| #1 WarLeaderJustin[87575] |
| adsl-64-171-76-203.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| I am not the biggest comment whore on this site with style.... |
| #2 Monty Pylon[87577] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
In the words of Mark4-"Holy Paragraph Batman!"
Those might help, as well as a btter game, grammer and other text related issues. I give it a 2-4 range with 2 being a low score and 4 being a chance in Hell. |
| #3 sum1[87580] |
| diverg.ozemail.com.au |
| that was pretty crap. find better games to observe, fix ur paragraphing and add some pics.... im sure ull do better next time ........ NOT! |
| #4 Ling-erie[87581] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
To make it a much better BR without changing too much, you should have:
A) read it before you posted it
B) previewed it (and thus seen the paragraph thing)
C) Described things more carefully
D) Picture of the map woulda helped.
I'd love to say it was good otherwise bu sadly it was a bit lame, more effort please, otherwise don't bother. |
| #5 [87582] |
| border.brownsburg.k12.in.us |
| Post it 2 more times? k thanx. |
| #6 +Mep+[87583] |
| user-2inilap.dialup.mindspring.com |
Hooo boy.
1. Use paragraphs.
2. Use better grammer {he ee 2 reavers entering a shuttles}
3. Try to shy away from slang, i.e. aint.
3. Take screenshots {press the print screen key.}
4. Learn html, you can find some hints and links in the reporting guide section of the site your visiting now.
5. Tell us starting positions, colors, and build orders of the players.
6. As ling said, give a picture of the map.
7. Find a better game.
8. Use color in the players names, the players names were so alike I couldn't keep track.
+Mep+ |
| #7 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[87587] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
Interesting . . . I believe this is your second work of royal crap?
*Simple might be a bit of an understatement.
I suggest you:
<b>
1. Use paragraphs. Try to divide your br into larger sections as well.
2. Use better grammer {he ee 2 reavers entering a shuttles}. Make your writing flow like a wombat drowning in the Amazon.
3. Try to shy away from slang, especially stupid hick slang, like ain't.
3. Take screenshots {press the print screen key.}
4. Learn html, you can find some hints and links in the reporting guide section of the site your visiting now. You can use this to color in the players names and stuff.
5. Tell us starting positions, colors, and build orders of the players. Duh.
6. As ling said, give a picture of the map. Although with Lost Temple you may want to think twice about that until you make your screenshots.
7. Find a better game.
8. Use color in the players names, the players names were so alike I couldn't keep track.
9. Make sexy collages.
10. And put in more than 30 minutes of effort.
11. Plus get a better name.
12. Oh and use better titles for crying out loud.
</b>
<font color=blue> The improved and updated version of +Mep+'s list =D |
| #8 iggy[87591] |
| intergate.spusd.k12.ca.us |
| I will beat. |
| #9 outsider[87613] |
| ACB721BC.ipt.aol.com |
god, ownage
oh wait, nevermind |
| #10 TeN[87645] |
| proxy.bssc.edu.au |
| Gay. |
#11  [87656] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-04-557.look.ca |
| being a rater isnt all sex and money :[ |
| #12 CaughtNaked[87660] |
| spider-mtc-tf071.proxy.aol.com |
wow, peice-o-sh*t. I know how it goes getting started on BR.com. Belive it or not ive posted my far share of total crap. Heres some tips ive learned the hard way.
A)PICTURES ARE A MUST
B)The preview button is your best friend
C)Know HTML before thinking about a report
D)Posting more than once only pisses ppl off
that should about cover it for now, heres some, basic HTML for your next report. Replace [ with < and > with ]
wait, your report sucked, and ive wasted nuff time.
2
t2yl,
~CN |
| #13 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[87782] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
5 or 6 is about average for a newbie post.
his first was a 2, his second a 3. That's just obscene. Unchristian. Immoral. |
| #14 ember147[88158] |
| cache-cro.cableinet.co.uk |
| bloody hell make ur mind up, was, is, what bloody tense is it, u suck at reporting, stick to reading other ppls ones, ans learn to spell while ur at it |
| #15 TandL[144062] |
| host-66-81-207-253.rev.o1.com |
| FUCK YOU All you asshole bitches, 4177 rox. fux u all ahahhaahahahahahahah gogogogogoggogogog |
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