| #1 UDontKnOwME[83521] |
| bsg-ma-cache2.icg.net |
So, third installment. This one is about 7.3 pages long with a 16. font. I hope it's long enough. Hope you like it.
All comments welcome this time
Have a nice day :),
UDKM |
| #2 UDontKnOwME[83522] |
| bsg-ma-cache2.icg.net |
One side note:
Whoevers did it, DONT hack into my account again. I am going to finish this even if everyone hates the report. |
| #3 Normandy-1944[83523] |
| spider-wc042.proxy.aol.com |
::Logs onto Battlereports.com::
::Looks at udontknowme's BR::
::Cries himself to sleep:: |
| #4 Barage[83527] |
| 160.10.203.35 |
I know this isn't a real comment on the report but just to note:
Normandy's comment=ROFL
Sometimes, it's the little things.... |
#5  [83530] |
| 63.220.230.228 |
| This series is getting worse. I hate every character in it. |
| #6 HKRules[83536] |
| c319097.extern.lawrenceville.org |
This started out fine.
When I saw the 2, I thought, what the hell, but then, the illogic started pouring in.
Zerg do not have independent thought. They are controlled by Cerebrates. You can't fool them because they are merely extensions of a mind.
What the heck a medic spy for the Zerg?? And they found the DNA? A simple DNA cross-check would have revealed her identity immediately. |
| #7 <font color=yelllow> |]agomar[83545] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
ROFL ROFL this is SOOO BAD ahahaaa!
That Zergling thing was absolutely hysterical . . . a 9 for being the worst report someone actually tried on. |
| #8 UDontknOwMe[83546] |
| A010-1169.KRLD.splitrock.net |
| Again, I apologize. Last night, I got stoned off my ass in front of the computer. Next thing I knew, it was morning and this was posted. Sorry! |
| #9 phoenix[LoD][83553] |
| roc-24-95-209-16.rochester.rr.com |
This is awful. How can you write this? Don't get "stoned off your ass in front of the computer" any more.
Oh, and your I'm-going-to-finish-this-even-if-every-person-on-the-face-of-the-earth-hates-it attitude won't help anything, either. It's self-fulfilling.
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #10 ThieverIV[83561] |
| spider-wc023.proxy.aol.com |
"Danny cloaked and told Julie to stay low. He cloaked, and walked behind them."
So he cloaked, and then he cloaked...
"Again, I apologize. Last night, I got stoned off my ass in front of the computer. Next thing I knew, it was morning and this was posted. Sorry! "
What do you mean, again? You never said that! I think you're just trying to make excuses...
Sorry, but I really didn't like this, or the last one, or the one before that. |
| #11 UDontKnOwME[83563] |
| bsg-ma-cache2.icg.net |
| what in the hell are you people thinking. you actually think that i would say that about myself? And, again, I am going to finish this. it's not a self-glorification thing, it's a fact. yes, i made mistakes, but please don't tell me that none of you have ever made mistakes. right now, i am just so...FUCKING PISSED ^#54&#$^#^#$#^&%$... that any of you would be stupid enough to believe that i posted something about me getting myself stoned. |
| #12 poiopi[83564] |
| a24b31n66client251.hawaii.rr.com |
| HAHAHAHHAHAHA "im gonna finish the series even if they all get zeroes" hahahahhahahah thats a great attitude, whats the point of even writing something you KNOW everyone hates? |
| #13 For~The~love~Of[83567] |
| dip-53.maxg4-1.dips.csonline.net |
| i think you need to share that shit you were smoking so we can all see eye to eye |
| #14 Cearas[83568] |
| cache02-e3c.syd.optusnet.com.au |
| Haha, just give it up already. |
| #15 s1utty[83572] |
| host-216-76-218-52.dab.bellsouth.net |
maybe instead of finnishing this you should kill yourself?
just an opinion |
| #16 Abusing[83604] |
| Timmins-136.nt.net |
| This site would have been a better place if ur mother was shot B4 she had you. |
| #17 Dobeedee[83658] |
| MAX04-3-184.icgla.cwia.com |
Dang "Abusing" your comment has got to be one of the meanest things I've ever seen on a BR comments section. Please restrain yourself before posting something like that again. As for Udontknowme's report. Im not going to lie to you it was pretty.. err bad. Heres some advice for your next report.
1. Some parts were unclear. Before submitting your report proof read it to make sure everything makes sense. Remember, if it doesnt make sense to you its not going to make sense to the readers of your fan-fic.
2. Make your report more realistic to the game. The way that the ghost took out the pack of zerglings was just... odd.
3. Instead of telling us what "Backarak" exactly is in the story try to make the characters dialog slowly reveal to the reader what your talking about.
I hope these comments help. |
| #18 Mixin~Marc[84118] |
| 216.124.78.253 |
If anyone knows the code to rate reports, it would be very
kind of you to go to this : ZarbonP@netscape.net
and leave it there for me, thx
why do i have to know, lets just say its my need to know
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