| #1 Warfare[63310] |
| 209-63-113-57.sea.jps.net |
| no one gets first! |
| #2 WarLeaderJustin[63312] |
| ACA101C2.ipt.aol.com |
| 2nd with style. |
| #3 BW-sux[63313] |
| spider-mtc-tc052.proxy.aol.com |
First actual comment: This isn't that good. Read some of the Hall of Famer's works. That will get you going in the right direction.
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BW-sux |
| #4 Silent~Death[63314] |
| ip123.saskatoon3.dialup.canada.psi.net |
| I haven't played WarCraft since my first actual report |
| #5 WarLeaderJustin[63315] |
| spider-tp021.proxy.aol.com |
<i>"I just found this site 20 minutes ago."</i>
This is usually not the best way to start a BR. I recommend that you BR StarCraft games too, b/c WarCraft II sucks. :(
Uhm, 35%.
-WLJ |
| #6 death_head[63317] |
| aero2.snds.com |
| To get some idea of my views on SC vs. WC, SC is infinitely better than any other game, and WC is infinitely better than Starcraft. BTW, would someone please tell me WHY my br sucked? And not just because I wrote that in less than 20 minutes. |
| #7 starlore[63318] |
| 207-172-132-197.s197.tnt5.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| becuse everyone says mine suck and I use html and pics, just very bad grammer on my part.=] |
| #8 Dr.Zchivago[63320] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Not bad, but not that great either.
As far as SC/BW and WCII go, it is all a matter of opinion which one is better. I can dig reading a good WCII report.
This BR didn't totally suck, but you have much room for improvement.
<ul><li>Paragraphs. Use better paragraphs. It is easier to read and follow along when the words are not all pressed together. More of a technical attribute and not really a content issue, but needs to be mentioned (yes, they were there, but think they are better separated by a whitespace line).
<li>Your mentioned details were good and needed, but I found myself having a hard time trying keep up with the timing of stuff. What did you scout with? Where were your expansions? The main island? For a site that heavily leans towards SC, it helps for a better terrain description or picture.
<li>Better game. I like the fact you were playing a girl. But you said you wre able to build 8 halls pretty much unmolested. That is wrong. This leads me to believe your opponent sucked as you never once mentioned her scouting. One sided games over a less-than-skilled player suck. Period.
<li>Orcs have Lumber, Smiths, Churches, Stables, and barracks? It's been a while since I played War II, but aren't those Human structures? Ok, I get what you mean, but still confusing. Remember, readers are stupid and shouldn't have to try to figure out what you are talking about.
<li>Your one battle was really weakly described. Of course, it was a crappy game, but try and give it a little spice or just describe it better. You said your opponent "got mad and charged". Ok, did they come single file? One mass group? Did she try and use any sort of flanking manuever at all? Just "charged in and got massacred by blizzard" is weak as hell, especially if it is your only battle.
</ul>
Over all it was fairly coherent. I was able to follow, but I just feel there wasn't much to follow at all.
I give this a 4.
But keep it up. You have the basis for doing some good work. Hope to see it in the future.
-Dr.Z
oh yah-starting off your report with "I just found this site 20 mins ago" sucks ass. |
| #9 shameless[63331] |
| spider-wq061.proxy.aol.com |
hehe
9th |
| #10 death_head[63343] |
| aero2.snds.com |
| Thanks Dr. Z for some serious input. Although I did play as the humans. I really would like to try again, maybe when I have a better game. |
| #11 JawaAvenger[63344] |
| d7-69.hntnny.optonline.net |
Get pictures too!!!
She didn't even scout her only island? She didn't have any Dragons? 80 Ogre-Magi and NO Death Knights!?!?!? Sorry, but that is NOT "conventional". How the Hell do you bloodlust 80 Ogre-Magi Anyway? |
| #12 Krebster[63371] |
| spider-tm011.proxy.aol.com |
| Dr.Z's right about the churches and stables orc have ogre mounds |
| #13 Shepherd[63384] |
| cm-24-161-50-176.nycap.rr.com |
| Is it me or Dr. Z has everything on a notepad or word processing programs so he can put down those comments down? I can have sworn that I have seen his comments like that somewhere before. . . |
| #14 death_head[63423] |
| aero2.snds.com |
I said I couldn't do pictures for this one right off. I think pictures rock though, so I'll definately include them in the future.
I always call everything by the human names forgot to change it to Orc for the br
To lust 80 Ogre-Magi is hard, but I've seen her do it before. You need to select an ogre, then press B (Bloodlust) and double-click on the next ogre. Repeat process. With this method, you can usually get them all lusted really fast, but it requires really good coordination sometimes. |
| #15 Dr.Zchivago[63440] |
| box2.trfb.navy.mil |
Haha.
No, Shepherd, I do not have stuff down on notepad or anything like that for me to just copy/paste comments in. I type them up as I think them.
I do flop back and forth to the BR to try and make sure I clarify my comments though.
-Dr.Z |
| #16 <font ="pink">AMD-SUX</font>[63617] |
| spc-isp-van-uas-28-6.sprint.ca |
| good you kick your sister's ass next time pick someone your own size. |
| #17 <font ="green">AMD-SUX</font>[63618] |
| spc-isp-van-uas-28-6.sprint.ca |
| good you kick your sister's ass next time pick someone your own size. |
| #18 <font="green">AMD-SUX</font>[63619] |
| spc-isp-van-uas-28-6.sprint.ca |
| good you kick your sister's ass next time pick someone your own size. |
| #19 death_head[63910] |
| aero2.snds.com |
| hehe my bnet doesn't work right now so I can't just my brother but he is an idiot hardcore dragons and griffins |
| #20 [63911] |
| aero2.snds.com |
| i just demo the hell out of his buildings his dragons dont react fast enough |
| #21 pikalisk[64135] |
| spider-th043.proxy.aol.com |
you had to play against your sister?????????????
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| #22 Triped[104434] |
| 63.85.132.17 |
My god this sucked
Oh wait it was me =[
I can write better now, I swear... |
| #23 [115726] |
| async7-3.remote.ualberta.ca |
| You played your sister? Man you are one sick fuck,you could make a better br facing a comp |
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