| #1 Cidolfas[76672] |
| ool-18bc4e6c.dyn.optonline.net |
| 1st hahah now i read |
| #2 ~7th^Agsdad[76673] |
| 1Cust12.tnt2.irvington.nj.da.uu.net |
asdf. I didn't get first on my own breport. Goddamn 56k...
Read and tell me what you think guys.
~7th^Agsdad |
| #3 ShadowyAlias[76675] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
3rd
now to read... |
| #4 EvilManny[76676] |
| spider-mtc-tb052.proxy.aol.com |
Dude....for a first ty i must say very good. At leas u dont have gay gokes like osme of the other reporters...:)
Hard Work pays off doenst it? ...lol
Gl in the future fellow Starcraft player
Evil |
| #5 Maowse[76677] |
| koro-m05.powersurfr.com |
| Fifth ^^ Wow, Im so fast... Now to go read |
| #6 MourningWood[76679] |
| fw8.intuit.com |
This was an OK battlereport. I understand that this was your first, so you should be prepared for some criticism.
First, your english skills are lacking. This made it somewhat hard to follow the action from paragraph to paragraph. Second, you need to get your hands on a good image editing application. The images that you did capture were at the appropriate locations and times during the game, but by using MS Paint to edit them you destroyed much of what would have been appealing. Third, you need to learn a little more about HTML. I noticed several of your images overlapping the text, and hence making the game even harder to follow.
I did like the actual game that you chose to battlereport. It was a close match and not on Lost Temple.
Overall I would say that this battlereport was below average with respect to how battlereports should be (not necessarily with respect to the average battlereport submitted to this site). Therefore, I would rate this report a:
3-4
If you keep trying I'm sure that you will improve.
Cheers,
MourningWood |
| #7 Scarab[76680] |
| AC8C3241.ipt.aol.com |
<i>Overall I would say that this battlereport was below average with respect to how battlereports should be </i>
since when is there a "way" that all brs "should be"
moron
and btw, put some borders on pics that ovverlap |
| #8 ~7th^Agsdad[76681] |
| 1Cust12.tnt2.irvington.nj.da.uu.net |
MourningWood, I appreciate the criticism...but when I view the report none of my pics overlap the text. What browser you usin? im on IE5.0
I know the pics suck... but everytime I tried to dload paintshop pro it wouldnt work. Anybody have a site other than www.jasc.com that has it?
~7th^Agsdad
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| #9 Cidolfas[76682] |
| ool-18bc4e6c.dyn.optonline.net |
Be ready for some criticism because i aint showin no mercy to u agsdad even though u are my lover ^^
Overall: It was an okay game to Battle Report. I think it would have been better if u did an introduction to the characters and map. U shold organize ur thoughts with differnet line breaks and stuff. Also using gray to write on MS Paint = bad idea. all in all good report maybe 5-6.
Cheers?
Cidolfas |
| #10 MourningWood[76686] |
| fw2.sd.intuit.com |
| I'm using Explorer 5.00.2920.0000. |
| #11 Dark Counsle[76687] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
If my report was 3, that should be a 5-6
:) |
| #12 Starookie[76696] |
| edtn009546.hs.telusplanet.net |
Nice report, scv 007 got whooped.
YES YES YES YESYSEYSEYSEYSEYSEY DIE SCV DIE!!!!!
good pics, but some were kinda choppy....look at some other mspaint reports like bw-sux and aznsunboy..they got good paint images....also <strike>Starookie</strike> has good pics in mspaint too. Gl and hope to see more!
6-7 |
| #13 garett[76707] |
| cdm-160-22-tyl.cox-internet.com |
| this would be like an 7-8 if the pics didnt overlap the text and stuff, oh yeah and mourningwood is a fucking moron |
| #14 SCV~007[76726] |
| kk97-253.kalmar.se |
| I own. |
| #15 SCV~007[76730] |
| kk97-253.kalmar.se |
As you described it, I actually had a chance at winning this fight (which I didn't) so I'm happy ;)
Might better to use white background since its easier to get the pictures to match then.
DIE STAROOKIE ;) |
| #16 Traditions[76755] |
| spc-isp-tor-58-23-143.sprint.ca |
good br good br~~!
i wooped you scv hehehe i like how he made it seem like you had a chance^^ hehe |
| #17 gosu'killa[77059] |
| cnet1-lerner.cc.columbia.edu |
this was a fun br' to read, but my main gripe was that i couldnt read the text hidden under one of the pics...btw i am using netscape on a linux os...(im at school --a)
creative uses with mspaint///
i give it 5-6 ^^ |
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