| #1 1st[52479] |
| 148.m62.mon.catskill.net |
| 1st yeah baby |
| #2 BW-sux[52480] |
| spider-wa023.proxy.aol.com |
| First. |
| #3 BW-sux[52481] |
| spider-wa023.proxy.aol.com |
| asdfdsa MAD GAY!! |
| #4 dizdik{F@M}[52482] |
| 148.m62.mon.catskill.net |
| finally, I never get to have my name up First Sorry BW |
| #5 BW-sux[52483] |
| spider-wa023.proxy.aol.com |
I read the report. This being for a tournament I expect some pictures. Also, there were a few gramattical errors in it. The game is on hunters too. But the writing was good.
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BW-sux |
| #6 dizdik{F@M}[52486] |
| 148.m62.mon.catskill.net |
| I'm iclinded to agree w/ BWSUX dispite my many objections to his name. There was nothing truley amazing about this, espically w/o pictures. Plus there were a few times when the report got "fuzzy" and confusing. Overall- 6½ |
| #7 ++swinger++[52495] |
| html.net |
| MORE PICS and you might of got a 8 or 9 |
| #8 Skullbattalion[52500] |
| hoproxy2.proxy.lucent.com |
well at lest i got first in the first one you put here.I hate to say this agin but BW said it all.
Everything i learned,i learned it from BW-sux |
| #9 Incandesance[52514] |
| leicester.lancs.ac.uk |
Hmm GBR-1 Tourney huh:-) Well cant say i ever heard of it and how did Moz the old slag ever manage to win that?? U newbie bashin in Starcraft GBR-1 moz cause u just get your ass owned by me at BW??
Stop hidding man. Im ganna sneak you out and annihilate your little zerg ass:-) |
| #10 CynicalMagician[52520] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Writing: Not too great unfortunately. I found that there were too many 'author comments' in brackets, and that there were too many puncuation/grammar errors to make it really easy to read. The game sounded like a good one, but I didn't really get a big sense of battle and epic conflict the way I like to when I read a BR.
Images: Get some.
Appearance: Nothing special, nothing bad though either.
Overall: Needs some work. Proofread especially. Try agian though.
-CynicalMagician |
| #11 Sonneillon[52525] |
| tsdlsk01d01010116.sk.sympatico.ca |
You sure like the phrases "kicking crap" and "knocking the crap" into things. Lol, the missle turret knocked the crap into a mutalisk. Cynical also covered everything else I wanted to mention.
Not a bad report, nothing really special though. I'm thinking around a 6 - 6.5.
-Sonny Bouy |
| #12 ++swinger++[52531] |
| html.net |
| cynical_magician, you should become a br rater |
| #13 [HK]SlipKnoT[52535] |
| bc-kam-a53-01-89.look.ca |
Good report
Bw-Sux NEXT RATER!!!!!! |
#14  [52538] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Not too bad, I was able to follow the action pretty well. The only real problem I had with this report was your tendency to ramble and let me tell you, that was a BIG problem... ;-)
Try to stay focused on the game itself and don't throw out so many editorial comments. It interrupts the flow of the battle... :-)
Just my suggestions,
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Cheers,
Dref |
| #15 CCMoz[52558] |
| host62-7-52-244.btinternet.com |
| Inca ude get whooped by a sc newbie u sucker,:)ur cool u coming back to bw soon? |
#16  [52569] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
Nice all text report. But you need to focus on the game. You kinda went off in your own little world a few times, but overall wasn't bad at all.
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Fox^1 |
| #17 BW-sux[52574] |
| spider-wj071.proxy.aol.com |
How about keeping the pictures at the original location? Then they will show up.
Read any hall of famer report OTHER than YourRoleModel, Mark4, Or Johnny_Vegas and you'll see what I'm talking about. |
| #18 BW-sux[52575] |
| spider-wj071.proxy.aol.com |
| Well, after thinking some more, just read Bob The Newt, ::nobody::, or WilliamWC3's reports. |
| #19 Mr.Forgetful[52639] |
| lambda-pre.alphalink.com.au |
A tourney game on hunters!!!
WTF???
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| #20 Robert Frazer[52721] |
| frazers.demon.co.uk |
Hooray for the UK!!!!!
It's nice to hear from someone on the RIGHT side of the Atlantic for a change (And everyone knows that Britain is Best).
However, the report was quite duff, to be honest with you.
I hate to criticise my kindred, but GET SOME PICTURES!
And one more thing... BUY A DICTIONARY!!!!!!!!
However, the battle itself was quite a good one (Shame [KB]Moz wasn't playing against Romanians, though. After Euro 2000, they need a good kicking!).
-Robert Frazer-
"Wait a minute... aren't there supposed to be LONG TERM SIDE EFFECTS from taking this drug?"
"Yes, but you don't HAVE a long-term, Malakev" |
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