| #1 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51720] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>first |
| #2 TX-0[51721] |
| dyn-64-40-197-104.cmh.netset.com |
| This will be posted on Tao as soon as they get there site back together. |
| #3 3rd[51725] |
| adsl-63-205-196-162.dsl.scrm01.pacbell.net |
| kaka |
| #4 The Asylum[51737] |
| ce-stjh-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| Agh the typos! Be a bit more careful when you write. Convenience is not connivance, and Drones are not dones. The first game was reported all right, and the lack of many pics is understandable, but a little more description and maybe even a few pics of the last two would be nice. I doubt this will get a gold rating due to the writing and the lack of description, but it's not horrible or anything. |
| #5 TX-0[51743] |
| dyn-64-40-197-104.cmh.netset.com |
Sorry about the typo's I posted the un-corrected version by mistake. :(
I didn't include pic on the ladder two games since they where very short. We all know what a zergling and Muta rush look like?
I try to do better about the adding more details and I appreciate the input you provided.
Best of Luck
TX-0 |
| #6 ovinder[51744] |
| erbium-asy-19.rutgers.edu |
| Pretty good BRs. Easy to follow, despite the lack of pics, which speaks volumes for your understanding of the game and your ability to write clearly. |
| #7 CynicalMagician[51746] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Writing: Not great, but not brutal. Certainly better than some, but there were a few probelms with it. 1) Descriptions. I want details in the reports I read, and this was more of an overview of hte battles, not indepth. 2) Flow/Easy to follow. Yours was fairly hard to follow. This is mostly linked to problem 3), poor grammar. Proof your stuff and fix typos, grammar errors and puncuation stuff. It really will help in the future.
Images: Not much here to comment on, and thats a problem in itself, IMHO. The pics you did do were clear and sharp, although lacking in any action, but they weren't that bad. Put more pics in, have action shots, spice them up, and give them flair. Images are eyecandy for the report, so treat them that way. I did like your use of minimap though, it made keeping track of expansions easy.
Appearance: Use more HTML. Put things like build orders in a list, and they'll look better. Also, I found the images fairly 'right align' heavy. Try to alternate going left align right align etc. It'll look a little more balanced.
Overall: Not terrible, but not amazing either. Take a little more time on your next report and I bet you'd be able to go gold.
-CynicalMagician |
| #8 BW-sux[51806] |
| spider-wl041.proxy.aol.com |
Umm... typos. This in no way deserves a 9. Put action into your collages.
7
BW-sux |
| #9 Hostile~SCV[51814] |
| spider-wn031.proxy.aol.com |
Yeah, I was about to ask why this got a nine... I know it seems tough but it only takes the push of a button to get a picture.
I liked how it was written, though. Your grammar seems to be pretty good. You have 9 potential if you get the right pics and don't watch from a player's perspective.
7.5-8
The Hoss Bot |
| #10 TerranTurtle[51828] |
| 207.198.174.24 |
| Definitely not a 9. 7-8 range at most. All I can figure is that he must be really good friends with some of the raters. |
| #11 SlingsNArrows[51835] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| I enjoyed reading about how he mixed the strats up and stuff, found it informative and such.... but 9? Yes... I might give this report a 9... if its author was holding a gun to my head. Ahem... somebody plug in the wrong number or is one of the raters secretly rating while under the influence of crack? eh? |
| #12 DaGeek[51836] |
| gah227146.columbus.rr.com |
Pretty good BR, TX-0. About that hanging over my shoulder and pressing the Print-Screen button, though... ahem.. You might want to check your deodorant!
J/K
DaGeek |
| #13 Neal64[51842] |
| spider-wb052.proxy.aol.com |
| 8.5 i say! How come hostile got an 8 and this got a 9? good report though. |
| #14 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51849] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>This gets a fucking nine and I got an eight. I'm leaving Battlereports.com for good, Good bye all. |
| #15 CynicalMagician[51850] |
| px3cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
No kidding Proto. I would say this is a 7 max...
-CynicalMagician |
| #16 CynicalMagician[51856] |
| px3cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
| That first one you posted, 2162, is a great report. I really liked the neon glowing edge filter on some of the images. |
| #17 who rated this?[51863] |
| 36-pool1.ras11.calan.agisdial.net |
| 6.5 |
#18  [51866] |
| rliv113.infocom.com |
Decent job TX, I was always like to read those Tao reports. Its too bad that game's 2 and 3 weren't more competitive though... ;-)
The typos did get pretty annoying. If you had posted the corrected version without typos I would be tempted to give this an 8, but as it stands now, I'll go with a 7.
Good job though.
Cheers,
Dref |
| #19 The Asylum[51868] |
| ce-stjh-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| Thanks Dref. I think you gave this close to the right rating. Now I can't go on my crusade anymore. Anybody who reads this should still check out those 6 reports tho, because they're all classics. |
| #20 Allegedly Ticked Hostile~SCV[52354] |
| spider-wm048.proxy.aol.com |
If this got a 9 then my latest one should have gotten straight 10's. Same for Proto's.
The Hoss Bot |
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