydralisk in a bed with covers and a mom. Maybe it's just me, who knows :) |
| #10 Ashdate[50887] |
| nat214.74.mpoweredpc.net |
| Oh, and the idea of a completely different race having a common "earth" name like Harry doesn't sound too right. Not that Harry the Hydralisk isnt' a good name (It's quite humourous to say outloud) it's liek finding out the Mafia is run by a guy named Jerry. It jsut doens't sink together (Look at it this way, which is a better Protoss name, Jimmy or Tassadar? Tassadar of course, because it sounds sorta like that would be a name a Protoss dude might have. Jimmy is right out there :) |
| #11 blah[50927] |
| 63.210.199.30 |
Ashdate - Uh, that was exactly the point. I purposely made the hydralisks act very human and I gave them names like Jimmy and Harold because they're funny names. If I actually continue the story, you'll find out why.
It's not a serious story. I wasn't intended to be.
(-:
I'm just so misunderstood. )-; |
| #12 Skullbattalion[50928] |
| hoproxy2.proxy.lucent.com |
I thought this was funny shit good job, i too grow tired of this real serious fan fic shit floating around out there. It was certainly a good change from it all.
"if it wasn't for my horse, i would have never made it through that year of college." |
| #13 BW-sux[50941] |
| spider-wl062.proxy.aol.com |
This is... ROFL!!! This was great! Although sorta a ripoff of shockwave's fiction. Well, not really. This was funny, most of his was serious.
8
BW-sux
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| #14 The Mad Clown[50952] |
| spider-tr064.proxy.aol.com |
Very funny. :)
I think i like "light-hearted" fan-fics.
Harry the hydralisk ownz. :D
the mad clown |
#15  [50978] |
| rliv144.infocom.com |
Short, but well written and mildly humorous. You're point is not lost on me as I too am tired of all the fan fic.
Nevertheless, there's just not much here to rate.
5
Dref |
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