| #1 fONDLE MY ZINGER[113589] |
| mkc-65-26-24-145.kc.rr.com |
| Had no time to format name..first |
| #2 Fondle My Zinger[113592] |
| mkc-65-26-24-145.kc.rr.com |
| Sweet jesus, it's been 2 hours since I posted, and I'm still the only one? |
| #3 Adrenaling[113594] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| hello |
| #4 Amoeba_Boy[113595] |
| spider-tp063.proxy.aol.com |
| I really don't want to hear any bitching about how there are too many fanfics |
| #5 CrackHeadJeb[113598] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
haha, I read this thing thinking it was going to be a parody. For some reason, a synapse in the brain misfired and I read the title as 'Not Another Fan Fic'. Now that would've been cool, though I think Dref did something like that. At any rate, uh, I guess this is average. Average length, average quality... average.
-CHJ |
| #6 Sexy^Orangutang[113599] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
Amoeba boy saved you from the wrath of my flame
bitch |
| #7 zerg_aliance[113600] |
| spider-mtc-ta081.proxy.aol.com |
| yo u stated in the end that the science vessel's shields were failing, TERRANS HAVE NO FUKING SHIELDS! |
| #8 ch(eh)ought(ic)[113601] |
| cache570.dist.maricopa.edu |
| I dont care if sci vessels do or do not have sheilds. It is refreshing to see that this author does not adhear to the idiocy of keeping to the regs... I give this story a potential 8/10 |
#9  [113609] |
| St-Catherines-ppp126444.sympatico.ca |
there are too many fanfics.
As CHJ said, very average. You show only decent building of suspense in this piece, with some fairly awkward writing . . . but overall a rather good effort. For me, the mark for an average fanfic is about 6 . . . so, gj. |
| #10 hi`[113615] |
| c-24-245-64-22.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| hi |
| #11 triped[113623] |
| 63.85.132.17 |
Amoeba_Boy, you cannot stop me.
This guy must know that I dislike his crap.
So now he does. |
| #12 Amoeba_Boy[113633] |
| spider-mtc-tb032.proxy.aol.com |
Let me try to stop you again
Stop.....
...please?? |
| #13 Redempt[113661] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| Sorry that you dont like my fan fic, u dont have to read it. |
| #14 IcE-Inforcer[113667] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
Umm.. not very original... storyline wasnt bad... 4-5
"planet Lost Temple"
Haha...
What would be good would be a fan fic sections and a br section. But hey, thats up to mark, hes gotta do all the work. |
| #15 Cy[113670] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| it was pretty good |
| #16 reaqu[113672] |
| 66-44-7-241.s2019.apx1.lnh.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| i would say something alot worse but ameoba boy said i couldnt >=( so ill leave it as "fanfics suck" |
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