| #1 badtz_maru[82385] |
| barry-asy-41.rutgers.edu |
First with badtz maru style
kaka justin owned ^_^ |
| #2 eh[82387] |
| hsa201.pool023.at101.earthlink.net |
gj nice report
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| #3 ThieverIV[82393] |
| spider-tr043.proxy.aol.com |
| 3rd. OK report, but short, not much detail, no captions for the pics, and not such a good game. Work on it. Also, don't abbreviate so much (zlings), this isn't a chat room. Write it all out. |
| #4 [-EoN-]-SpyX-[82401] |
| dhcp-60-142-dwc.fccj.cc.fl.us |
| Oh well... |
| #5 [-EoN-]-SpyX-[82402] |
| dhcp-60-142-dwc.fccj.cc.fl.us |
Oh well...oh ya..i should take the time to advertise my clan
channel Clan -EoN-
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| #6 [HK]SLAYER[82417] |
| d150-2-210.home.cgocable.net |
Not bad but try to put your pictures in between the text don't just have an all text/pic format.
Also use more space; make letters bigger, double space, etc. (makes report more pleasurable to read). |
| #7 Mistah~T[82421] |
| ip80-83.airswitch.net |
T pities the foo who writes Br's on Blood Bath, get some righteous LT or huntaz action goin foo.
3-5 |
| #8 Dillihole[82422] |
| 1Cust239.tnt11.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Paragraphs are your friend and Spellcheck owns your ass.
I would suggest learning HTML, but jesus, you haven't comprehended how to use paragraphs yet. |
| #9 [-EoN-]-SpyX-[82442] |
| dhcp-60-103-dwc.fccj.cc.fl.us |
#10 Dillihole[82422]
Paragraphs are your friend and Spellcheck owns your ass.
I would suggest learning HTML, but jesus, you haven't comprehended how to use paragraphs yet.
-wow,ur so much better than me.... |
| #10 Poltergeist_001[82443] |
| 209.115.253.64 |
| I dont get why you copied what dillihole said...all the same, an average bad report. |
| #11 Dillihole to Eon-Spyx[82452] |
| 1Cust65.tnt5.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Yes, I am |
| #12 the()vermind[82459] |
| user-2iveams.dialup.mindspring.com |
| alright people, time for some newb bashing, but this guy shows some promise, so I won't be <i>too</i> harsh. Comparitiviely to other reports, this was pretty good. But there were some bad points, A) the game was relatively short B) The game had no stellar strategies in it C)the game <i>could</i> be called one sided, he only attacked you once D)you should use paragraphs e) I realize that you don't know html, but it would be interesting in the report if you did f) the battle shots were made so small that I couldn't read anything on there g) your report was short h) your battle shots took up more room than your text i) you're too brief j) you should include more detail k) I reccomend at the least spell checking before you submit it L) while there were grammar problems, they were minor enough not to be noticed. Overall, relatively fair report, for a begginer of course. The range is 3-6, I give 3-5 |
| #13 america~jin[82479] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
This one goes out to all those "soar" losers out there...
Booya |
| #14 [-EoN-]-SpyX- to The()vermind[82490] |
| dhcp-60-115-dwc.fccj.cc.fl.us |
| understood,thanks for the feadback |
| #15 Napoleic[83187] |
| proxy4-external.rdc1.bc.home.com |
| Hey I thought it was better than that. The Battle Shot format used to be very popular, thats how HC did it, and I bet you never dissed him for it =/. Keep it up SpyX! |
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