| #1 Ling-erie[103573] |
| proxy1.leeds.ac.uk |
LAST"!!!!!!!
no-one comment after me... gg |
| #2 Squad[103577] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
| gay ling. gg no re. |
| #3 Patton1944[103582] |
| spider-wn034.proxy.aol.com |
| BattleReports.com: Home of 101 crappy fanfics |
| #4 Psyonic_Reaver[103586] |
| dialup-64.159.115.3.Dial1.Portland1.Level3.net |
FU Patton.
I found this to be a VERY good fan fic. Better then what most at this site can produce. You kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. NICE JOB. If the raters give you a '5' just because its "A fanfic" continue to write and fuck them.
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| #5 astante[103593] |
| proxy.westbelt.calltech.com |
| no doubt. this is a damn fine fic. |
| #6 stonecoldnewbie[103595] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
| i dont have 6 hours to sit down and read all this, so i think ill just go with the ever so popular "go away fan fics" |
| #7 Nuggin[103596] |
| spider-mtc-ti042.proxy.aol.com |
| Uhhhhhhhhhhh.............. it was good and detailed.But it was also really wierd.Other then that it was good and I think you should keep on writing. |
| #8 BigD[103597] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| Didn't have time to read it all, looks really well written though. Different from most of them because it actually tries to look good, it's not just text (it's text that someone actually tried to format). |
| #9 Bloodgod[103600] |
| 202.197.252.64.snet.net |
| Well, I liked it. The beginning was a little... confusing, maybe, but for the most part it was a great story. Reminds me of a custom map I never finished making. |
| #10 |||l||||ll|||||[103604] |
| cdm-66-6-177-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| fuck not another fanfic im not reading |
| #11 [SM]Strega~F[103609] |
| proxy1.senet.com.au |
Very good fanfic, I must say. I don't get the last part though - the thing that killed them all was a dead scientist? Hmm, I just didn't like that ending seeing as how the rest of the fanfic was of a sci-fi nature, whilst the end was of a supernatural nature.
Crossed wires = makes my head hurt.
Strega |
| #12 Spuzz[103610] |
| di200.opencominc.com |
Man, this was a creepy story...
I can't wait to find out what happens! :O
Spuzz |
| #13 kidonfire[103615] |
| 202.188.200.78 |
First fan fic from other than phoneix chronicles and some other ones that are actually good. my
nescape (ie got screwed somehow... content advisor missing info) crashed, and i actually went
back to read it... i never do that. non stop andreniline rush :) high grade report, from some of the
crappy ones recently posted (nescape cant read the strifeshadow one somehow... nescape sux0r) |
| #14 Vasoric[103621] |
| dialup-204.42.28.130.bwsys.net |
After hearing all the bad comments about fanfics, I think I might just possibly be one of the only few people who look forward to reading fanfics. I think it is a great idea to turn our favorite game into a story filled with many starcraft related ideas. Now out of all the fanfics I have read, I would definately say yours was the best. It was detailed, i was always into it, and my favorite; it wasnt too damn short. Well, yours was damn good, and I think you should continue to write fanfics. Who gives a shit what people say about fanfics being dumb. Just remember there are a few of us who enjoy those "dumb" reports. Good job,
Vasoric |
| #15 TerranNavel[103626] |
| h002078d395d4.ne.mediaone.net |
Loved this.
8-9
Proffessional grade... Alot better than that Starcraft book that's out, Liberty's Crusade. |
| #16 ZerG~LinG[103635] |
| p414-018.ppp.get2net.dk |
very very good.
too bad it was soo long, i think it scared some ppl away from this fine read |
| #17 Mep[103644] |
| A040-0584.PHL2.splitrock.net |
Wow. Gosu. Gw.
Wow, a halfway decent fanfic.
Gw. |
| #18 Twip[103658] |
| dhcp065-024-133-099.columbus.rr.com |
| OMG nice!!! Write more! |
| #19 stonecoldnewbie[103693] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
| hi twip ^_~ |
| #20 Puppy[103730] |
| spider-wo082.proxy.aol.com |
| I liked it, very good fan fic. But, maybe next time, dont make it one really long chapter. I have a head ache now. Other than that, it was great. ^_^ |
| #21 Squad[103736] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
| that was a GREAT read. pure adrenaline. my heart was really going there. freaky. write more. excuse me now, cuz i have to go write a report for school. =( |
| #22 Sig.[103738] |
| host-216-77-212-65.fll.bellsouth.net |
| WoW. Holy crap.. This fanfic had me actually so scared i turned my fuking light on. lol.. damn fine work man.. finish the story i cant WAIT to see what happens next....Plz finish the story.. and for all you jackasses who say this fanfic sucks, you can suck my dick. This fanfic>>>Your life. write more plz. this is GREAT! |
| #23 [SM]Strega~F[103742] |
| proxy2.senet.com.au |
Ok Puppy, listen and learn. If this were made into smaller parts it would suck incredibly, simply because the only logical end to it happened when it did. Ending it when, say, the lights go out might work in a made-for-TV movie, but those suck for a reason.
Don't mess with a good thing. Also, if you have a headache, save the story to Word or Works or something and print it out. Simple. Of course, that's assuming your head hurts because of the screen radiation. If it hurts because of too much reading then I suggest you go look at some "Purtyyy" pictures so you don't need to think.
Strega |
| #24 Twip[103744] |
| dhcp065-024-133-099.columbus.rr.com |
Author: Thelyos
IP: h002078cXXXX
*points up at his address*
gg stonecoldnewbie |
| #25 stonecoldnewbie[103748] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
hey
i care ;o |
| #26 Puppy[103765] |
| spider-tl042.proxy.aol.com |
| Ok Strega thank you for your input. My head is now filled with knowledge, thank you o wise one. ^_^ |
| #27 Thelyos[103776] |
| h002078cb09e1.ne.mediaone.net |
| I'm glad who read it liked it. I've started work on chapter two, not sure exactly when it's going to be done. Thanks for the positive feedback. |
| #28 INIMINYMINYMOE[104225] |
| 193.10.32.5 |
| You seem to have a gift for writing, don´t waste it... |