| #1 FIRST(!!)[51374] |
| node1352d.a2000.nl |
Yeahoo,methinks it nice to be first(!!) for the secon time :)
I have to say again this game is more interresting then the previous one and the report is good... and yea, I like the brightness better now. Keep on going. I give you a 7.4
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| #2 ovinder[51376] |
| erbium-asy-3.rutgers.edu |
| entertaining BR. Well written. |
#3  [51377] |
| inehou-pxy05.compaq.com |
Is there some reason why I can't see the text without highlighting it? Everyone else can but me =[ I feel so left out and I want to rate it well.
Fox^1 |
| #4 First(!!)[51379] |
| node1352d.a2000.nl |
| ovinder: Well, it works fine with me |
| #5 DivvyO[51380] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
| Gah, it no worky for me. No good, no good. But hey, the pics look nice. |
| #6 First(!!)[51382] |
| node1352d.a2000.nl |
| ovinder: Well, it works fine with me |
| #7 Justin[51385] |
| nas-23-117.la.navipath.net |
| Wow Davy that was a short but sweet BR |
| #8 BW-sux[51387] |
| spider-ta031.proxy.aol.com |
Great BR. I take first Oklahoman comment here. Just ZvZ is usually too short...
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BW-sux |
| #9 [51395] |
| spider-to034.proxy.aol.com |
| UMMMM <h1>OK |
| #10 <FONT COLOR="00ffff"><BR><MARQUEE>Hostile SCV</MARQUEE></FONT>[51399] |
| spider-tl064.proxy.aol.com |
tell them not to play Zerg vs. Zerg if they re-match. my only 2 reports (so far) have been terran vs. toss. zvz games just end too fast to be really intriguing.
Well written, though. Space your pics out a little more. |
| #11 CynicalMagician[51400] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Straight into my little rant/rave.
Writing: Pretty good writing. Good word use, and it reads like something that's somewhat mature. Incredibly easy to follow (the game wasn't complex either though), and it flowed fairly well. Unfortunately there was little to no use of humour or big descriptions of battles, which is a bit of a downer in my books. Perfect, or near perfect grammar.
Images: Images were sharp, fairly clear, enough blood (love that ZvZ), but they seemed a little bit too bright. Try toning down the brightness slider in whatever image editor you use. Also, at one point there was a clipping error with text around images, but that's not a big deal, as it was still easy to read.
Appearance: Good font, easy to read, good use of HTML, the images were just sidenotes to the game, you let the writing tell the story, not the pics do the work. GJ.
Overall: A little dry, too short, but still very good. Find a better game to BR and spice up your writing and I imagine you'll get a high mark. Hope this helps,
-CynicalMagician |
| #12 LordWoody[51402] |
| okc-94-236-170.mmcable.com |
First off, I liked the report, you can't do much with a game like that though, ZvZ games do usually end quick with a counter like that.
Second off, BW-Sucks --- Are you making fun of Oklahomans, I don't care if you do, I am not fond of OK, but I still live here and I want to get it :)
LordWoody |
| #13 Haplo.wm[51405] |
| 195.arlington-26-27rs.va.dial-access.att.net |
yay-bloodly pics! I liked those!
Haplo.wm |
| #14 Kane-[51409] |
| ftmadisonagent.lisco.net |
| Fox, I can't see the words either :( Black on black<zvz. :/ |
| #15 [51410] |
| inehou-pxy05.compaq.com |
Great I can see it now! Thanks!
1 thing, Mage built 3 hatcheries before his spawning pool and won......... maybe I am missing something. I don't know how good either of these guys are, and they are probably better then me but 3 hatcheries before spawning pool on LT vs another zerg and he WON!?
Ok well the layout was ok, and you had decent details, but
1 attack and that was it? Rather a short game. But it was done well. Just get a better game next time.
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Fox^1
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| #16 BW-sux[51412] |
| spider-we083.proxy.aol.com |
Woody, no I am not making fun of Oklahomans. I live in Tulsa.
Thanks,
BW-sux |
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