| #1 mattkid[75347] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
1st!
yeah! |
| #2 Bullis[75350] |
| dataforen.p2p.nu |
2
bad report..
to big font..no pic.. bad writing
to big ego... |
#3 [75351] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Hmm, not much here. 3.
Dref |
| #4 znzf[75352] |
| 24.65.81.66.on.wave.home.com |
only a "little" one sided
what do u think he would have done after he mined out his base ? long method of mining + canons
u win no matter what u do
u leave the comp for 20 hours
his canons wont go into your creap |
| #5 america~jin[75358] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
I saw the all the titles "early-game", "mid-game" and "end-game" without scrolling so I figured it probably wasn't worth reading.
Try again sometime |
| #6 Sid6.9[75363] |
| 1Cust38.tnt3.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Well there's not much to work with so Instead of a Things report, I'll offer up some advice to you.
- Use a different background if you are going to color the report. It will enhance the report even more, and make it look attractive for the reader.
-Make your font size=2. Judging from the report you had it either 3 or 4. 2 is about the max for the report, but you can make Captions or Titles bigger if you want.
- Details make a report. You have the basic details down, but you didn't expand on them. Give build orders, tell us what you think your opponent may be going for, what strategy he and you were using and why.
- Have more of an imagination with the sub-titles than just "Early game, mid game, end game" that is sooo 1999. Come up with something that tells about that section. Like in my report yesterday, I put as a sub-title "They melt in your mouth, not in your hands" meaning that section was mainly about M and M's, it foretold without foretelling if you can understand that.
-Find a good back and forth game to report on. That's what a reader wants to see, a good game, where both players use succesful attacks on one another, and where the question of who is going to win is in doubt until near the end.
Just keep working at it. Don't get discouraged, keep trying, I'm sure you will do better on the next one, if, hopefully, you do decide to do one.
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| #7 Napoleic[75365] |
| van4d43.dial.uniserve.ca |
Er, you said you expanded, bringing your total to five when you only mentioned having 2 bases before that... where's the math?
Everything else has been said |
| #8 ()Planeswalker()[75402] |
| bgm-24-95-144-133.stny.rr.com |
| You reported your own game? If this is your first battle report then it should have been an observer. Also shrink that ego and people will take you more seriously. |
| #9 ()Planeswalker()[75404] |
| bgm-24-95-144-133.stny.rr.com |
| Definitley a newby bashing. I agree with znzf. He lost the game for himself, u didn't win it. |
#10 [75412] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
What Dref said...
-Dr.Z |
| #11 mattkid[75413] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| I suck at this br stuff |
| #12 mattkid[75414] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| Well in 2 days I'll have a game where I can whatch both playes and ACUTATTLY take screenshots |
| #13 ~(MaNiAc)~[75458] |
| px1ar.ed.wave.shaw.ca |
| What dref said.... |
| #14 TheCrypticDwarf[75585] |
| spider-tl063.proxy.aol.com |
Its been said many many many times......
What Dref said.... |
| #15 ;;[75637] |
| 24-216-14-15.hsacorp.net |
heres some good advice
never battle report again |
| #16 mattkid[76254] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| i have a picture of me killing him but i cound't get it to work |