"...the eight probe drop is a highly effective technique, and I recommend it to everyone who plays YRM =]."
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| #1 Kepow'Ob[94534] | | ch5blm.bellglobal.com | | Hope you guys like it, and sorry that its on BGH and all that, but well, wasnt much I could do about it. | | #2 )Seizure([94535] | | spider-wa041.proxy.aol.com | | heh good, a real BR of SC/BW. Pretty good, although i do prefer BW ^^. And BGH is ok for FFAs imo:o | | #3 Franklin James[94536] | | spider-tl054.proxy.aol.com | | Third, I'm sexy | | #4 the()vermind[94537] | | AC899110.ipt.aol.com | | gentelmen, don't go flaming this guy. But I'm suddenly glad I didn't release my br earlier today. Anyways, about the report. The graphics had a real testosterone flair to them (if you don't have photoshop i'll eat my modem) However, the humor element that should of been used with 2 people allying against one person, and then the observer assisting the 1 person, just wasn't there. And thus, the br itself was not the type of thing you expect here. The br's format, pictures, colors, were all very good. I reccomend br'ing games found in channel nohunters, you show enough promise that it would be advisable to continue making br's. Range, 6-9, Probably a 7 or an 8 | | #5 Eradicate~Me[94541] | | pa-millscreek2a-240.buf.adelphia.net | | wtf is up with bgh all of the sudden? | #6  [94543] | | barry-asy-76.rutgers.edu | nice grafx dude, good reporting but it seemed the layout had too much spacing or something. nice 1st report
| | #7 derek[94545] | | ACAB457A.ipt.aol.com | 7 1/2
Great first report | | #8 derek[94547] | | ACAB457A.ipt.aol.com | | fuck that..i dont care if this was bgh w/semi newbs...this BR deserves a 9 | | #9 unVytae[94548] | | px2ht.ok.shawcable.net | Those were some very slack ass players that should be shot,your normal BGH bait. And that is a very overplayed slack ass map. And the game was slow and had no action.
But the pictures were VERY pretty and if the lettering was hard to read,was still a cool blood splattered font. Id say 6-7. | | #10 testosterone[94553] | | mkc-65-28-57-231.kc.rr.com | | photoshop 6.0??? ;) GOGOG PHOTOSHOP BROTHER, now to read | | #11 ground-LOBP-[94554] | | syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com | Cool br. I didn't like the choice of game (a backstab) especially with no humor, but if that was the point you were trying to get across, so be it. I'd say a 7, maybe 7.5. One minor nitpicky thing: the names (green, brown, and lavender) did not go well with a red font. Made me queasy. Again, since the red font was what you wanted, it can't really be helped. Otherwise, nice.
gw | | #12 Kepow'Ob[94564] | | ch5blm.bellglobal.com | Thanks for all the positive input guys, it's greatly apretiated. I'll try and get a better game, but I wanted to BR a game, and I knew some people who were going to play in a ffa, so I figured why not.
Yea it's photoshop 6.0 :)
I know, with this senario, I should have thrown in some funny stuff, but I am not the witty person :(.
I'll do my best to find a more fun to read game next time.
| | #13 Kepow'Ob[94566] | | ch5blm.bellglobal.com | | One other thing, the funky spacing, thats because I was using frontpage, and it was messing everything up for me. I had tons of problems before I posted it, but now I have a half decent HTML editor, so next report, everything should be fine. | | #14 [SM]Strega~F[94567] | | proxy8.senet.com.au | Yeah, that spacing was pretty warped. I would say that this deserves a gold rating, except you mis-spelt nearly every version of to/too/two which just pissed me off. By mis-spelt I mean that you used the wrong word. Other than the spelling and the spacing, this was a great report.
The whole BGH issue didn't crop up in the map that much, except people didn't expand as much as you would like to see. Oh yeah, you say you reported a WarII game under a different name? Minus 1 point for abandoning your record =(
I kept in there with my first 3 reports getting 3,4,4 so why can't you? Meh, minor detail. Good work, try to control those spacing problems and also use a spell-checker/grammar checking program. Keep it up apart from this,
Strega | | #15 lawrusik[94568] | | HSE-Montreal-ppp131793.qc.sympatico.ca | | "very slack ass players "? come on man give me a break, that was my first game in almost a year. i thought i did pretty good for a two on one. first off, i learned never go in a ffa in melee. and never let people, now matter how bad the person is, left to their own devices for the entire game. hopefully ill be able to redeem myself in kepowobs next BR | | #16 Kepow'Ob[94569] | | ch5blm.bellglobal.com | I guess I should have re-read it cause I didn't notice, normally I am carful with that sort of thing too, sorry :(. The reason I get changed handles is because my net name changed, I used to use JediMan84, and now use Kepow'Ob or, as a nick for that kerPOW (also my b.net name).
The spacing problem and large pictures will be fixed for my next BR, which will hopefully be done next weekend (if I can find a game). | | #17 Kepow'Ob[94570] | | ch5blm.bellglobal.com | I guess I should have re-read it cause I didn't notice, normally I am carful with that sort of thing too, sorry :(. The reason I get changed handles is because my net name changed, I used to use JediMan84, and now use Kepow'Ob or, as a nick for that kerPOW (also my b.net name).
The spacing problem and large pictures will be fixed for my next BR, which will hopefully be done next weekend (if I can find a game). | | #18 ground-LOBP-[94571] | | syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com | | p.s. lotta misspellings, i.e. 'suken', 'bald face lying' (should be 'bald-faced'), 'lawrusik takes intuitive' (should be 'initiative'); also, which was the correct spelling of carrijan's name as you used 2 spellings through the br, carrijan and carrijen. | | #19 livingexception[94576] | | spider-tp011.proxy.aol.com | Hrm...you are a veyr pretty picture man, but this was more hollow than Alicia Silverstone's head. After the AC incident, everyone oculds tell how this would turn out. Also, like Overmind and others said, you didn't milk the backstabbedness of it. Lawrusik may not have gone very crazy, but you need to make that stand out. Also, it was on BGH, and you didn't insult the map. For games which *end up like these, you really needa go Jim Carey on them. Look for better games and I'm sure you'll be making better scores. Till then...
6, and that mostly cause you're a photoshoip wizard.
LE | | #20 [1]=)[94588] | | proxy2.cvgs.net | not bad not bad at all...
at least it had some pics unlike some chobo wirtes we know
nice 1st BR | | #21 Blurred[94589] | | 208-235-145-051.cdi.jadeinc.net | KallBroadfist just sat in his base making as many tanks as he could, expanded to the 7 o'clock position, and made a robotics facility, started making some dropships. Once one dropship was done, he sent it to Carrijan's base with 4 zealots, then, knowing he could easily drop, did it again with 4 reavers.
ummm, wtf? | | #22 Kepow'Ob[94591] | | ch5blm.bellglobal.com | Sheit, don't know how that happened, thanks for pointing that out Blurred. Next time I am going to re-read the report a day after I finnish it, not right away.
To many mistakes in this report I didn't pick up, and I'm starting to be angry at myself for all of them since I should have picked them all up, since a lot of them are rather big mistakes.
Anyway, thanks for the comments still, it'll just make sure I pay a lot more attention to everything next time around. | #23  [94609] | | user94.net128.va.sprint-hsd.net | hmm i really dont know how to rate this... sounds to me like a bunch of bgh turtling newbs :[ my advice to you is simply to get a better game...
the pics were godly but the game was VERY sub par and the writing was littered with bad grammar etc and it wasnt very gripping...
im gonna give this a 6, but kepow'ob please dont let this discourage you. you look promising, all you need to do is get a better game and proofread your writing and you could have had an 8++
| | #24 iggy[94744] | | intergate.spusd.k12.ca.us | u = sux
| | #25 mojo[94752] | | HSE-Montreal-ppp127984.qc.sympatico.ca | | iggy's a moron | | #26 the()vermind[94756] | | tcache-we01.proxy.aol.com | | go two dr raters. | | #27 ground-LOBP-[94772] | | syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com | | DrA has rater tag | | #28 Ling-erie[94796] | | igw-se.astra.com | Brilliant pictures, well made and presented, sadly the REALLY naff game ruined it for you =[
Anyway, if u can proof-read your work before submitting it, and try to save your obvious talent for a good game, then you'll do miles better.
I think 6 was fair........ 8 for the layout, 4 for the game. | | #29 Grytviken[94849] | | HSE-Montreal-ppp139021.sympatico.ca | I give three cheers to the format of the report itself. Despite a horribly tame game (tepid players, I'll explain later) and bad grammar, the report is still able to maintain a certain edge that enables us to reach the end.
The contestants
-Lawrusik/the man: fell in love with toss 1.8 years ago, known offensive tactics include mass dragoons, Micro DTs, and reaver drops. Then again... those are his only tactics. Still, look out cause he doesn't forget to upgrade. And while he's never made a stargate in his life (god forbid resorting to newbie tactics such as disruption web and recall), he's famous for covering the map with a web of observers, given the chance. He is a very covert and upfront attacker and seldom has any defense.
Carrijan/the girl: Well I've never a serious SC game against her, let's just say her $|<177$ aren't as lame as when she plays quake3, but let's not go overboard. From what I've seen [/me just hiccuped and swallowed a dustball, yech!!!] she is a slow builder and relies heavily on allies for initial defense (since she hasn't mastered zerg harvesting 101 most likely). Attacks most likely consist of un-upgraded hydralisks followed up by mass lurkers (lets not forget the mass sunkens) and soon enough, guardians... lotsa guardians. These are just assumptions mind you.
That other dude/the girlfriend (oups, I think I meant "the girl's friend"... wait, no I didn't)
:Hard to make a clear distinction, either he's making goliaths for the sake of experimentation (cause mechs HAVE to be strong.. right?) wich would mean complete newbieizm.(I'm sure the vultures were there somewhere) Or he simply believes a well balanced force can dominate (kinda iffy since he used no special skills and turtled like a madman, but I'll give him the benefit of the doubt)
So to this end I volounteer myself to your next BR, I'll take on anyone. I don't care wether I win or lose, but I guaranty a good game, and a damn good read!
Hmmmm it's 3:am, I may, or may NOT be in school tomorow. Tell Juju he has to write an essay on euthanasia for english(rough, and no word min/max). If they ask where I am, tell them I'm selling crack in downtown Montreal and that's the reason I miss 1/2 days.
| | #30 W346noi[94865] | | ppp191.c5300-1.day-oh.siscom.net | | ARE YOU AN ANYWAYS | | #31 Supercod[94870] | | 63-224-58-30.customers.uswest.net | Good BR, as in excellent imaging, decent text.
Uh, problem was, people who you br'ed sucked horribly. (I'm going to build 4 depots before anything else, please no rush)... Roflmao :D Also, why didnt Ms. Zerg have mutalisks? This also would have merited higher if it was played on a non-money map.
I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future, as long as you're not BRing newbie games on newbie maps...
Supercod |
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