| #1 BigD[106420] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| First is mine! |
| #2 Furious[106421] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
Yes it is with 4 minutes to spair on my wait for 20 minutes rule.
So what did you all think, ive tried changing my graphical style abit and hopefully its for the better. Ive also put more detail into the battles and tried to include abit of tactical depth as well, feed back is appreciated as always!! |
| #3 BigD[106422] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
This was very good, minor grammar problems, and one math mistake (12+3 is 15, last I checked), but nothing to keep this from a good rating. I wish there were more non-LT reports, but that's nitpicking and personal preference.
8.5 |
| #4 Furious[106423] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
I wish they was too but most of my gosu friends are pretty much LT players.....i should bully them into playing dif maps :)
i cant be too picky though as they are letting my BR their games! |
| #5 ZerG~LinG[106424] |
| 212.237.49.50 |
2nd non author.
7 |
| #6 RubiksCube[106425] |
| cache2.shlink.de |
Nice. Pictures were well done, the end seemed a bit shortened though.
7 |
| #7 l)arK.napE[106426] |
| spider-syd-aa042.proxy.aol.com |
Very good.
Was a great improvment of ur last 1. Keep it up.
8.5
I have already seen the replay of it, it is at scu, so i was curious as to how well u did the br on it. |
| #8 Me[106427] |
| sdcax54-022.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
nice
8.8 |
| #9 Furious[106428] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| That extra .8 is what its all about =] |
| #10 aseq[106431] |
| eagle.ksa.fnt.hvu.nl |
| I'd give it an 8 as well..., only 3d renders will get you above 9 :]. Very good report, narrated with enthousiasm, not sarcasm. Don't overdo the exclamation marks. Maybe a minimap update? All in all, great job.. |
| #11 Furious[106432] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| Well unless someone can tell me how to do 3d renders with Photoshop that aint gonna happen = |
| #12 TelferProject[106434] |
| sdn-ar-003kylouiP296.dialsprint.net |
Read previous posts for what I think.
Also, nice different colored borders. I oohed and ahhed for a bit.
8 |
| #13 Ezikel[106436] |
| 212.219.117.188 |
| Nicely done fury... well we know how the battle reporter of SLR is... better than the last one... Great job |
| #14 RubiksCube[106437] |
| cache2.shlink.de |
| You dont need 3d rendering to get a 9. Look at |]agomars report for example. Just make it intense and make the writing good. (Or be Canadian, thats the best excuse for bad writing skills, again |]aggy for example ;)) |
| #15 GoZuLu[106442] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Quite nice, classic BR.
Keep it up.
GoZuLu - TheOldDane |
| #16 Furious[106444] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| Well Im australian does that make up for it partially?? |
| #17 l)arK.napE[106447] |
| spider-syd-aa014.proxy.aol.com |
The different coloured bordes really did make it look nce, a big improvment on the pics.
And yeah, a mini map update from time 2 time would be nice. |
| #18 RubiksCube[106449] |
| cache2.shlink.de |
| No, being Australian does NOT make up for it. Strega is Australian, too. |
| #19 Dragonsven[106450] |
| 170.158.87.245 |
Only Strega's reports are cool. Sorry Furious...you lose to his lesbians. Haha. Nice report. 7-8.
-Dsven |
| #20 ZerG~LinG[106455] |
| p406-011.ppp.get2net.dk |
Just a few comments here: I dont think the writing is all too good, the paragraphs are a bit short for my liking and im fucking tired of your exclamation marks!!!!!!!!! <-lame
they're everywhere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dont think u have to but one at the end of every other line.
I disagree with the 7, but wtf the cool start gif made up for it =]
Aussies are cute.
-Z~LinG
ps:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| #21 Sovereignty[106457] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
Strega's lesbians > all :)
And I agree with zerg~ling. the !!! at the end of every sentence kinda annoyed the hell out of me. It detracted from the writing quite a bit. Also a few grammar errors here and there, blah blah blah. The graphics were pretty good. I would've liked to see a minimap update from time to time. I only remember seeing 1 in the whole report. The rest of the game had pretty good detail, except the end. |
| #22 Ling-erie[106463] |
| host62-7-23-46.btinternet.com |
guess what i;m going to say....:
8? wtf? gay |
| #23 Arsenic[106478] |
| sdn-ar-003nmalbuP307.dialsprint.net |
pretty good report. not so many ! next time plz. also the beginning detail was good. you wrote it in sort of a biased opinion, and all i got was how good Deez was, but a good report none the less.
7 |
| #24 Furious[106482] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
Well I actually never noticed the ! marks when I was typing it up, but now that you mention it I get your point...ill fix that up next time!
Thankx to whoever gave me the 8 w00t!!!!!!! |
| #25 |||l||||ll|||||[106504] |
| cdm-66-6-159-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| horrible bold text, halp meh |
| #26 [SM]Strega~F[106505] |
| proxy1.senet.com.au |
Hmm, for some reason I just couldn't get through this report. The exclamation points were really the only thing I noticed, due to my being tired and all, so I won't pass judgement on this... yet.
When I get around to reading it, it sounds like it's good, so I hope I'll enjoy it.
And yes ZerG~LinG, Aussies are sexy. =)
Strega |
| #27 Furious[106506] |
| bal-ts3-2500.tpgi.com.au |
the reason for the horrible bold text is that you are using netscape, try it on IE and the print will be fine.
WOOH AUSSIES ARE SEXY!! |
| #28 Mith[106509] |
| TMPC35.tm.tue.nl |
i use ie and have bold txt also...
exclamation marks at the end of every 2 lined paragraph suxx~
also, this seemed like a one sided game to me..
6
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| #29 ThanatoZ[106565] |
| hdslppp225.spkn.uswest.net |
More detail is needed for the battles, all I was really getting was "Deez attack, Danny won. Danny attacks back, but Deez held him off" etc. The exclamation marks were SOOOOOOO annoying. It was incredibly distracting, by the end I was just looking to see if you ended every paragraph with them... Ugh.
Not too bad overall, good graphics, text needs work.
6.5 |
| #30 EthErealBloo[106578] |
| nic-118-c8-60.mn.mediaone.net |
| very bloo =) |
| #31 Crunchymaker[106691] |
| 209.232.145.10 |
| Coo Shit |
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