| #1 aToM[66281] |
| h24-70-120-49.cg.shawcable.net |
| its my first BR so plz go easy. |
| #2 Snork~Dimmy[66283] |
| async239-per2-isp-3.nas.one.net.au |
| 2ND!! |
| #3 Snork~Dimmy[66284] |
| async239-per2-isp-3.nas.one.net.au |
| now to go read it |
| #4 TeCh[66285] |
| 24.65.124.22.sk.wave.home.com |
| 1'st NON whore!!! (I'm just kidding) |
| #5 Snork~Dimmy[66286] |
| async239-per2-isp-3.nas.one.net.au |
| errr i havent read it all yet, but it helps to not abbreviate names of buildings, and to get spelling right. |
| #6 aToM[66292] |
| h24-70-120-49.cg.shawcable.net |
| lol ok =] |
| #7 [LoR]-Punisher[66294] |
| ktce1.156ce.singa.pore.net |
Same comments as Snork~dimmy.You shouldn't start a br by saying who vs who like what you have done.
Instead of:
K2~Bucheman vs ~Apocalyp$e~
as a start try this:
Map: Lost Temple
Players: K2~Bucheman ~Apocalyp$e
Observers:
This is just something rather basic,read other reports to see better ways of introducing players.
I'll give a 4.7 |
| #8 DivvyO[66295] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
It also helps to put what map the tw played on (yes I know it's temple, but this whole "moved the tank push so he could get another expansion" stuff was just weird wording).
Also, pics are always good, but hey, nobody's Breeze their first time out the gate.
TvZ where T wins ... hmm ... been seeing quite a few of these lately.
DivvyO |
| #9 aToM[66297] |
| h24-70-120-49.cg.shawcable.net |
i did take pictures, but i dont quite understand that part. Like can we put on as many pics as we want for the html?
I ll learn, and thanks for the 4.7 i thought id get worse. |
#10  [66302] |
| inehou-pxy02.compaq.com |
Pics don't mean that much, but this report was so very short. Which means lack of details, or a really bad game. Next time improve on either/both. You did have paragraphs at least that was ok..... Bleh at least you're trying
3
Fox^1 |
| #11 ummmm fox?[66305] |
| p134.netwood.net |
| it looks like my report had more details, and y did i get something lower than aTom? |
| #12 Hater[66308] |
| 147.97.26.37 |
| you suck |
| #13 aToM[66339] |
| h24-70-120-49.cg.shawcable.net |
| thx guys! but id also like to know about the pictures, when you go to submit report it says u can have a max of 5, is this only uploading to the page itself? or max of 5 in html too? |
| #14 aToM[66340] |
| h24-70-120-49.cg.shawcable.net |
| oh and yeah thx for the critism, it helps one get better. |
| #15 aToM[66341] |
| h24-70-120-49.cg.shawcable.net |
| Terran, i went there but the crack doesnt work, its not found on the site. |
| #16 Dog101[66400] |
| 1Cust238.tnt83.chi5.da.uu.net |
U probably needed to br a better game and/or make it longer cus it was way too short.
Dog |
| #17 Nyoken[67719] |
| spider-wl032.proxy.aol.com |
| You make apocalypse sound like he's a god. I mean come on it was like he had every expansion and those drops seems like they did nothing. "he almost got the CC but apocalypse is too good micro or whatever" |
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