| #1 Bane[51129] |
| adsl-61-48-23.atl.bellsouth.net |
| me > u |
| #2 ChinksWithGuns[51130] |
| adsl-63-193-153-8.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| 2nd... shit. Enjoy the read. |
| #3 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51134] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>GJ. 9 |
| #4 Upraw[51136] |
| 203.87.48.4 |
I like :)
But why did the colors change in the last minimap shot. Instead of orange and brown it was red and yellow?? |
| #5 Bold[51138] |
| proxy1.rdc1.ab.wave.home.com |
| CWG is the man... =]] |
| #6 Punck[51139] |
| spider-tm061.proxy.aol.com |
I liked it...
I scout with zealots all the time against a zerg b/c if you scout with a probe the zerg can set up sunkens and shit before you get there with zeals. |
| #7 Wisest~Yoda[51140] |
| pm3-1-171.boscobel.mwt.net |
| sexy |
#8  [51141] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
Hell yeah! Great report. Protoss did a great job of denying Zerg more then 3 expansions and was able to expand themselves. The game could have gone either way. Chinks I am impressed with this report. Enjoy this rating you deserve it.
9
Fox^1 |
| #9 Wisest~Yoda[51143] |
| pm3-1-171.boscobel.mwt.net |
hrrm nice, normally wud be 8.5-9 but since chinks gives me "favors" ill give it 10.. err ya
im guessing orc wasnt hacking and just knew how casper played, ive watched him a couple times zvp and he alweys gets like 20 exp early and contains like a whore... i think i saw a game where he made 650 units in 25 minutes... err but casper hates me because once i was his ally in a 2v2 and wraith rushed :( poa was 3 hatch linging and i cudnt resist but then casp died. anyhow byebye now chinks is a hottie |
| #10 Sonneillon[51146] |
| tsdlsk01d0101014.sk.sympatico.ca |
Not too shabby Chinko. There is not much to comment today, because what I wanted to say has already been covered. (The scouting with zealots and such).
I'm betting you are going to get an 8.5 on this baby.
-Sonn |
| #11 Sonneillon[51148] |
| tsdlsk01d0101014.sk.sympatico.ca |
A funny thing I just realized. *I feel stupid*
If this would've been released when reports like "1 vs 1: A brotherly report" were around...Your report would get like 8 10's.
Heh, I'm just trying to depress you Chinks by reminding you of how much standards have changed. =] |
| #12 ProtectorofAiur[51150] |
| 189.colorado-springs-01-02rs.co.dial-access.att.net |
Great job Chinks. Make that gosu Dire FFA report look this good :) Maybe you'll get a 10 there =]]
Upraw, the colors were red and yellow because I think if you hit Shift + Tab, it changes the colors (red enemy, yellow ally, green you . . i think) |
| #13 CynicalMagician[51151] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Bitchin' man. You also get to be my guinea pig for a new way to comment on BR's that I'm going to do to really flesh out good things and shortcomings, so that author's can improve more. As you may have noticed, I'm not always satisfied with the advice raters give. Anyway, I'll post the things I'm going to comment on in the forum after this.
Writing: Very well written. Excellent flow, the battle was not hard to follow at all. I like your style. It's entertaining, has some punch and humour involved, but its not overbearing. No weirdo sentences or grammar screwups. I like that.
Images: Very good imaging. I like the collages, effective action shots, relevant images. Perhaps you would want to include a little more gore in the pictures, but I say that mainly because I like watching stuff blowing up and guys getting killed. Some of the pics, specifically filename orccas7 and 6 were a little non-contrasting for colours, but it's hardly noticable. I only saw it because I looked for it.
Appearance: Easy to read font, gotta love Arial 12pt, no footlong paragraphs, obvious HTML use with colours etc. In a word, sharp.
Overall Impressions: This is at heart, a battlereport in the purest sense of the word. It is obviously not to be confused with a strategy guide of any kind (like heartcutters), and it was an entertaining read.
My Recommendations: Write more text. At the start of the match, there is the perfect amount, seperated nicely by images. Towards the end, it becomes less text and more images. Try not to let the images tell the story, make them just eyecandy for the text. Don't take that the wrong way or anything, most of my BR's have turned out the same way, and I'm working on that. Finally, that signature is frickin' hilarious. I love it.
Hope this helps. If you have problems with this format for my comments, write about it on the forum. If you have something to say pertaining to this BR, put it here. I dont want to clog Chink's comment section with a bunch of crap related to my new little advice thing. Til next time,
-CynicalMagician |
| #14 ChinksWithGuns[51152] |
| adsl-63-197-184-198.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
POA is right about the map color thing.
Probe, wtf are you rambling about? Say something intelligable. |
| #15 ChinksWithGuns[51153] |
| adsl-63-197-184-198.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| Cyn, you are my God. Your BRs own me, thanks for the advice. Heh, I just saw the rating. 9! woohoo! |
| #16 Blade|IcE|[51154] |
| c790560-a.smateo1.sfba.home.com |
good read
im startin to like those novel BRs they kinda good sometimes, like cynical's reports under the name Belt (i think it was him) they were good
I give it a:
9
just my 2 cents
Blade |
| #17 Talon[51156] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| ya orc is bad manner hacker |
| #18 Bane[51157] |
| fcs01asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
Hehe, nice report Chinks. Nice image editing and picture quality. I'd have to say more text and definitely more detail. Otherwise good, that logo is cool; not as cool as mine though obviously, because mine has my name in blood =]
Bane |
#19  [51158] |
| as530038.infocom.com |
Chinks, you're going to be my guinea pig on a new way to comment...
8
Dref |
| #20 [51159] |
| as530038.infocom.com |
okay, haha, I'm only kidding:
Good job on the BR, it was a good game with good players. A 1on1 on temple is not the most difficult matchup to battle report nor the most novel idea, but you did a great job doing it anyway.
Don't worry, when you release a BR with me in it, I'll give it a 10... (as long as I win) :-)
Cheers,
Dref |
| #21 CynicalMagician[51163] |
| px3cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
I'm not belt you chobo >) j/k. that was a joke though, I was just making light of a recent br.com 'event'. I have only 1 smurf name, and its not belt.
-CynicalMagician |
| #22 BackStabingLiar[51189] |
| 63.239.42.130 |
| nice last image, and good report in general. |
#23  [51196] |
| chello213047238071.tirol.surfer.at |
wtf? would be 9 or 10 but u accused orc of hacking which is why i can barely withstand to give u a 0 >:[
bah i wont rate it...
ORC DOZNT HACK FOO! |
| #24 ::nobody::[51223] |
| dt0f4n84.san.rr.com |
Nice report and thanks for not thanking me :O
..or something.
Cya on bnet cuz i own you :D j/k
Ciao!
Nobo |
| #25 King-Lewis[51228] |
| modemcable098.144-200-24.mtl.mc.videotron.net |
Suspecting Orc of hacking is like saying that Shania Twain is ugly. That just make no sense. Bleh great report apart of this gay nonsense crap hacking stuff.
Aristocrat-X
7/10 |
| #26 BW-sux[51232] |
| spider-wl041.proxy.aol.com |
This BR = more ownage.
Punck: Are you the real Punck~? I thought you quit.
9
BW-sux |
| #27 Apparition-X[51244] |
| teranet244-12-174.monarch.net |
Ummm, I am not sure if the hacking thing is a joke? If it is, far be it from me to criticize your obviously weak and facile sense of humour. If it is not... well it should be obvious to anybody but a moron that he was not hacking. You were not playing on an observer map (there is still fog of war), you were sharing vision with Orc (you can see his bases), you cannot see everything (which you would be able to if he was hacking and he was sharing vision). Think about it.
Apparition-X
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| #28 ChinksWithGuns[51246] |
| adsl-63-193-153-8.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| damn, I never knew people took jokes so seriously... |
| #29 Dr.Zchivago[51258] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Nice report. Chinks you all about it. Or course with exception to the half-hearted joke or not about hacking. But I think others have driven that point home.
That report was cracking me up.
-Dr.Z |
| #30 ~PL~CloudStrife[51261] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
Nice report. I loved that signature image, it's hilarious! I can't find anything to critisise in this report! Oh no! =[
But the <i> COMMENTS</i> section, I can!
Probe:If you can't say anything inteligable, don't say anything at all.
Drefsab:An 8!? Ok, I suppose the 1v1 temple game is easy to report, but an <i>8</i>?!?!?!?! |
| #31 Haplo.wm[51265] |
| w043.z064000081.was-dc.dsl.cnc.net |
Pretty decent report. Too many pics, not enough text. Overall, it is apparent that a good deal of effort did go into this, and it shows. Good job. However, the text needed a little more "filling out" in my opinion.
Keep 'em coming.
Haplo.wm |
| #32 peon-Micro[51284] |
| adsl-63-197-184-198.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
nice job jon. good report
10
-peon
|
| #33 Fractal_Wave[51295] |
| 24.67.140.108.bc.wave.home.com |
This was really good...excellent imagaing, and a good game....but I felt something was lacking. Maybe the writing could have been better, drawing me in more....I'm not sure. This just didn't read as good as i thought it should have.
But very good just the same. And damn you & Cynic & the Dr. for posting right after me.
;)
All the best,
Fractal_Wave |
| #34 Casper...[51314] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-02-47.look.ca |
Nice report.
Orc played it real well. I made a couple of mistakes and he punished me for them i.e. expanding too late early on without having enough lings and losing tonnes of drones at my expansions because I was a little short on troops and couldn't hold him back.
No early forge = pump 36 lings and expand continually till he kills them all while getting missle + 1 and hydra ups. Ideally I shoulda had 10 hatches by the time he established at the mineral only. |
#35  [51327] |
| awork005085.netvigator.com |
BR with Orc hacking gets a 10 automatically. YES!
<font color=black>just kidding</font> |
| #36 [51328] |
| awork005085.netvigator.com |
| BTW, CWG, pick a clearer border of the images when you try to cascade several pictures in one. |
| #37 OrcManiac[51353] |
| intsfb120.mrq.gouv.qc.ca |
| Hey good game. My timing was pretty good in this game and I landed some good storm.Busted out just in time before zerg become too strong and just send non stop hydras. I was vulnerable to mutas early on tho. Anyway good br CWG, I liked how you described me :D and the pics of "myself" were cool too but for the hacking part, I know it was a joke but it wasnt THAT evident in the report so be a little carefull with that. As for the rest gj. lates |
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