| #1 Admiral_Ingram[74253] |
| cs26210-6.hot.rr.com |
| first |
| #2 Eradicate~Me[74254] |
| spider-tj071.proxy.aol.com |
2nd
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| #3 Sexy^Orangutang[74257] |
| spider-wm042.proxy.aol.com |
| A nice try for a first report, but add some detail, maybe a short introduction, and you'll get something better than a 5, which im sure this will get. |
| #4 Sid6.9[74259] |
| 1Cust226.tnt13.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Time to light it up folks! Light up this battle report with a Good, Bad and Ugly! So, let it burn baby, let.....it......burn!
The good-
Decent writing, didn't get lost too bad in the action and could follow it reasonably well.
The Bad-
Paragraphs are your friend, use them. Each time you switch up the action, say after your attack and what your opponent did to retaliate would be a good spot to put in a paragraph and so on and so forth.
More details. A few times I got confused cause you switched up your strategies with little detail about why.
Don't put in things like 1 Battlecruiser owning 4 Archons, when everyone knows that it's the other way around.
Some pics would have been really helpful.
The Ugly-
Spell check owns you, yes, yes it does.
Report card reads-
Writing- C (Spelling errors really detracted from the report)
Pic Quality- N/A
Pic Selection- N/A
Entertainment- C (Confusion on the action at times had dropped my entertainment level.)
Overall- C
Personal Comments- This report I would rank as fair, for a first time report. But you need some work. First try using paragraphs more, ensure spelling is accurate, and add some details before trying to venture in pics or HTML. You need to square away the writing first. This report will more than likely get between a 3-5 from the raters.
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| #5 Eradicate~Me[74262] |
| spider-tj034.proxy.aol.com |
| sid get a life, u fucking homo |
| #6 teck.lika.hore[74265] |
| JHU0024.RES.JHU.EDU |
k Title gave away ending - bad
erad, at least sid is trying to help the authors make better brs, all you do is bitch. in the words of calvin, 'go soak your head'
teck |
| #7 Kamikase[74266] |
| cr926028-a.rct1.bc.wave.home.com |
| Darn I made a mistake! I meant to say that 1 bc does not own 4 archons. And thanks for the tips sid. Eradicate I think u need to get a life yourself, and then critisise ppl who help other ppl. |
| #8 Sid6.9[74267] |
| 1Cust226.tnt13.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Actually Kamikase, what you did say was accurate about the battlecruiser and 4 Archons, I just read it wrong. You said 1 battlecrusier is no match for 4 archons and lead it to your tanks. My bad, please discount that comment from #4. |
| #9 (TYC)Khas'andro[74269] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Yes, paragraphs own, and Eradicate~Me should go fuck himself. |
| #10 Eradicate~Me[74279] |
| spider-wd051.proxy.aol.com |
gw NEWBIES
btw khas'androwhatever the hell it is, "go fuck yourself", heh, thats kinda hard, not to mention that might be the lamest "insult" ever said. Especially coming from a fucking newbie who writes text only brs that get 1's. gw u dickless transvesteite |
| #11 Eradicate~Me[74283] |
| spider-wd051.proxy.aol.com |
Error, my bad khas'andro_____?!? did have a pic report, although the pics weren't exactly pics....more like pics that looked like water ripples...in other words..BLURY
Still your a Newbluryie. hehe thats good! |
#12  [74294] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
I am torn.
I think the report is pretty damn crappy.
It's vanilla, no paragraphs, weird report of the action of the game, very very newb-like (depot, rax, 2 -TWO- bunkers), even had the gall to ask for a specific rating...
But, you said this is your first battlereport...
So, to flame or not to flame?
I think Sid mentioned a few points up there. I also think Erad did too, hehe.
Anyway, what really irks me is that you say you don't have any - <i>insert gay hacker text here</i> - HTML skills at all. Well, did you take any time whatsoever to look at the reporting guides!!!!????
People take some time to write their "first" but never go look at guidelines posted here on the site for helping to make your "first report" not such a piece of drivel.
Don't take it so bad, go play some games and when you report, take the time to make paragraphs at least. I don't care if there are pics or not, just that it is organized and thought out.
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-Dr.Z |
#13  [74295] |
| zmapxypro05-b.zma.compaq.com |
The br fit on one page... You had no spaces.. Whenever BC's are used and the report is soooo short.... I dunno next time try harder. But don't stop trying.
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Fox |
| #14 dude, sid[74300] |
| rm03-24-131-186-223.ce.mediaone.net |
im serious dude, you REALLY need a fuckin life
like 5 sesconds after every report is posted youre right tehre to make a page long reply "grading" it.
god damimt you fuckin nerd, do you just stare at comp with your big glasses, crater face, and pokemon cards until anotehr BR pops up here?
i sware to god man, youre a pathetic human being |
| #15 SCV~007[74361] |
| t2o57p15.telia.com |
Don't flame Sid6.9 when he tries to help people.
And I think everyone should read those guides, you always learn some little detail even though you think you know everything ;) |
| #16 Eradicate~Me[74377] |
| spider-tr062.proxy.aol.com |
| So? Since when did the first ammendmant not count? Dref freedom of speech should also apply here. I never saw you lift a finger with hawks problems on this site, but i make 1 fucking comment and you work like a horse tracking down my reports as if they mean something. They don't, in fact you didn't even offend me. I don't even see why your on my ass, I never did anything to you. Jesus christ.. |
#17  [74380] |
| as530065.infocom.com |
Because you are needlessly flaming people who are trying to make this site a better place. A lot of reporters really appreciate the kind of feedback that Sid is giving and if he has the time to do it, more power to him. I'm simply showing my support for Sid so that you and other flaming assholes don't chase him away.
Dref |
| #18 {ahc}overmind[74384] |
| user-2ive628.dialup.mindspring.com |
I sopport sid, it is because of his input that I was able to see through the gloom and see what was actually good about my reports. I emphasized the good, and would like to say i would give sid 10 dollars if i could. But, anyway here's what i think of your report, it is ok. More detail would be better, and screenshots even more. But, I would like to emphasize that I HAVE NEVER BEEN GOOD AT GRAPHIC MANIPULATION. So don't look at me for advice. Give it a few months to develop a style. In my first report i had never heard of yeti, thus i didn't know i was copying him by using a third person, make sure you aren't copying someone else's style. I always start with the date, something about the weather, and then something unfourtanate that happens to me. So develop an into, and i hope to see you more on br.com
If anyone wants to curse at me, go right ahead, i get cursed at when i walk to school and i don't mind.
Sincerely yours,
{ahc}overmind (I'M HAVING A HEART ATTACK!) |
| #19 N[74391] |
| spider-wa064.proxy.aol.com |
| erad, the lamest insults are the "yo mamma jokes". Wow my momma this, my momma that, am i suppose to care? |
| #20 Sid6.9[74392] |
| 1Cust154.tnt7.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Woo hoo 10 dollars! Gimmie, gimmie, gimmie! :-P |
| #21 N[74393] |
| spider-wa064.proxy.aol.com |
| erad, the lamest insults are the "yo mamma jokes". Wow my momma this, my momma that, am i suppose to care? |
| #22 Eradicate~Me[74491] |
| spider-mtc-tf023.proxy.aol.com |
| kinda a tie, dont ya think? "N"? state your name! |
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