| #1 UDontknOwME[81242] |
| bsg-ma9c-63.rasserver.net |
| That was my next installment. Next one coming soon. Thanks for reading. Bye! |
| #2 ...[81245] |
| 24-240-44-88.hsacorp.net |
| 1st non author |
| #3 ...[81247] |
| 24-240-44-88.hsacorp.net |
| Read it now. It's pretty good, with a few typos. JW, was this based on a real game? It sort of seems like it. Pretty good length, will enjoy reading the end. |
| #4 HKRules[81250] |
| c319224.extern.lawrenceville.org |
Better, much better. Not based on a real game, obviously, no one whould send a lone dragoon against 4 sunkens and 10 hydas. Also, why didn't the Toss commander order the dragoon back?
I look forward to reading the next installment. |
| #5 UDontKnOwME[81254] |
| spider-we054.proxy.aol.com |
| If you mean Phalimin HK, he put Lokab in charge of the Protoss group. Lokab was under the terrans and was fed up with the dragoon's stupidity. so he let it die. |
| #6 [81296] |
| rm03-24-131-186-223.ce.mediaone.net |
| strategy* |
| #7 ~ZC~K@O$[81304] |
| 216.241.44.88 |
yah i wish more actoin but it's fun to read so get next installment quick!
Peace
-kaoS |
#8  [81312] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
I have an idea and this may sound silly. Why don't you write the whole story and release it at once so that you don't spam up the entire front page with this stuff?
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Dref |
| #9 UDontknOwME[81327] |
| bsg-ma10b-123.rasserver.net |
For one Dref, this thing actually took me about 6 FRICKEN HOURS TO TYPE! And if I was to finish it, I would have to work nonstop for about 48 or so hours. 2 days non-stop. Can anyone do that? O well. I told you in the beginning that it may take like three more parts before I finish this.
You may not like it, but I want to do this. And I have one more question: Does anyone ever ask these questions to Monty Pylon or .Praetor? I know they are StarCraft fanfic writer gods, but does anyone? And if you consider this spam dref, then don't read it. That makes sense, doesn't it?
UDontKnOwME |
| #10 [81354] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Couple of things
First, you don't have to work on it for 48 hours straight. Spend a couple of weeks on it, 3-4 hours a day. Then if it has a lot of text, release it in 2-3 parts.
Second, you're not even close to being in the same league as Praetor. Sorry if that's harsh, but its the truth. Keep in mind that his phoenix series was around 50,000 words and each part was twice as long as anything I've seen released from you... :P
Finally, I have yet to read anything from you that has really drawn me in as a reader. When and if that happens, you can expect gold from me, no matter how its released.
Cheers,
Dref |
| #11 UDontKnOwME[81356] |
| spider-mtc-ta033.proxy.aol.com |
I know I am not in their league, but I want to be. You weren't exactly helping when you said that what I wrote was spam and tried to make a joke out of it. And if you could tell me how to save the thing without losing it every time I have to sign off, then I would be glad to send in a story that is about 3 times longer than Praetor. I don't know if it would be as good, but I would be able to work on it more.
That's all I wanted to say. I have a lot of respect for the reporters and raters and everyone on this site. They make me laugh, they show me good work, and I just want to be as good as them. But it's hard if I can't get enough motivation to actually write something good. But you are probably right, so I'll shut up.
UDontKnOwME |
| #12 [82270] |
| user-2ive6dd.dialup.mindspring.com |
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