| #1 Robert Frazer[67368] |
| frazers.demon.co.uk |
Hey, I got first comment on my very own Battlereport!
(Sad. Very very very sad.) |
| #2 WarLeaderJustin[67370] |
| AC8510B2.ipt.aol.com |
1st non-author with style.
-WLJ |
| #3 Kiran[67373] |
| topshelf2a.cache.pol.co.uk |
Now I see what you have been labouring over all day. Well at least it was worth it. I have however one minor problems with it, the story line wasn't concerning the South Americans but the Africans. I know it seems only trivial but the briefing is based on a true story (well kinda). Oh and you could've built the CC and not worried about your SCVs getting blatted by lifting off once your base was exhausted. Didn't thinck of that did ya? :)
Kiran |
| #4 beegle[67374] |
| cr60057-a.rct1.bc.wave.home.com |
| i give this an 8! bravo |
| #5 Kiran[67375] |
| topshelf2a.cache.pol.co.uk |
Now I see what you have been labouring over all day. Well at least it was worth it. I have however one minor problems with it, the story line wasn't concerning the South Americans but the Africans. I know it seems only trivial but the briefing is based on a true story (well kinda). Oh and you could've built the CC and not worried about your SCVs getting blatted by lifting off once your base was exhausted. Didn't thinck of that did ya? :)
Kiran |
| #6 Wangsonn[67379] |
| fcs00gsp.gsp.bellsouth.net |
| WHOA AQUA TERRAN OWWWWWWNAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGEEEEEEE |
| #7 Shepherd[67385] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
| Eh, no purple terrans? |
| #8 Flaco[67386] |
| cobalt.catskill.net |
| Yo no hablo anglais |
| #9 Fox^1-Rater[67388] |
| cobalt.catskill.net |
| I am a wanna be fox^1 trying to impersonate him |
| #10 dizdik{F@M}[67392] |
| cobalt.catskill.net |
| now to say, I did the last 2 comments and I'm very ashamed of myself |
| #11 dik4[67394] |
| cobalt.catskill.net |
What's a dik4?
I don't know
It's for fucking!!!
<scrolling>======D |
| #12 cerez[67399] |
| 207-172-130-100.s100.tnt3.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
GJ!
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| #13 willwinforfood[67404] |
| d120-54.hcvlny.optonline.net |
| that was odd, yet good. *shrug* i have no say in br's |
#14  [67433] |
| as530045.infocom.com |
Not sure what this was all about. The whole thing was pretty incoherent. There were a few funny lines (that one about The Matrix), but over all, I'm just not sure what was going on here.
5
Dref |
| #15 Robert Frazer[67453] |
| frazers.demon.co.uk |
Incoherent?
INCOHERENT????????
Seems fine English to me! I described the battle well, put in pictres to clear up some things that the text might not have been able to fully describe! And you give it a 5!!!!!
No offence meant here Drefsab, but seeing as all the other commenters seem to like this BR, I think you're in thw wrong here.
Maybe you're jealous because a Brit wrote a good report?
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| #16 Cerez[67542] |
| 207-172-128-88.s88.tnt1.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| Don't get mad at the Rater'z plz. |
| #17 TerranTurtle[67564] |
| pc85dn03.fcc.net |
| I dunno, I could follow the report rather easily, and even if you've never heard some English slang terms before, you can easily guess at what they mean. It flowed well, and I thought it was a very entertaining read. Dref, just go through and read it again...SLOWLY. :) If you can give Lewis and his shitty spastic English skillz high marks, you can cut this Brit a break. |
| #18 [67609] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Fyi, I didn't rate Lewis' report, it already had 5 ratings. I always give Lewis 9's due to his writing because it gets on my nerves as well... ;-)
Cheers,
Dref |
| #19 SCV~007[67617] |
| t3o57p110.telia.com |
Best writing since...The Phoenix Legion I think.
"The creening cries of the jungle's inhabitants were silenced as the ear-bursting roar of retro jets filled the air. Its sillhouette marked out cleanly against the rising sun, the dropship fell from the heavens, its blue-hot engines shrivelling and torching the twisted maze of jungle undergrowth as it touched down, as gently as a feather."
Heh I'd give it a 7 for the intro alone =) One tip though, try to include a picture of the map, or describe what it looks like. Also in this case, the objectives in the map.
Your text is very good, and the pics are made with humour even though there are no "extra" effects.
Go make a report on a real game. Now, I want to read it! |
| #20 KoolManBloke[67672] |
| usern177.uk.uudial.com |
Nice Report
GJ! |
| #21 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[67675] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
This was an OK report. Not exactly stellar, but reasonable.
hmmm . . .
I'd have given it a 6.
Don't flame the raters, I did that once, and then I realized they were actually right =/
next time better =) |
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