| #1 SCV~007[80428] |
| t3o957p103.telia.com |
| GW screwing up the pics two times in a row and then submitting without them *_* |
| #2 DivvyO[80433] |
| adsl-64-160-26-204.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| Ah don't hassle the kid. Sure he screws up reports, but they can be deleted. And his name? Sure, It sounds a LOT like PoA's. But ... uh ... still reading ... |
| #3 SCV~007[80440] |
| t5o957p45.telia.com |
| DivvyO, get out of the washmachine. °_° |
| #4 The.Confessor[80441] |
| 134.126.183.140 |
| omfg PREVIEW BUTTON JACKASS |
| #5 BUU[80444] |
| spider-te063.proxy.aol.com |
| i'm inbred |
| #6 Eat-the-Chobo[80445] |
| spider-te063.proxy.aol.com |
| i read the first 2 paragraphs then quit because his attempts at humor were already putting me in a worse mood |
#7  [80447] |
| 216.117.89.90 |
whew, that was rough.
3
Dref |
| #8 <font color="red">Char4Life</font>[80448] |
| extfw.dcgov.org |
| hmmm..first 2 br no picks but with color, then he just kinda bs last one and says screw colors and pics. ^^ |
| #9 OuTSiDeR[80449] |
| spider-wl083.proxy.aol.com |
| ...great br write more w/o pics or color or good writing plz. |
| #10 Eradicate~Me[80453] |
| spider-tj053.proxy.aol.com |
| your a complete dumbass |
| #11 WarLeaderJustin[80459] |
| spider-wc071.proxy.aol.com |
...
If you're going to finally submit without pictures, take at least 5 minutes going through it and taking out references to the pictures.
2. |
| #12 Sil3nT[80460] |
| AKCF1.xtra.co.nz |
| HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHAHAHHA That guys an idiot AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA |
| #13 HKRules[80461] |
| c319185.extern.lawrenceville.org |
| Where'd the heck did the "pics of crap" go??? |
| #14 SlingsNArrows[80462] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| Get your own nick you bad manner nick stealing penis gobbler! |
| #15 Monty Pylon[80464] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
ummmmmmmmm......Next time preview the report to make sure it doesn't look like a baby ate the alphabet and threw up. It was hard to read do to the tags and you had no pics when you said you did. Be careful about details like that and preview the report. Don't be discuraged and try again.
Damn the man, save the Empire,
Monty Pylon |
| #16 Rabid_Raccoon[80481] |
| A010-0090.BTVL.splitrock.net |
| Screw Monty Pylon-be discouraged |
| #17 Cearas[80491] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| Liar, where the fuck are those pictures. Cock-Gobbler. |
| #18 Perry![80506] |
| maxt13m37.ipoline.com |
| don't mind the critiques.. go my lil best friend! keep up the good work!!! |
| #19 garett[80508] |
| cdm-158-162-tyl.cox-internet.com |
| this was fucking horrible, and fuck you |
| #20 Ar[@nE13[80539] |
| 213.166.21.132 |
| ...........Fuck u all and stop disencouraging the kid!!!!!!1 |
#21  [80602] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Dref said it well, but here are some other details:
<ul>
<li>White Space - Use paragraphs and hard line breaks to provide space between your groupings of words. Easier to read this way.
<li>Longer BR - I think this one was too short.
<li>HTML Tags - In a text only report I find it very hard to keep up with who is doing what the way you just wrote. The use of the colored HTML tags usually clears this right up.
<li>Repeat after me "Preview button is my friend".
</ul>
3
-Dr.Z |
| #22 UDontknOwME[80644] |
| spider-wa053.proxy.aol.com |
Again, Dr.Z is comin' out with his verbal assaults, but onto the critique:
1. If you say you have pics, then you need the pics!!!
2. You need to read the report over once you've typed it to make sure it looks ok.
3. Your descriptions of the battle was, well, BLEH
4. You did an ok job with your br, but you selected a really bad game to br
5. Check on your grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc.
6. Do better next time
Ok, keep on trying. Not a bad first try. Do your best and you will eventually get a good score.
-The Unknown |
| #23 UDontKnOwME[80645] |
| spider-wa053.proxy.aol.com |
I forgot your score:
4 for trying
2 for the report
Average = total score = 3
sorry dude :( |
#24  [80741] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| fack u |
| #25 SoulReaver[80778] |
| cx233903-a.elcjn1.sdca.home.com |
First of all, that was a horrible report. The humor sucked. The battle descriptions sucked. The flow sucked.
Second, people saying "don't discourage the kid" have no clue what the comments are for. Its purpose isn't to be nice to the guy who wrote the report, its to give an honest critique. If the report sucked, say so. |
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