| #1 Novadistortion[78614] |
| ed143.ips.PaulBunyan.net |
Well, I enjoyed writing it. Feedback on how to improve would be nice. I know I left out some details in there, but I didn't remember everything and only took one screenshot.(the scores)
Nova |
| #2 mattkid[78615] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| 1nd non-author |
| #3 mattkid[78616] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| i mean 1st |
| #4 brented[78621] |
| proxy3-external.elcjn1.sdca.home.com |
| i liked it, but i don't see how some of that stuff rhymes...Oh well. I liked the revenge aspect of the report. |
#5  [78627] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Report a better game. I didn't get the scrooge theme.
3
Dref |
| #6 Baxter-O'Bixby[78628] |
| adsl-63-195-119-107.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
You show promise, young one. Take screenshots next time!! Very important. I liked where you were going with the Scrooge theme, but you never really developed it past the intro. If you'd referred to certain units or attack groups as "ghosts of Christmas Past, Present, and Future," that coulda been pretty funny. ;-) You might also have done more with the rhyming and actually made a coherent little "night before Christmas" type poem about the game.
Again, much potential, you just didn't explore it. I'll give this one a 5 because I always like hearing about arrogant SOBs being smacked down and falling silent. |
| #7 TerranNavel[78632] |
| h0050e4902d4f.ne.mediaone.net |
| umm... did he say what map that was? |
| #8 mattkid[78636] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
yeah what maP?? I assume it was LT
4-5 |
| #9 King_[LSRS-13][78637] |
| c1081558-a.clmba1.mo.home.com |
| It rhymed, but in all the wrong places. Pretty good though, but I agree with Dref, I didn't get the scrooge theme either. |
| #10 D-o-r-f-l[78640] |
| cable-o-90.sigecom.net |
| Uh... you're a modest one... |
| #11 Novadistortion[78775] |
| ea84.ips.PaulBunyan.net |
Well, let me explain a little, it was late at night, I was bored, and I had just watched a movie. I know I left out details and pictures. This is mainly because I had to put all my Starcraft skill into use to make him look bad.
I also know the scrooge thing was kindof vague. It was difficult to fit in what I did. Ive been learning for a while and I did say it was lost temple.
Until the next one, I would like to say that I really don't care about the score I get on the report or opinions. I accept criticism to improve my writing. Also, it should be understood that this report was created mostly to show just how big a head my opponent had. |
| #12 random average player[78810] |
| dialup-209.244.143.73.Providence1.Level3.net |
better game please
capt picard :) |
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