| #1 Hmm..[56025] |
| dialup-209.244.65.94.Chicago1.Level3.net |
I read it.. You should prolly have made the the intro to whatever u were gonna follow it up with.
This is gonna get a low rating for ya :/ |
| #2 JawaAvenger[56026] |
| d6-22.hntnny.optonline.net |
| Ouch, this has no content, and shows nothing of your skills, if you have any... I'm thinking... a 3 |
| #3 How Three Makes a Difference[56031] |
| 209-239-213-58.lax.jps.net |
| Your score = 3..woah..it does make a difference |
| #4 WarLeaderJustin[56039] |
| spider-we074.proxy.aol.com |
Based on the introduction, it reads worthwhile. I don't want to slam something that seems to have a real future. I give it an 84%, for an intro that is. Try to tag along a couple chapters at a time, that way, you might get a better rating.
Nice Introduction. If only I could get it done like you. |
| #5 Deranged~SCV[56071] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| I plan on doing 3-4 chapters a post... It was late last night so I could only do this part. |
| #6 JawaAvenger[56073] |
| d6-22.hntnny.optonline.net |
| BTW, it's not spelt "M'k", it's spelt "M'kay". |
| #7 WarLeaderJustin[56177] |
| spider-ti014.proxy.aol.com |
| I would like the story to concentrate more on the SCV, because people relate to Terran more. But make sure to keep if a lot different than other people's stories, where one person is just first-person telling a battle. |
| #8 %#@$%#@$[56216] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| WHO RATED THIS?!!?!!?! |
| #9 JawaAvenger[56301] |
| d6-22.hntnny.optonline.net |
Ummm... what SCV?
There is a marine, a zealot, and a zergling. |
| #10 WarLeaderJustin[56302] |
| spider-wq082.proxy.aol.com |
OH! NO SCV?
Well, with no SCV ...
this report = 1%.
Switch the marine to a zealot. I promise you that will make this report a lot better. |
| #11 this sucks[56319] |
| spider-wn014.proxy.aol.com |
no offense, but that sucked
what, do you have a fifth grade writing level or something?
i am not expectign grammatical perfection, but you retarded grandma could have done better |
| #12 [toss]Adun[56395] |
| t4o955p103.telia.com |
I killed you in the FFA yesterday deranged!!! And I killed Tweek(: !!! I cant believe i acctualy won with those "big flying hotdogs". And I say bane and fox in the chat!!! (did I mentioned that was the first time I´ve played BW???)
En taro me!! |
| #13 Gay![56414] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| Darn adun, your first time!? uggghhh |
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| spider-wa044.proxy.aol.com |
| 3 |
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| spider-wa044.proxy.aol.com |
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