| #1 author[81749] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| shaky |
| #2 ...[81750] |
| 24-240-44-88.hsacorp.net |
2nd
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| #3 ...[81751] |
| 24-240-44-88.hsacorp.net |
| Read it now, and that wasn't really that good. Bad grammer, bad spelling, and a pretty bad plot. An invincible guy who becomes a marine/vulture/wraith/ghost? ... Sorry. |
| #4 Cearas[81752] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| 3rd, blow me. |
| #5 Cearas[81753] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
Fuck you.
3rd sucks anyway, 4th and 5th forever. |
| #6 mattkid[81754] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| uhh mines don't kill probes |
| #7 mattkid[81756] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| good job looking for to learning about the almighty weapon =P |
| #8 WarLeaderJustin[81767] |
| spider-wd072.proxy.aol.com |
| Gotta love when a title encompasses the report wholly. |
| #9 TheVictim[81779] |
| 155.176.112.80 |
Statistically speaking, this story is quite unlikely because it both SUCKS and BLOWS at the same time. Figure the odds on that...
I'm not saying mine are any better though. I think we need our own bad fanfic area so we don't keep spamming the BR's
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| #10 [81792] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| mines kill probes wen iz splashed off other units. and i kno dat obviously. and hes not invincible |
| #11 Dillihole[81817] |
| 1Cust219.tnt6.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Yes I agree, this fan fic was definently colorless, not to mention that the writing, plot, and storyline as well were colorless.
Oh and BTW, Spellcheck owns you, yes, yes it does. |
#12  [81831] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Hmm, not much here to rate. This story really didn't make much sense.
3
Dref |
| #13 gj[81845] |
| spider-wf054.proxy.aol.com |
"They ran very very fast, although ghosts can't really run, only strut. So they struted really really fast."
roflmao
i really liked it, goddamnit it said the mines didnt kill the probes, they were sent to harass!! screw spelling i enjoyed it, thats all that matters
reminds me of han solo |
| #14 MourningWood[81888] |
| fw8.intuit.com |
| An excellent exercise in stupidity. |
| #15 [81907] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
make it a quote =()
this was juss a freewrite.
the next one will be much more "focused"
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| #16 gj[81910] |
| proxy.aus.netsetter.com |
u suck...u have no idea how comment....
in otha words ur suppose to say
THIS REPORT SUX xP ROFLMOA haha make it betta and stop writin brs...u sux jk continue and improve i give it a 1 |
| #17 i meant...[81911] |
| proxy.aus.netsetter.com |
| i meant gj u suck noot mai name as gj mai bad |
| #18 Baxter-O'Bixby[81988] |
| adsl-63-195-119-107.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
I kinda lost interest about halfway through. The main character is flat, and the description of the action is weak. Read one of Heartcutter's BRs; he manages to work better characterization into one of his normal BRs than this fanfic has managed.
Deon > Mad
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